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Generally when I'm hungover Elvis Presley comes to me in a dream and, when I'm conscious again, a new chapter has been written. Hmm... I'm never hungover as I'm an oxymoron (non-alcoholic writer), but sometimes Jim Morrison visits my dreams. Last time that happened, I awoke with the pilot chapter f...

blindness; not a lot of Seeing Eye cats out there. This should be a double-hyphen -- rather than a semicolon ; When the elevator dinged open Emi bolted out, and I helped Kwan and Kenji haul the bag laden trolley out of the elevator. A comma after 'open' would be advisable. eyeing it like a mek boy ...

I stood up a little straighter as I helped Hisao work his way through the city streets. I think you mean 'sat up a little straighter' unless they cut a sun roof out of the car ceiling. slowly lifting herself off of Kanji’s You know what's wrong here. ...Kenji, game plan?” I feel like that comma oug...

octovaitor wrote:Nikai

Nakai*

I approve of everything else contained therein.

“You’ve been drinking more tea then water,” Kwan observed. than* successfully leap passed Lilly I'm fairly certain you want 'past' the adverb, not 'passed' the adjective or verb. slammed into the macaque at several dozen kilometers an hours. hour* being understandable distracted. understandably* Wh...

Okay, so I'm late to the party. That doesn't stop me from being my usual critical self and being specific about some flaws I found in the first part. "Hold up a sec while I finalize Ms. Katayama's prescription..." I'm not exactly certain on this, but I doubt he'd be so blatantly obvious about what h...

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What's that doing there...?

discussion about Misha's condition

I'm not touching that discussion with a 100' pole.

Oddball wrote:Amusing and yet sadly accurate. Shame this story didn't continue.

How did you even find it a year later?

Walshy12238 wrote:What did I just read

A somewhat-poorly-structured series of hentai cliches overlaid onto the existing opening sequence of Katawa Shoujo.

What is the update schedule, anyway? I thought it was wednesdays[sic], for some reason, if there is a schedule at all :P I love this series, it's probably my favorite KS writing! (as implied by my signature, lol) Shouldn't Aiko's name be white, if anything? :P Typically the schedule has been Wednes...

That, or we could just make bad cat puns. What, like mentioning there's now one extra pussy along for the trip? That purrfect pun gave me paws :). You certainly don't kitten around when it comes to these things. Hey here's a question for philosophical debate: why didn't you use the local 'nyan' ove...

octovaitor wrote:That, or we could just make bad cat puns.

What, like mentioning there's now one extra pussy along for the trip?

This, of course, presumes that Hanako is neither aware of Hisao's memoirs (which is basically what you're reading), or has no hand in writing them :wink:. Considering the way this story has worked from both angles, I assume Hanako is much more aware of Hisao's antics than we're led to believe in H&...

Quoth the kitten, “Meow.”

You just couldn't resist, could you?

Slowly and surely, the mystery of why Kenji was so fucked up was being unraveled.

Indeed...

“That’s more then I got,”

than*

No cow-tipping? What kind of shoddy road-trip is this?

Maybe she realized that bullying will only get her so far and changed her approach? She's certainly not acting her bullying self in this story as much as in the original KS. This is what I assumed was happening based on the available evidence. Through observing and interacting with someone who has ...

Poor Hideaki should have known better than to mention anything to Jigoro... Well, at least there's little chance that "gold-digging hoe" is going to trouble him further after that evening :-) Well, we don't know per say that she's a gold-diggin' ho. It could just be that G.G is mackin' hard and wan...