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- Wed Apr 17, 2013 8:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
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Chapter 32 - Endorphins (part 2)
Previous | Part 1 |Next Chapter _______________________________________________________________ “Hello to you too,” she says with a laugh, reaching up to adjust her oval-framed glasses. Throwing up a nervous hand in a stilted wave, I shift on my feet and clear my throat. “Er, hi, Mom,” I say in a m...
- Wed Apr 17, 2013 8:49 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Chapter 32 - Endorphins (part 1)
Okay, so apparently I still have some fast writing in me where this tale is concerned, and this chapter is proof. After taking a couple days break following the previous chapter's release, I managed to crack this one out over the course of three days, and I've just been fine-tuning it since Monday ...
- Sun Apr 14, 2013 1:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/11/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)
My theory about erotic literature is if you're good at it and need some money, at least you have a fallback position :). Kinda like summer construction work. Perhaps, but I don't think I'm any good at it, and the whole messy idea just makes me cringe. Also, I feel like I'm playing to the lowest com...
- Fri Apr 12, 2013 3:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/11/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)
Personally, I'd prefer option one, and could have saved myself a lot of work by doing that, but there's an imperative about H-scenes around here,... Really? So far I've gotten away fine with not writing any h-scenes and I intend to continune without doing so. Just looking at the other pseudo-routes...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 9:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/11/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)
I think that might have been the funniest sex scene I've ever read. Funniest in the bad way, I mean. I get that you tried to subvert the whole "just throw member, shaft, head in there a few times" but I think that might have been the most pedantic sex scene in anything ever. The whole thing reeks o...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 3:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/11/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)
What I found more surprising was the combination of "misses" and "sama." Using both seems a bit redundant. The exact way honorifics are supposed to work escapes me. Honestly, though, Hisao is probably nervous and overcompensating--using both to try and sound extra humble, if that makes sense. I've ...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 12:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/11/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)
Finally! The sexy time! I can't wait to post about this. AT LAST! It's been a long time coming (mind the pun... and the mess). “they're reducing your vocabulary to purple prose.” Sounds like a meta-shot at someone. Or someones, as it may be. I wonder who. Not really, no. Honestly, it just fit the s...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 7:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Chapter 31 - Best Laid Plans (part 2) EXPLICIT!
NSFW warning continued from above. Previous | Part 1 | Next Chapter ____________________________________________________________ The disjointed thoughts are betrayed by a nervous wince on my face, but I don't think Hisao has noticed—his head is still planted against the mattress. As he lifts his hi...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 7:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369540
Chapter 31 - Best Laid Plans (part 1) EXPLICIT!
Obligatory explicit content warning: some content may not be suitable for minors or immature adults. Observe NSFW standards. There, now that I've basically just spoiled half the chapter, I'll go ahead and mention that writing this stuff is damned difficult and nerve-racking. It's a very long chapte...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 5:38 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What do you think Hanako's funeral will be like?
- Replies: 124
- Views: 30644
Re: What do you think Hanako's funeral will be like?
If only there was a way that I could communicate to the general public that I was deliberately not posting in this topic, that didn't involve posting in this topic. Well, the next best thing would be the button with the exclamation mark titled "Report this Post" SC seems to have taken notice withou...
- Thu Apr 11, 2013 2:18 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What do you think Hanako's funeral will be like?
- Replies: 124
- Views: 30644
Re: What do you think Hanako's funeral will be like?
Regardless of how ridiculously insensitive and morbid this thread may be Who am I being insensitive to? If Hanabros crumble under things as lightweight as this thread, I don't see how they could ever dream to handle the issues of Hanako Ikezawa... Thanks for spelling my name wrong, Katy. Go back to...
- Wed Apr 10, 2013 11:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Design your character!
- Replies: 126
- Views: 48689
Re: Design your character!
I'm considering changing Emma's name on the grounds that her personality has similarities to Emi's. The least I could do is give her a different-sounding name. But the thing is, it just seems like such an apt name for the character's emotional state and appearance. Does that make sense? As she exis...
- Wed Apr 10, 2013 9:32 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Does your favourite heroine reflect yourself?
- Replies: 113
- Views: 29072
Re: Does your favourite heroine reflect yourself?
Ever seen The Breakfast Club ? If not, stop being a jerk and go watch it somewhere. There's a speech at the end, a soliloquy spoken over the conclusion of the movie by the various cast member, that embodies the sense I got from KS--and any bit of fiction worth the page it's printed on, or pixels it ...
- Wed Apr 10, 2013 9:27 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What do you think Hanako's funeral will be like?
- Replies: 124
- Views: 30644
Re: What do you think Hanako's funeral will be like?
Regardless of how ridiculously insensitive and morbid this thread may be, I think the 'immortal' option is probably the most accurate. In a meta sense, Hanako is basically immortalized by the creators and fans of KS, so it's the most viable option. Still, what in the actual fuck were you thinking wh...
- Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hugs for Everyone! ... except you Shizune.
- Replies: 24
- Views: 12554
Re: Hugs for Everyone! ... except you Shizune.
Huh...Scissorlips wrote:...Someone told me the other day that people need about twelve hugs a day to get by properly...
I can't remember the last time I hugged anyone, or vice versa...