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Helbereth

Just want to say I'm loving your story, found it late last night, just got up to date late tonight. Took a good deal of my day, but I regret nothing! Look forward to chapter 43, even if it takes a while I'm sure it will be worth it. Well, thank you and welcome to the forums--seems you lurked for a ...

Helbereth

Nobody makes a tropes reference to my stuff... I wonder whether I should be sad or thankful for that...

Helbereth

Neverbloom wrote:...if you don't understand humor, this isn't the story for you.

Helbereth

Welcome to the greatest fan fiction on the Internet.

Stopped reading there.

Helbereth

You need a few things; namely a thesaurus to expand your vocabulary, a few thousand hours spent reading from established authors (I don't mean fan fiction, either), and, if you intend to write fan fiction, a better understanding of the characters involved. Good: - No glaring spelling errors. This co...

Helbereth

I've seen TV Tropes mentioned across the boards fairly often. I don't know why it surprises me; I guess I just never imagined the site being a gateway to fanfics, of all things. It's a good place to start , no doubt. It's far from a comprehensive list of even the good fanfics on this board, let alo...

Helbereth

Fuck it, I sold out. I just tried to do it in the absolute least tacky way possible. Under normal circumstances I'd never have done this, but... screw it, this is my Christmas present to myself. Let the experiment commence. Honestly, I don't know enough about tropes in general to accurately define ...

Helbereth

Have you considered setting up a basic one yourself? Posting a recommendation for your own fic there would be tooting your own horn, but I personally don't see setting up a page for a fic that was already recommended by others in the same light, even if the fic happens to be your own. It would stil...

Helbereth

The editor in me wants to point out flaws as a preface for offering congratulatory platitudes, but there weren't any worthy of note this time, so, job well done! Still, I do have one issue, though it seems petty; I'm not sure where this story is going. The timing and subject matter thus far indicate...

Helbereth

And, though the epiphany I had on Saturday—and the resolution that accompanied it—are already well on their way to wearing out their welcome, they’ve still affected the way I approach a situation that I’m otherwise familiar with. Those em dashes might work better as commas. Commas? There's absolute...

Helbereth

Since I'm starting back a ways, I'm gonna toss in some editorial remarks with chapter headings. Not So Cute: Was this time simply a misadventure, or does it forebode a more frequent series of misfortunes? Forebode sticks out for me here in that I think foreshadow might be more appropriate... And, th...

Helbereth

I'm kind of curious about where you decide to split the chapters, though. I notice that it doesn't always occur at a narrative break. If you mean the separate parts within a chapter, those splits are based on word count. Each section of this last chapter was 2500-2800 words in length. It's just to ...

Helbereth

Hoitash wrote:Their just gets lost in the blur...

Wut?

Note: I just found this and I cycled backward through the comments before getting to reading... I'll do that... um... well, soon. I think I need more coffee first...

Helbereth

Mournful3ch0 wrote:Ahh, too late. I hope our friend on the iPad read through that part before reading that. Heh. Or maybe I spoiled it.

We shall see.

Considering he's the one who was reading on his iPad, I think we're in the clear.

Helbereth

Phew. Just copy-pasted this all into a notepad on my iPad to read on my way back home. Hopefully 6 pure hours of nothing but reading'll let me catch up. I'm on chapter 30a atm. And I saw how big the chapters were. WISH ME LUCK. Does the site not work on your iPad, or are you just predicting areas w...

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