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by Helbereth
Fri Sep 20, 2013 2:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Replies: 55
Views: 20371

Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle (An H&K:MD Halloween Spe

Thought you might need a break to recover from the illness, but now you mention it, time's about right for the next part. I have little else to do while I'm sick than sit here and stare at my monitor, so I might as well be doing something mildly productive. I'd almost think you're interest is less ...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 19, 2013 2:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Replies: 55
Views: 20371

Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle (An H&K:MD Halloween Spe

Hoitash wrote:
SpcPotshot wrote:Woohoo! New content! Can't wait!

Is it going to be on a schedule like Road to Tokyo was?
Indeed, updates are Thursday to correspond with a Halloween Day Finale!
On that, are you planning to send part 6 sometime soon, or am I to be left flapping in the breeze?
by Helbereth
Tue Sep 17, 2013 3:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 16818

Re: [Hanako] Rebirth *UPDATED Part 3 16/9

Never set yourself a goal for the number of words in your story. You're only limiting yourself that way. Such stuff is for contests when all participants' works have to be judged to similar standards or for manga or newspapers where there's a certain amout of space that has to be filled. If you're ...
by Helbereth
Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 16818

Re: [Hanako] Rebirth

Okay, so... there's potential here. There are a LOT of technical flaws, though. So many that I'd probably have to make a post twice the length of the original to point them all out. Since I lack the time, inclination, or fortitude to do that, I'll just go over some broader concepts you seem to have ...
by Helbereth
Fri Sep 13, 2013 3:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

@Helbereth: Are your stories all part of the same continuity? If so, there's no problem and they'll be in the same entry. Giving it some thought, it's possible The Kenji Files, and Tomorrow's Doom could be in concurrent worlds, but I never planned it that way. Saying so wouldn't change anything abo...
by Helbereth
Fri Sep 13, 2013 2:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

Scattering the pieces alphabetically would make about as much sense as chopping Tomorrow's Doom into its 41 separate chapters and seeding them throughout the entire archive based on the chapter titles. Now I have the idea of organizing my chapters alphabetically to see how the story goes... Looking...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

I basically agree with everything ProfAllister said, but I want to point something out:
ProfAllister wrote:Miki x Shizune
Does this exist anywhere? It sounds awesome... Maybe if I weren't concentrating on other things...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369535

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

I mean, kids have smartphones now and I'm using the same cell phone I got six years ag o, which was my first phone. Does that mean you got your phone around the same time as Aiko got her new one--which would be the end of July 2007? If so, I'm curious about its features (researching stuff like that...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

Really what's the difference between a short having it's own thread and one that shares one with a few others? The important thing is that the link goes to the story in question. Well, okay, I was a tad inaccurate, but the point I was trying to make stands. I have a thread here somewhere (I lost tr...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 1:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369535

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

Mirage_GSM wrote:You might find this article helpful, though.
Quite. The cultural thing about using your phone on a train will be particularly helpful--I kind of accidentally hit on that with them (Hisao, then Amaya) planning to call after they got off the train, but now I know not to take it lightly.
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369535

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

I mean, kids have smartphones now and I'm using the same cell phone I got six years ag o, which was my first phone. Does that mean you got your phone around the same time as Aiko got her new one--which would be the end of July 2007? If so, I'm curious about its features (researching stuff like that...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

rather than complaining about the way things are listed.] >>> Again, it's just a suggestion It's a persistent issue being harped on by numerous commenters (including myself to some extent) which is why I didn't quote anyone--I meant no offense. Comrades, I see you guys are having fun. I wanted to d...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

Can we please stop requesting changes to the organization method? Think of how much raw information is already on the list, and how long it would take to reorganize it, then remember that the people doing it are already being extremely good-natured in providing the service at all. Instead of searchi...
by Helbereth
Wed Sep 11, 2013 7:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369535

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

My usual nitpicks about an otherwise great story: The message said to call in the morning, but seeing as it's only seven, I decide to let him sleep. She's not going to call him all day, am I right? Well, to be fair, seven o'clock is a mere seven hours after his last message, so her decision to wait...
by Helbereth
Wed Sep 11, 2013 5:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369535

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

“Not really, and don't call me Shirley,” Heh. I wasn't going to, and I almost didn't because it's technically people speaking Japanese, but I couldn't leave a line like that without making a Leslie Nielsen reference. Shizune's mother and mine were sisters As I recall, it was Shizune's mother and Li...