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by Helbereth
Thu Jul 18, 2013 1:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 7/10

“There’s clearly some past trauma affecting her –I know the signs of PTSD; my grandfather was at the Pusan Perimeter- but every time I even think of bringing it up, she clams up, changes the subject, or fucks me until I pass out.” So Kwan's grandfather had a sex change operation? I realize he slips...
by Helbereth
Wed Jul 17, 2013 11:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

Ok, just finished catching up with this, got a few things to say. First, lets start off with some praise; I like this a lot. I like the way Aiko is portrayed, as well as how deep you made the other characters within the story. GG man. Well, thank you. If there's one thing I'm trying to do it's port...
by Helbereth
Wed Jul 17, 2013 2:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 7/10

I frowned in thought; she had a point, and it was better to go in with a plan then without. than* /sigh Okay, so I'm all caught up again--I just read the mini-chapter with Hanako and Emi. The issue with Emi and Hanako becoming friends, for me, involved their logistical separation at the school. The...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 16, 2013 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 7/10

turning in his voucher and leaving a cash tip Okay, I have a bone to pick with Mirage_GSM. When I wrote a scene in which a tip was left, you pounced on me like a rabid fox, but Hoitash does it and nothing? *shifty eyes* What kind of game are you playing? Hanako kept looking at me in her chair next ...
by Helbereth
Mon Jul 15, 2013 3:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Communication. (Lelouch X Iwanako)
Replies: 11
Views: 3651

Re: Communication. (Lelouch X Iwanako)

Just something about the paper airplanes, they both seem to be really good at aiming them (though I suppose that is possible). However I do not think Mutou would be happy about them being thrown around. He puts up with misha's loud talking so why wouldn,t put up with the plane He puts up with Misha...
by Helbereth
Sun Jul 14, 2013 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257660

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

neio wrote:
Rosenkreuz wrote:gateway story
Now that you're hooked, you'll never leave!
One of us... one of us... one of us...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 13, 2013 8:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

Was anyone else paying attention to the symbolism of Molly coming out of the closet? I mean, it was part of the scene and fit right into how it played out, but...

I'll go back in my hole now...
by Helbereth
Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Personally, I try not to be terribly specific about the interior or exterior design of the buildings because I'm not an architect.
by Helbereth
Wed Jul 10, 2013 9:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Birthday Update

BTW, I'm not sure if you implied that Natsume and Naomi are married, but that's not legal in Japan (yet) and also not likely to be in the foreseeable future. Even by 2020-ish? ...Eh, you're probably right. They're as good as married; if the law won't recognize it, that's the law's problem (well, an...
by Helbereth
Sun Jul 07, 2013 7:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Also, how does one on this forum make an spoiler box or equivalent? Spoiler tags here appear to simply apply black to text, which, while fine for hiding the text, does little to provide condensation of long passages or prevent large images from getting in the way when not wanted. Spoiler tags here ...
by Helbereth
Sun Jul 07, 2013 6:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Even so, there is one aspect of a work in progress that any reader can criticize without worrying about looking like a jackass later: characterization. If somebody is acting out of character, they should be policed on that, because canon characters staying in character are basically the glue that h...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

(and I believe may have even been partially inspired by this thread? Helbereth?) There are probably some aspects that spawned from reading the initial chapter that was available before I started writing TD, but the idea of using 3-1 is a result of one of the public discussion threads--it may have b...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 06, 2013 4:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332251

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 5/03/2

Reese8 wrote:we don't know anything at all, IIRC, about 3-1
My headcannon would like to dispute this remark:
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by Helbereth
Mon Jul 01, 2013 3:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/26

Silentcook wrote:Em dash gobbledegook.
Yeah, I'm not even gonna try to remember that.
by Helbereth
Sun Jun 30, 2013 11:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 6/26

griffon8 wrote:No, because nobody under any circumstances should use a double-hyphen. The proper punctuation here is the em dash —
Well, yes. However, I've never found a way to write one on the forums. My writing program creates them automatically when I use a double-hyphen.