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by Helbereth
Wed Sep 04, 2013 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56701

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

“Damn good to meet you, I’m the matriarch of this little ecosystem
If that's Jigoro talking, he has some gender identity issues... or he's an idiot.
by Helbereth
Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332247

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) {u 7/19/2

I don't want anything done right yet. I want to hear what people think. For me, the shock comes when you see how differently the problem effects Iwanako versus Hisao. Going into the story, you realize what's happening after the first few paragraphs, so having that particular detail in the descripti...
by Helbereth
Sun Sep 01, 2013 4:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

On that note, has anyone noticed my propensity for using track related jargon in my posts since the most recent chapter? It's sort of a running gag... I'm doing my damnedest to catch up on TD, so hopefully I'll notice fairly soon. I was talking about after your latest chapter, actually... Because M...
by Helbereth
Sat Aug 31, 2013 8:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

The hopefully involuntary implications of this are both laughable and terrifying. :lol: It's such a glorious mistake, though. Were it the case, I'm sure the human race would have run out of steam in its first lap. Wording is not my friend... On that note, has anyone noticed my propensity for using ...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 8:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

I figured, if periods on average last about five days a week , with four weeks in a month, a decent number of girls would get it simultaneously. The hopefully involuntary implications of this are both laughable and terrifying. :lol: It's such a glorious mistake, though. Were it the case, I'm sure t...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 7:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

I dunno, this sounds like a conspiracy on the part of the feminists of Yamaku to undermine the male population through biochemical warfare. Finally , someone got it right. I believe this particular form would fall under the category of biological, rather than biochemical warfare, but that point is ...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

I meant to imply that only some girls at Yamaku would get it at the same time (hence the "a lot" as opposed to "all.) I figured, if periods on average last about five days a week, with four weeks in a month, a decent number of girls would get it simultaneously. In that case, shouldn't there be a co...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 3:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

Kimori16 wrote:Pretty funny.
I try to respond to every comment on some level--have since the beginning, really--but sometimes there isn't a lot to say in response.
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

... ... ...I'm gonna go volunteer for a war now... That was...awkward in all the right ways... Also a good check in the "stay single" column, but either way nice chapter. So... about that war... There's still gonna be a lot of blood. *high fives self* Is that why girls all like those stupid Twiligh...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 1:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

--- Warning: rather long comment, hope it needn't be cut later on --- *checks for SilentCook* We're probably clear. Having gotten away with 9000 word posts in some cases, I doubt he'll mind a 1000 word essay. Well, turned out I missed this gem somehow. I don't advertize much, and it's OC... so peop...
by Helbereth
Fri Aug 30, 2013 1:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

I remember another KS fanfiction archive , quite neatly organized. Useful to have a forum-wide one running. That one is mostly pastebin, and doesn't offer much where the renai forums are concerned. Having dug into the bowels of the forum here(back before I started writing my own and lacked the time...
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 29, 2013 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

ewx wrote:So if you seriously think that people won't abuse that fact to get their stories more read, you're most likely wrong. For starters, I'd abuse the hell out of this ordering system.
Just because you lack integrity doesn't mean everyone else does.
by Helbereth
Thu Aug 29, 2013 6:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

On a completely unrelated note, I keep hearing about the 'Miki Route Curse'. Can anyone tell me if this actually exists and why it seems to happen? Mostly, it's a silly superstition, but the track record for Miki routes speaks for itself; it's a race fraught with false starts, incomplete relays, an...
by Helbereth
Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

My only suggestion is that in sorting the various titles, you should swap 'the' to the end and use the second word for the alphabetical listing. IE: Manly Tea Party, The United States of Misha, The Otherwise, it's a good archive. For the biggest one's I hope that the authors will provide the info th...
by Helbereth
Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 08/16/13 ~ C.40 - Summer Lull

I'm up to chapter 15 now and still really liking the story (despite my ever present distrust of most OC stories) but there are still a few errors. Can I ask if you have proofreader? Also in some places I feel like you're trying to use uncommon words instead of much more common words deliberately. I...