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by Helbereth
Fri Jan 31, 2014 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332211

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

Leaty wrote:Like what? This isn't a quota, it's how long I expect the chapter to be.
Indeed. Often when I start a chapter, I know how long it will be based on its outline. Usually I end up picturing a number nearer to 10k lately, which sometimes gets pushed up to 12ish, but that's because I know how I write.
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Judging from Yoko's description of phase 2, I'm expecting either sultry underwear shopping or public karaoke. I mean I did call it :) Yeah, well... it was either lingerie of swimwear considering they were in a mall. Maybe someday I'll post the whole montage sequence I wrote (it took up about 6,000 ...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 9:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story
Replies: 27
Views: 16946

Re: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story

Well, obviously this fell off the forum before I joined, so I haven't seen it until now. I do recall people making references to it, but I never discovered what they were talking about. Also, I'm not sure if this is already there, but it ought to be on the Yamaku Library post...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 9:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Chapter 43 - Mental Block (part 3)

Ah, I missed this so much! As did I. “I dropped the pasta just before heading up here,... IMAGE Yes, there might be a shot fired at the spaghetti dropping metaphor... I think this time I will refrain from shaving until the next chapter posts. I might have a solid beard by then.... ;) Thanks for the...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 6:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

*nods* I agree. That's one of the things I enjoy greatly about this story: the work you put in to show how your OCs interact with the ones from the VN, and do so fairly naturally. I think that's why the Lilly scene I mentioned a few chapters ago was a bit jarring -- it was only compared to how seam...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 3:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

Kaori Kobayashi , coincidence or are you also a fan? Never heard of her. Actually it's an amalgamation of Kaori Nishidake from SSX, and Kobayashi Maru , the fictional "no win situation" test from Star Trek. This is one of those situations where the intent of the character and part of their backgrou...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 12:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

Uh... What's a blocked number? I can block numbers on my mobile, but usually I wouldn't even get a call signal after that for those... Also it doesn't sound like Aiko consciously blocked any numbers... Caller ID blocked, so it just shows up as an unknown number. ^This, basically. A known number is ...
by Helbereth
Wed Jan 29, 2014 11:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

...it seems literally every italicised line of thought ends in an ellipsis or some variation thereof... ...I wouldn't expect this many ellipses out of Shizune, much less Aiko. It's okay to have thoughts that don't trail off once in a while, you know. For the record the ellipses added here are to sh...
by Helbereth
Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

I’ve read pretty much all the major pseudo route fics, but I felt the urge to finally create an account to comment on this one. Another notch in my belt... this thread is littered with comments from former lurkers. I love the day-to-day “substantial-ness” of the story, and I commend you for writing...
by Helbereth
Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Chapter 44 - Mental Block (part 4)

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Next Chapter ______________________________________________________________________ “Anyway, I can't talk long... but, we're headed back to port—it's supposed to be stormy for the next week, so we're cutting the trip short... Good news is I'll ...
by Helbereth
Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Chapter 44 - Mental Block (part 3)

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Next Chapter ______________________________________________________________________ “Calm down, then,” Yoko advises, patting my shoulder as she jokingly adds, “for the record, you could totally take her...” Huffing out the breath, I chuckle and...
by Helbereth
Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Chapter 44 - Mental Block (part 2)

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Next Chapter ______________________________________________________________________ “We can't just say it was a fluke—a one time thing?” I grumble, pushing my way through the exit onto the ground floor. “Not a chance~! You owe me a shopping tri...
by Helbereth
Tue Jan 28, 2014 11:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369513

Chapter 44 - Mental Block (part 1)

Well, let's just call this the longest I've ever gone without a new chapter - mostly because that's what it is. 11/06/13 to 1/28/14 is very nearly three months - 83 days, actually - during which I've been fighting with this chapter. Of course, there was an interlude around Christmas that took up a ...
by Helbereth
Thu Jan 09, 2014 1:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pedagogy
Replies: 46
Views: 41821

Re: Pedagogy

Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so... I didn't know Aura had ever taken such a hard left turn in a narrative - bravo!
by Helbereth
Thu Jan 02, 2014 3:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Blind Artist
Replies: 3
Views: 1855

Re: Blind Artist

Art isn't just drawing, painting, or digital creations. It can also come in the form of architecture and, perhaps more obviously, sculpture. Considering that braille is a tactile language along with deaf/blind signing, and sculpture is essentially a tactile art form, it's not a huge leap to consider...