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by Helbereth
Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

Can I make a request:

Add some navigation to the parts (you can edit them in long after the fact). I wanted to come back and read this, but trying to find the actual story sections among the other responses is a real pain in the neck.
by Helbereth
Thu Apr 25, 2013 12:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/24/2013 (Chapter 33 posted)

Apparently I didn't... PM me, maybe? You wrote "thinks" instead of "things", if I understand Mirage right. That's what I get for reading comments before coffee... She's already mostly on the couch... I don't recall reading that. I had been under the impression they were standing. Amaya is slumped o...
by Helbereth
Thu Apr 25, 2013 9:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/24/2013 (Chapter 33 posted)

Not sure if you noticed what I was getting at... Apparently I didn't... PM me, maybe? It is a sort overreaction on both of their part, but for Aiko, she's not used to having the assistance, and her mom isn't completely sure how to react--they've only seen each other intermittently for the last thre...
by Helbereth
Thu Apr 25, 2013 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/24/2013 (Chapter 33 posted)

Another character introduced at this point in the story? Peculiar... I know right? I wonder what that means... ...and it's probably taking her longer to sort thinks out. Not sure if intentional... It may be some mild foreshadowing, but Amaya is the sort to convince herself of things like that, even...
by Helbereth
Thu Apr 25, 2013 12:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/24/2013 (Chapter 33 posted)

griffon8 wrote:Aiko's horrible actions with regard to Iwanako's letter.
I would like to point out that she merely suggested the action, Hisao actually put it to flame.
by Helbereth
Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Chapter 33 - Misconceptions (part 2)

Previous | Part 1 | Next Chapter _____________________________________________________________ When Yoko reemerges in her denim attire, I catch a wandering glance from Mom, and it's accompanied by a tilted smirk from Satoru. Their looks are unnerving, but I can guess what they mean: it's my turn. W...
by Helbereth
Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Chapter 33 - Misconceptions (part 1)

Happy Birthday to my mom! 04/24/2013 (no, I will not say how old she is today) A week hence, and here I return with another chapter. This one was roughed out inside a day, but has since been tightened and twisted, iterated upon and adjusted. I want to thank Hoitash and neio for checking on repeated...
by Helbereth
Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/17/2013 (Chapter 32 posted)

OT, this conversation is oddly relevant to Aiko and her need to start looking forward, rather then stewing in the pains of her past. Never really thought of it that way, but maybe it's accidental meta planning? There have been a few things I threw into the narrative that seemed irrelevant at the ti...
by Helbereth
Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/17/2013 (Chapter 32 posted)

...so if anyone's still holding a candle, it must be burning their hand. You have no idea^^° Just a few weeks ago, some people in Greece fielded the idea to sue Germany for additional war reparations to offset their huge national deficit... There has been a cultural war in America over slavery repa...
by Helbereth
Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:14 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538919

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

It always struck me as odd that nobody seemed to have computers. Maybe its because its an older school and they never bothered to fit the dorms with internet connections. Or they just want to discourage students from playing around on the net outside of school hours? You'd think at least Kenji woul...
by Helbereth
Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:04 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538919

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

It always struck me as odd that nobody seemed to have computers. Maybe its because its an older school and they never bothered to fit the dorms with internet connections. Or they just want to discourage students from playing around on the net outside of school hours? You'd think at least Kenji woul...
by Helbereth
Sun Apr 21, 2013 5:59 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538919

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

"Misha and Shizune were having an argument considering the amount of tables they need to use for the upcoming Tanabata festival." "Misha and Shizune are having an argument considering the number of tables they need to use for the upcoming Tanabata festival." Note: I prefer 'number' over 'amount' in...
by Helbereth
Sat Apr 20, 2013 7:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Chapter 32 - Endorphins (part 1)

Been reading this, and enjoying it a lot so far[snip] Welcome to the forums, or at least hello to a lurker-turned-member. Given this , the Japanese aren't very proud of the Kempeitai, and as such it's not something one would toss into a conversation casually like that, especially given that in Sing...
by Helbereth
Wed Apr 17, 2013 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/17/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)

neio wrote: Aha! A grammar debate!
The actual difference is subject vs object, but the simplest way to look at it is taking out the other person:
He sent it to me
He sent it to Helbereth and me.

I sent it to him
Helbereth and I sent it to him.
Mirage_GSM is correct.
Where were you 20 pages ago?
by Helbereth
Wed Apr 17, 2013 3:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 04/17/2013 (Chapter 31 posted)

my somewhat overzealous little sister.”6 I wonder where that 6 came from. Had to reformat every line break because I've been writing the whole thing with indents instead of line breaks for paragraphs since C.30. Evidently I hit an extra button when I was skimming through and didn't notice. Previous...