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by Helbereth
Mon Jun 10, 2013 1:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390647

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

Before I can react, she grabs me by the shoulders, spins me around, and pushes me back into the smaller room, closing the door behind me. She’s nowhere to be seen when I come back out, having changed back into my original clothes. I imagine the others might be finished by now, so I try to find the ...
by Helbereth
Mon Jun 10, 2013 1:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390647

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

Kurara wrote:Uh, I was under the impression that the box contains the clothing item that she bought for him.
Yes, but what? She disappeared while he changed out of the sweater-vest, and we're never told what's actually in the box.
by Helbereth
Mon Jun 10, 2013 12:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390647

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

This was posted more than two weeks ago by my count, but I didn't read it until just now. I sent a PM with a couple little hiccups that annoyed me, but they're minor problems. Why aren't we ever told what's in the box Aoi gave Hisao? I understand his hesitance noit to tell Misha, but it seems he doe...
by Helbereth
Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482562

Re: Ask!

Shizune's act 4 is titled "To my other self" and based on the plot I thought "other self" was supposed to be Misha, but the cover art for the act has Shizune holding hands with a younger version of herself. Am I missing something? Chancing a guess, based on what I know from reading the story over a...
by Helbereth
Fri Jun 07, 2013 4:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/05

That might be a bit too much metal for Hanako and Lilly, unfortunately. How about Tenacious D, then? Hisao has a little Wonderboy in him, I think, and backstage with Jack Black meeting a 6' blind, blonde, half-Asian, half-Scottish, prim and proper bombshell would be an occasion worthy of song. http...
by Helbereth
Thu Jun 06, 2013 8:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

How hard would it be to just cut the posts per page down to 12 or 10? It's probably just some arbitrary number that can be switched in the admin panel, and doing so would give more wiggle room before things go wrong. This is actually genius if it's possible. One of the biggest problems is that afte...
by Helbereth
Thu Jun 06, 2013 8:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/22

Somehow I didn't see the previous update... I blame SWTOR. “That’s his job,” Emi retorted with a nudge at Kwan. This is just a nitpick, but, considering the sequence leading up to this line, you might consider swapping the dialogue and exposition portions around so we know she's nudging Kwan before ...
by Helbereth
Thu Jun 06, 2013 8:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/05

As far as I know the forum software actively prevents double/multispacing. So, that's why I can't post my stories in the indented format I use in OpenOffice, then? Having to double-space every line break no doubt makes that whole 'page-break' thing more of an issue. To illustrate, this is how my do...
by Helbereth
Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/05

Uh, I was taught to place two periods after a space, one after a comma. If ..you ..did ..that ..your ..posts ..would ..look ..really ..strange. 8) Seriously, though, the first thing I do when I get a text to proofread is replace all double blanks with single ones. Repeat if any are found. I'll see ...
by Helbereth
Wed Jun 05, 2013 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

demonix wrote:This page breaking problem seems to be isolated to firefox as safari and google chrome don't show this problem (and the previous page is still broken just at the end).
I've never actually experienced this 'page-breaking' issue in any browser, so, to me, it's a ghost story.
by Helbereth
Wed Jun 05, 2013 9:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56701

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

DanjaDoom wrote:Silent deleted it, he doesn't want me to be happy ;_;
Well, too bad for Silentcook I saw it beforehand, then:
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Paintbrush and half an hour...
by Helbereth
Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56701

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

“Dad, you can’t fire me.” “I will literally set you on fire.” My sides... what did you do to my sides? [Repeat back to yourself what you just said to me.] [Dad’s not that bad--Oh my God, did I just have a stroke?] I think I peed a little after this one. Were it not 4am, I'd see about that drawing r...
by Helbereth
Mon Jun 03, 2013 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

Yeah this. Also, I might be the strange one, but recounting like this Aiko's overly descriptive dialogue. seems odd even in real life and rather unnecessary in fiction. Ah, see, in the context of the scene, she's being overly descriptive intentionally. She's trying to goad him into continuing their...
by Helbereth
Mon Jun 03, 2013 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

I'll let you know more when I get through the story and catch up with everybody else. Cool. 'Lucca' vs 'Rukka' I think the reference gets lost when you stick with the Japanese version of the name... ...You wouldn't say "Demon Castle Dracula" or "Akumajō Dracula" when you're talking about Castlevani...
by Helbereth
Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257660

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

I'm not even sure how I got here. Neither am I, really. I read about KS as much as two years prior to its release, but missed its impetus by several months--finally finding it in June last year. After reading through and finishing the VN to 100%, I started browsing the forums and read several dozen...