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by Helbereth
Mon Feb 17, 2014 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 5264

Re: Kenji Who? Part 2

Almost wasn't even going to continue this, but it seems to have gotten some interest, so I decided to make it into a short story. No it isn't finished. Yes, all the parts will be short. Yes, I figured out an appropriate Who angle that aligns with the KS universe. No, I'm not telling. Part 1 | Part 3...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 17, 2014 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 13246

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Started 14/02/2014]

Hm. Isn't Misaki in the photography club? Yeah, she is in the photography club. You'll see how this works when I have more time to work on it, don't worry. I have plans. Lots of plans. But they come second in my writing priorities. I just guessed that Hisao would join the newspaper club, and find h...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 17, 2014 1:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 13246

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Started 14/02/2014]

I didn't cause this, did I?
by Helbereth
Sun Feb 16, 2014 1:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 5264

Re: Kenji Who?

GorisTheKing wrote:Interesting, I can only vaguely remember that episode with the watch. Were you planning to do a direct parody of the plot or verge off and do your own thing?
What's the point of fiction if the plot isn't original?
by Helbereth
Sat Feb 15, 2014 8:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 5264

Re: Kenji Who?

Edit: After rereading this a few times I think I might have misunderstood. Is Kenji the Doctor and 'Yuuko' the companion? Some points going both ways, but now I'm not 100% in either camp. Perhaps that's the point. Anyway, still pretty interesting. No, that's right. Kenji is a regeneration of The Do...
by Helbereth
Sat Feb 15, 2014 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 5264

Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014

I fell asleep in the middle of watching old reruns earlier, and when I awoke I had a strange thought. That thought went straight to the page, and is here presented as a quick, largely unedited opening to a potential crossover fiction. Part 1 (on this post)| Part 2 | Part 3 __________________________...
by Helbereth
Sat Feb 15, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75374

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Valentine's Day Up

Good to see something new from the incomparable Hoitash. It's rather brief - probably your shortest story ever - but it settles a few important questions, and does so as you'd expect: over scotch, in the office, and in as direct a way as possible. It's a kind of grown-up version of The Manly Picnic,...
by Helbereth
Wed Feb 12, 2014 11:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blue Balls and a Slack Jaw (Taro Pseudo Route)
Replies: 18
Views: 7873

Re: Blue Balls and a Slack Jaw (Taro Pseudo Route)

There is not a single sentence in that entire story that I found redeemable.
by Helbereth
Wed Feb 12, 2014 6:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239243

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -22/12/13

Went and hit submit when I meant to do a preview first. Anyway, you can probably tag this right under the Tomorrow's Doom label. [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&start=225#p124857]Little Swimmer[/url][/b] – One-Shot by [b]Helbereth[/b] (completed, 3301 words) [b]PoV: [/b]OC (Aiko...
by Helbereth
Wed Feb 12, 2014 10:50 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 428873

Re: The "feels" bazaar.

As much as that is a valid argument I don't think I'm strong enough for that, I mean, this game man... When playing through a route I could not think about anything else but the well-being of that character, and having to step away from the story just seems to taxing to be worth the reward, in my o...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 11, 2014 11:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin: Clearer Than Words
Replies: 13
Views: 7623

Re: Rin: Clearer Than Words

I'm gonna probably be a little too thorough going through this... but, I'm a little obsessive like that. Ask Hoitash, he'll tell you I can tend to go overboard with the minutia when editing. There are several instances of double spaces following periods. Don't do that! *wrist-slap* The ringing of th...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 11, 2014 8:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390572

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

I thought I was crazy for checking Weather Underground for historical weather at EGPE (Inverness Airport) and RJSS (Sendai Airport), for Enjoy The Silence. (Although I only did it for the awkward small-talk between Lilly and Hanako...) Dude, I checked the lunar cycle once just so two sentences abou...
by Helbereth
Tue Feb 11, 2014 2:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390572

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

I do things like check what phase the moon was in on a particular date if a character is going to make a comment about it Haa... Every time I have Aiko mention the moon on a particular day, it's following the lunar schedule for 2007. The place I give myself leeway is weather. Sometimes it just need...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 10, 2014 8:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390572

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

Yeah, honestly, if I'd been more diligent in my own research (I've gotten better, I hope) I would have done the same thing. My only excuse is that I was a newbie to writing fanfiction :oops:. Granted, Developments might have gone in a completely different direction, and I like where it went, but no...
by Helbereth
Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]
Replies: 8
Views: 3446

Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Kitsune Spirit wrote:How about a happy alternate-yuri story between Misha and Shizune where Shicchan gets fed up with Generic VN Protagonist and decides that its really Misha thats shes loved for so long :3
Why kick Hisao to the curb? Get all the girls together like a harem, except they're in charge and he's the slave.