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by Helbereth
Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

RedRover wrote:For example, when I think of the English language, I think of the color green. Just 'cuz. :lol:
A language reminds you of a color--green, specifically...? You can't just say that without providing some semblance of an explanation...!
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

All of the typos are in the first three chapters and I believe they are in chronological order. In that case, I'll basically ignore them then because those are the only three chapters I've had a chance to go back and edit--albeit unreleased. Only another 37 chapters to go :lol: Yeah, that's only 30...
by Helbereth
Mon Aug 19, 2013 7:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

Only read the first few chapter but it's great so far. :D Nodding, i extend an invitation... I get the distinct feeling that the 'i' should be 'I'. relay their queries, really It's frustrating. Is there supposed to be some punctuation after really? my shoulder, i turn After i make a comment These m...
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 18, 2013 9:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Misha Route Collection
Replies: 95
Views: 25272

Re: Misha Route Collection

Hanako Scars wrote:Does the guy who does http://pastebin.com/8NpPmBHp come here?
That Guy? Yes. Not frequently, but That Guy does stalk the KS forums occasionally.
by Helbereth
Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Misha Route Collection
Replies: 95
Views: 25272

Re: Misha Route Collection

Hanako Scars wrote:Someone kindly sent me Doomish's old incomplete route, so I'll put it on pastebin and add it to the topic shortly. I've added a few other links since creation, please PM me any other routes you find.
Don't make me tell Doomish you're publishing his stuff without consent.
by Helbereth
Sat Aug 17, 2013 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

Trivia: “No.. or yes...?” I stammer, trying to get my answer right, “I'm sure it didn't rain... I think,” I laugh and shake my head in dismay, “at least... not on me.” ... said nobody in Japanese ever. The Japanese "hai" and "iie" deal with the correctness of the statement , so Aiko would have simp...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 16, 2013 3:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Chapter 41 - Summer Lull (part 4)

Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Next Chapter ________________________________________________________ Despite Yoko's misgivings and my latent worries about Hisao's neighbor, once we reach his room and get the movie set up on his impressive hardware, we both settle down. Making use of his blan...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 16, 2013 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Chapter 41 - Summer Lull (part 3)

Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 4 | Next Chapter ________________________________________________________ “Well played,” I compliment, nodding briskly. “What were we playing?” “I- uh... I...Um...” I stammer, completely bewildered by her reply. Why- how does Emi deal with this...? After a few mome...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 16, 2013 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Chapter 41 - Summer Lull (part 2)

Previous | Part 1 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Next Chapter ________________________________________________________ Whatever he's hiding, I'm not likely to find out now; I can't physically stop him from hanging up the phone. “You're welcome,” I reply, keeping my voice steady, “Love you—try to get to sleep....
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 16, 2013 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Chapter 41 - Summer Lull (part 1)

So, this is why I made no promises about a schedule--I can't guarantee the pace of my writing will maintain itself. Apart from that, I should probably mention that the previous 38 chapters (prior to the last one) attempted to keep each post under 6500 words--sometimes unsuccessfully. As of chapter ...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 09, 2013 2:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kenji Files; Ibarazaki and Setou (Updated 08/08/13)
Replies: 55
Views: 22846

Re: The Kenji Files; Ibarazaki and Setou (Updated 08/08/13)

“Stasis!” he shouted, then slammed a hand over his own mouth and gasped. “This is how they knocked us out! They put us in this stuff... somehow,” he added, taking a step back to search along the edges of the wall, “that's why we don't remember anything after-” “Okay, great...” Emi rasped, turning t...
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kenji Files; Ibarazaki and Setou (Updated 08/08/13)
Replies: 55
Views: 22846

Part 7 - Into The Breach

As I stated previously, I had written out a bit more of this when I posted the previous update, but decided to end the scene at a transitional point rather than letting it go on for another couple thousand words before the next. Thus I had most of this written out previously, and it only took a bit...
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update

Not to my knowledge. If it were, they wouldn't have been playing poker :wink:. Perhaps you misunderstood--there's a period missing there. Also, there was a 'then' in place of a 'than' which I pointed out, but I'm uncertain whether my wordplay made that clear. Being referred to as old when I'm only ...
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 08, 2013 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update

Apocalypse Cow /facepalm “Well, you shoulda thought of that before you raised,” Kenji said as he attempted to gaze at the herd as well This is not a period piece, I assume? “you will live long and prosper –okay, that’s just lazy…” Spock would not approve of his disapproval. Crack, “sorry, I’m too h...