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- Thu Jul 18, 2013 1:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 268
- Views: 84587
Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 7/10
“There’s clearly some past trauma affecting her –I know the signs of PTSD; my grandfather was at the Pusan Perimeter- but every time I even think of bringing it up, she clams up, changes the subject, or fucks me until I pass out.” So Kwan's grandfather had a sex change operation? I realize he slips...
- Wed Jul 17, 2013 11:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 853
- Views: 369538
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure
Ok, just finished catching up with this, got a few things to say. First, lets start off with some praise; I like this a lot. I like the way Aiko is portrayed, as well as how deep you made the other characters within the story. GG man. Well, thank you. If there's one thing I'm trying to do it's port...
- Wed Jul 17, 2013 2:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 268
- Views: 84587
Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 7/10
I frowned in thought; she had a point, and it was better to go in with a plan then without. than* /sigh Okay, so I'm all caught up again--I just read the mini-chapter with Hanako and Emi. The issue with Emi and Hanako becoming friends, for me, involved their logistical separation at the school. The...
- Tue Jul 16, 2013 1:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 268
- Views: 84587
Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 7/10
turning in his voucher and leaving a cash tip Okay, I have a bone to pick with Mirage_GSM. When I wrote a scene in which a tip was left, you pounced on me like a rabid fox, but Hoitash does it and nothing? *shifty eyes* What kind of game are you playing? Hanako kept looking at me in her chair next ...
- Mon Jul 15, 2013 3:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Communication. (Lelouch X Iwanako)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3651
Re: Communication. (Lelouch X Iwanako)
Just something about the paper airplanes, they both seem to be really good at aiming them (though I suppose that is possible). However I do not think Mutou would be happy about them being thrown around. He puts up with misha's loud talking so why wouldn,t put up with the plane He puts up with Misha...
- Sun Jul 14, 2013 8:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
- Replies: 448
- Views: 257660
Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
One of us... one of us... one of us...neio wrote:Now that you're hooked, you'll never leave!Rosenkreuz wrote:gateway story
- Sat Jul 13, 2013 8:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
- Replies: 101
- Views: 29955
Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Was anyone else paying attention to the symbolism of Molly coming out of the closet? I mean, it was part of the scene and fit right into how it played out, but...
I'll go back in my hole now...
I'll go back in my hole now...
- Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332251
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2
Personally, I try not to be terribly specific about the interior or exterior design of the buildings because I'm not an architect.
- Wed Jul 10, 2013 9:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75382
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Birthday Update
BTW, I'm not sure if you implied that Natsume and Naomi are married, but that's not legal in Japan (yet) and also not likely to be in the foreseeable future. Even by 2020-ish? ...Eh, you're probably right. They're as good as married; if the law won't recognize it, that's the law's problem (well, an...
- Sun Jul 07, 2013 7:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332251
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2
Also, how does one on this forum make an spoiler box or equivalent? Spoiler tags here appear to simply apply black to text, which, while fine for hiding the text, does little to provide condensation of long passages or prevent large images from getting in the way when not wanted. Spoiler tags here ...
- Sun Jul 07, 2013 6:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332251
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2
Even so, there is one aspect of a work in progress that any reader can criticize without worrying about looking like a jackass later: characterization. If somebody is acting out of character, they should be policed on that, because canon characters staying in character are basically the glue that h...
- Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332251
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2
(and I believe may have even been partially inspired by this thread? Helbereth?) There are probably some aspects that spawned from reading the initial chapter that was available before I started writing TD, but the idea of using 3-1 is a result of one of the public discussion threads--it may have b...
- Sat Jul 06, 2013 4:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
- Replies: 862
- Views: 332251
Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2
My headcannon would like to dispute this remark:Reese8 wrote:we don't know anything at all, IIRC, about 3-1

- Mon Jul 01, 2013 3:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 268
- Views: 84587
Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/26
Yeah, I'm not even gonna try to remember that.Silentcook wrote:Em dash gobbledegook.
- Sun Jun 30, 2013 11:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 268
- Views: 84587
Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/26
Well, yes. However, I've never found a way to write one on the forums. My writing program creates them automatically when I use a double-hyphen.griffon8 wrote:No, because nobody under any circumstances should use a double-hyphen. The proper punctuation here is the em dash —