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by Helbereth
Wed May 08, 2013 9:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Chapter 35 - That's Amore (part 1) (mature themes)

Well, it's late, but that's hardly my fault... The board was down since yesterday afternoon, so the chapter I've had finished (basically) for the past week got delayed until evening. This one contains more mature and adult content, just as fair warning; most of that is in the second half, though. I...
by Helbereth
Mon May 06, 2013 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 64931

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 13 Now Up

Well, I said before I'd check this out when Scissorlips is done. Now that he's finished making up a story about a warm, fuzzy narcoleptic with awful nightmares who dreads her future, and I've had a little time to forget some things about his interpretation, I've decided to do just that. It works out...
by Helbereth
Sat May 04, 2013 5:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

Mirage_GSM wrote:I simply use the button "view unread posts" for that...
Stop with your damnable logic!

Also, what button...?
by Helbereth
Sat May 04, 2013 2:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332252

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Stuff I said before. Heh. Well, technically salinated pools are chlorinated, they're just cleaner since the chlorine self-recycles. And yeah, I intentionally kept it vague but that lifeguard is pretty much supposed to be Joyce. The only description that threw me is that of the floor tiles, but Aiko...
by Helbereth
Sat May 04, 2013 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332252

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

I'm reasonably certain you meant Alright . Apparently that's not actually a word. I looked it up and was very surprised. I'll just leave this here. It's a dialogue thing. diatribe on I narcissism Thanks, I hadn't realized I was doing that. I'll try to be more aware of that in the future. I'm guilty...
by Helbereth
Fri May 03, 2013 11:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332252

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Well, I started writing this post like three hours ago(then I took a nap), so perhaps some of the issues have been mentioned, but I'm not about to go changing things now. “All right,” he says, gesturing to the top of the paper. I'm reasonably certain you meant Alright . But, faced with a shortened l...
by Helbereth
Fri May 03, 2013 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

Well, the last two chapters were certainly... fashion centric... Still entertaining to read, though I hope you're done with describing dresses for a while ;-) Oh, well... there's still the night out so they'll get proper reiterations there, but, yeah... for now it's a shelved collection of characte...
by Helbereth
Fri May 03, 2013 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

Pro tip: Always use Incognito mode when doing "interesting" research. Not much to worry about, really... nobody but me uses this computer. Except my younger brother who occasionally uses it for an hour or two when his laptop decides to crap out during a visit, but I'm not terribly concerned with hi...
by Helbereth
Fri May 03, 2013 5:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

These are the kind of thoughts that would probably keep me out of the really good schools (if I ever decided to attend college). you're a deep thinker about completely random, and to many, inconsequential or inane matters. So the Humanities are definitely up your alley (history, literature, philoso...
by Helbereth
Thu May 02, 2013 12:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

after realizing her mom is somewhat affluent, and willing to doll out cash for her friends' clothes, she'd probably opt for a more sturdy, expensive solution. Ah yes, it's all coming back to me now. Certainly as valid a reason as any. Comfort may have been a factor as well; I imagine that came up i...
by Helbereth
Thu May 02, 2013 12:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

YES ANOTHER UPDATE! My life is complete ;) Pardon me as I question your life goals if my story updates are that fulfilling, but to each their own. The random comments, honestly, make doing this feel less like work (though admittedly, I really have enjoyed working on this thing). When I saw that you...
by Helbereth
Thu May 02, 2013 1:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

One quick possible error: "intending get some advice" I think it should be "intending to get some advice". Fixed. I haven't posted on this subforum before but I really am enjoying this so far, and was quite excited when I saw an update had been posted. Well, I'm glad you're here; I'm not picky abou...
by Helbereth
Wed May 01, 2013 11:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Chapter 34 - Mom's the Word (part 2)

Previous | Part 1 | Next Chapter __________________________________________________________________________________ “Try not to make this more difficult~!” she jokes, poking my shoulder roughly, “And anyway, I'm not delusional enough to think I can stop you! Always so bull-headed and stubborn—just ...
by Helbereth
Wed May 01, 2013 11:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369539

Chapter 34 - Mom's the Word (part 1)

Well, I'm posting this a little late in the day, but my desire to strive for perfection often leads me to extended editing sessions. Originally this chapter was coupled with the events in the following chapter, but when that monster reached 18k words, and still didn't communicate everything I had p...
by Helbereth
Wed May 01, 2013 3:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

Actually, I like reading the comments along with the story. It's one of the charms of reading fanfiction here on the forums ;-) Right, but navigation allows you to come back to a story thread and find the last part you already perused without having to scan through umpteen pages of comments, hoping...