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I don't really have a problem with the fact that it turns out this whole interlude was comprised of Kenji's unrestrained ravings, though it would have been less of a headache had you introduced that fact in the first place. Instead, you let it flow as though it merely continued the misadventures of ...

could mean a quick and painful deaf

Your supreme being of choice help me, the poor bastard really did need me. Broke the fourth wall. Well, he is writing for an audience :wink:. Also, since I've written Hisao as a bit of an agnostic, I couldn't decide to put "God help me if he existed," or "Spirits help me if they were paying attenti...

I could have ended with “what could possibly go wrong?” but that would just be insulting, and Kenji’s way too Genre Savvy to Tempt Fate like that. Kenji couldn't get away with it, I agree; he's not one to tempt fate in such a way. However, Hisao could say it sarcastically, or, in this case, ironica...

This is just awful! I can't believe how inaccurate and violently improper this entire chapter has been! What were you even thinking when you wrote this trash!? Are you high, delirious, senile, or just stupid!? There's absolutely nothing of redeeming value here, and you should feel bad about yourself...

As this is something of a rarity, I should probably mention that I'm likely to miss my usual Wednesday release. Upon reviewing the latest chapter, late on Monday, I decided it got all the points I wanted, except for a few, but I hated how it got there... if that makes sense? Thus in a scramble to re...

I sent a PM with a series of unfortunate suggestions. Overall, it's not bad. Someone else commented that your sentence structure is a little jarring and needs some finesse, plus you need to be mindful of how an established character reacts to stimulus versus one of your own creations. Your vocabular...

Somehow I get the impression that you have a different picture of a "coverall" in your mind than I do... I assumed he meant 'overalls', given the following description. It might be more clear to actually call them overalls if that's the case, though. eye feels moist and the vision from the eye is a...

My eyes wander around my small and mostly undecorated room hoping that there would be something that catches my attention. Some small spark of an idea that would give me something to do. The second sentence here seems more like a fragment, and you could probably roll it into the previous sentence b...

Well, it's only name, date and place of birth, nationality, adress, height, eye colour and the issuing authority - no biometrics so far ;-) But considering it is meant to identify it's holder, that's to be expected. Fun fact: you must not smile on the photo :lol: Weird... if you're not supposed to ...

Did a bit of what I'm euphemistically calling research. Here's what I was talking about: Personal Identification Seems Japan doesn't have them in that form either, so forget I said anything. Considering the amount of information on German IDs, I can understand why you'd think that would be an issue...

Might I suggest a way to relieve some of the butthurt?

Don't you have those in the US? Nope. No singular form of ID here contains every bit of personal information--nothing we carry around, anyway. Typically, the ID we carry around is either a state issued card, or a driver's license with the same information (they're similarly designed) and you don't ...

So, I'll again register my objection to Hisao's past being a wrapper for the answer of the question. It can't be helped if you feel differently, though. She's eliminating further questions by relating the surrounding story. Instead of just saying Hisao has arrhythmia, then fielding a series of ques...

Not a big fan of cleaning in general really, so naturally I'm constantly applying for custodial positions. Reminds me of why I never bothered looking for jobs with lawn companies and such. After mowing lawns for work, who the hell wants to mow their own lawn? This is sort of the same thing backward...