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by Helbereth
Wed Oct 09, 2013 5:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Like Fire and Powder: A Suzu epilogue (Complete)
Replies: 55
Views: 21107

Re: A Suzu good-end epilogue (Ch. 2, 2013-10-08)

Yeah, I figured out that the pacing won't allow 4 chapters. 5 minimum, might go to 6. Editing the TOC to reflect that. A bit of advice; don't tell people the limits you have planned. Keep an idea of them in your notes, but in a format like this, where the story is released in serial chunks, unless ...
by Helbereth
Wed Oct 09, 2013 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369530

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 09/11/13 ~ C.41 - Phone Tag

exgladous wrote:wow, I just read the bit where Aiko describes Kenta. I am exactly like Kenta except not japanese, younger, and I don't have a disability.
If it's only the introduction, you might want to wait until a little more depth is added to the description before proclaiming your similarities.
by Helbereth
Fri Oct 04, 2013 10:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Replies: 55
Views: 20371

Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Updated 10/03

Something tells me this installment made people so uncomfortable that they're afraid to comment...
by Helbereth
Thu Oct 03, 2013 9:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

… it might be more accurate to list my word counts as (some number)-ish. That's why I rounded the count for my longer stories to the nearest hundred. While I have a word count from the original file, I discovered that eliminating the formatting tags dropped the word count by two for each instance. ...
by Helbereth
Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

No, I won't do a wordcount until a story is completely finished. (and for stories with a lot of chapters it would be nice if the author could send it in...) I have a spreadsheet with the word count for every chapter, totaled by act. It's amazing the things you'll do to kill time while you're blocke...
by Helbereth
Mon Sep 30, 2013 11:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Replies: 55
Views: 20371

Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Updated 9/26

...Been reading Friedrich Nietzsche? You might wanna lay off him, he gets to you, man :). I've heard that name, but I couldn't tell you who they are. In terms of reading, my scope of experience is frightfully limited. The only authors I can readily name whose works I've read are JRR Tolkien, RA Sal...
by Helbereth
Sun Sep 29, 2013 5:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02

It's funny that I never knew this thread existed, even though I've read Helbereth's posts hundreds of times. I've certainly been around long enough to have seen it, but I guess I never thought to look at it back when it was relevant. Now I feel like I did when I got to the end of the Higurashi dub ...
by Helbereth
Sun Sep 29, 2013 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 11
Views: 3346

Re: -

Hanako Scars wrote:I sort of wish I'd seen this now :(
You really don't. It was a jumbled, incoherent mess that's probably better left in limbo. After I finished reading, I had to step away for a few minutes to try blanking it out, and when I came back it was gone--it kind of worked out well in that regard.
by Helbereth
Sat Sep 28, 2013 7:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 11
Views: 3346

Re: -

I feel privileged to have come up and found this literally minutes prior to its deletion.
by Helbereth
Fri Sep 27, 2013 7:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: .
Replies: 5
Views: 2299

Re: The Visitor

I'm sorry, did it confuse you? Using a notepad-style text editor makes it hard to figure out what's text reflow and where the newlines run. And I might be slavishly imitating VN-conventions, where it's always obvious who's talking no matter how many disjointed pieces of dialogue are thrown at you. ...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 26, 2013 3:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle Conclusion Update
Replies: 55
Views: 20371

Re: Hisao and Kenji-Concrete Jungle (An H&K:MD Halloween Spe

And misbehave :wink:. So does Helbereth, from what I've heard LIES! I'm a perfect angel! It's only my thoughts that follow dark paths... this recent update marks his return as an in depth editor. Yeah, this is more familiar. Y'all can blame any errors in here on me, probably--I can't acount for wha...
by Helbereth
Thu Sep 26, 2013 10:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

As for Shizune having a brother - Hideaki's existance was announced well before the full release. Most people also correctly asssumed that he was Shizune's brother - (though personally, I suspected that part to be trolling by the devs until the end) That only applies to people who paid attention to...
by Helbereth
Wed Sep 25, 2013 9:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The great fan fiction archive

I actually have read a story where Shizune was an only child , though I don't remember which one it was. Y'know, if I'd only read Act 1(through act 3, really), I could easily have assumed she was an only child because she displays all the typical characteristics thereof--imposed self-sufficiency, n...
by Helbereth
Mon Sep 23, 2013 5:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)
Replies: 29
Views: 16547

Re: Rin: Hisao's Gift (a short story)

Perhaps it's serendipity, or malice on the part of the universe, but when I clicked on this post to read its contents, my playlist had worked its way around to an appropriately somber song that sources from elsewhere, but seems to match the overall melancholy tone of this story. I went and found it ...
by Helbereth
Sun Sep 22, 2013 5:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lost and Found
Replies: 13
Views: 4933

Re: Lost and Found

Sea wrote:Great job for a first post, and where did you find a Rin picture I haven't seen yet? What is this sorcery?
You mistook an image of a girl who obviously has hands for Rin?