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Has there really been no posts since 11 AM? I was sure there'd be a bunch more by the time I managed to get home from Uni and type all this up. Anyway, here goes... Wednesday is a really slow day for releasing anything, I've noticed. I probably shouldn't sugar-coat it... “Back in February, he recei...

Hoitash wrote:The auto cleaner function broken, or just unreliable?

The cook-top part, I mean. Gas burners, cast-iron grates, etc..

Previous | Part 1 | Next Chapter ________________________________________________________ While nibbling at her salad, she thankfully avoids any disturbing subjects—things that might make me spit out my lunch. Instead she comments on the nice weather, and recalls that she heard about the possibilit...

So, I almost forgot today is Wednesday, and I spent the morning cleaning the oven (it was in a very sorry state after over a month of neglect), and didn't realize until three in the afternoon that I'm supposed to release a chapter today. Then I had to set up the posts, adjust my formatting for the ...

Let's see, I sort of missed the Hanako part somehow... I literally had no idea there was a new part added until this morning--which is this Hisao one. Anywho, I didn't find any glaring problems with the Hanako bit (I'm guessing some of the ones mentioned in later comments got ironed out in edits), a...

Then someone else would use it to mean 'large', 'extreme', or something along those lines. I've never heard anyone use it that way. 1. distressing; severe : a terrible winter. 2. extremely bad; horrible: terrible coffee; a terrible movie. 3. exciting terror, awe, or great fear; dreadful; awful. 4. ...

While I generally agree with you, I don't think "enormous" is a good example, since here, the neutral use is the more common one. enormous 1. (obsolete) Deviating from the norm; unusual, extraordinary. 2. (obsolete) Exceedingly wicked; atrocious or outrageous. 3. Extremely large; greatly exceeding ...

I'm not trying to seem like the "what are you going to do about it" kind of person, but how would you legally enforce that? Wasn't a major reason for KS not being sold at a premium due to the people working on the project (you included) being so widespread across the planet? Do you just enforce a c...

but fuck I assure you, there is no butt-fucking going on in this chapter. literary optical illusion So, Textual Inception ? vivid writing style What worries me is whether that vivid detail loses its consistency somehow, or if the love scenes simply stand out because of the subject matter; at some p...

I see. I think doing it that way is being unnecessarily clever for the story's own good, but maybe it's just me. I've encountered problems like this with my story as well, and I think it's just a matter of working with the perspective as it should be. As it's written in real-time, and through the c...

I should warn there's some moderate explicit content,... You really call this "moderate?" It doesn't go into much detail is what I meant by moderate. There's no full-on love scene described here, except as recaps, which I don't think qualify as being predominately explicit. The only reason it might...

Infer Perhaps he does, but that's not something that Aiko would be explicitly privy to; I was objecting more to its use as a speech tag. One is not inferring when he is talking; one talks about what he infers. I moved the speech tag to where the double-hyphen was, thus placing it after the inferenc...

empirical data I feel like this phrase is becoming overused. Perhaps consider some synonyms. It's a euphemism she uses for sex, one she's rather fond of due to Hisao's frequent use. Other words and phrases have popped up in its place, like liaisons, evening rendezvous, hiding the dolphin, and some ...

The reason I've been writing is so when that dark cynical voice comes and asks me what I've ever followed through on, I can reply with confidence "I finished writing a full-length cripple porn fanfiction!" Well, fuck. Here comes the competition. I knew it was too good to last. :mrgreen: I sort of o...

Another good chapter! Seeing how comfortable Aiko and Hisao are with each other, i think that she'll tell him the big secret soon. I'd like to say that this as a good thing, but there's that evil thought in my head that says it might end badly for them. If this is the bad end, you've got a way with...