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Yeah, we're obviously talking past each other. I was trying to say something along the lines of "in my opinion, this act feels like a sidetrack from the story you've been telling up until now, and thus might have worked better as one or more stories separate from TD proper instead of as part of it....

I didn't mean it quite that literally. My comment was directed at the stylistic choice you made here, not at...um...what is it you think I was accusing you of, anyway :? ? The fact that the stylistic choice in question was present from the beginning doesn't change my opinion of it. If future events...

This is an archive: cold, emotionless, and without favoritism, critique or other subjective connotations. What Sea is talking about would be a thread where anyone could go in and say: "Oh My God, you all have to read everything by <insert author>! Seriously, their one-shot, <insert title>, is the be...

I'm not sure if anyone else will bother, but I want to mention that listening to the provided musical accompaniment while reading added a nice ambiance. This sounds like the Hisao that first started at Yamaku, if only a little bit more optimistic. It reads as intended, like a letter to someone he ha...

Even the way she's sitting, legs crossed at the ankles with one arm resting in the window while the other does most of her signing Little nitpick here, but I'm fairly certain that Japanese sign language uses both hands, though there might be a simplified version that I'm not aware of using only one...

Okay, Helbereth...you know I love your writing, and you know I love this story, and this chapter was great fun to read... ...but... ...am I still reading Tomorrow's Doom here? Yes, it is, 100%, been in the outline since week 1, but I can't really say much else without spoilers. Yes, it does feel li...

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 |Next Chapter _______________________________________________________________________ Overhead, hanging from the bare rafters and flanked by skylights, several ceiling fans spin silently, apparently keeping the room cool. It occurs to me that the...

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 |Next Chapter _______________________________________________________________________ That's a pretty extreme conclusion to make, though I guess it could have happened if things took a dire turn. At the time, Yoko and Amaya were barely more than ...

Previous Chapter | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 |Next Chapter _______________________________________________________________________ “And, you are?” Yoko asks, cleverly managing not to specify gender. “Hideaki Hakamichi, at your service, Miss. You may call me Hideaki. And you must be Yoko Gui...

What's that you say? It hasn't even been a whole month since the last update? Imagine that, right? Admittedly, this could have been finished a lot sooner, but I've been editing the original act 1 pretty heavily - it never really got any polish. As of last night, I've completed edit passes of all fi...

It's been a few days, so I might as well add a new section. Part 2 |Part 4 _____________________________________________________________ Kenji Who? - Part 3 It's ten in the morning and the library is quiet. One might say it's almost... too quiet. In this still and quiet I can practically hear the d...

Numb wrote:I'm not sure if it's a Britishism or not, but a key fob is a thing. It's the little piece of plastic with the buttons on it that let you unlock your car. I think. I'm British, but I don't know what some of these fancy -isms are

It's usually called a remote out here in the colonies.

As of now, I'm officially caught up on this story, which I haven't been reading since before the Track Meet. As we approach the small parking lot situated to the side of the auxiliary building, Mr. Ito retrieves a key fob from his pocket and presses a small button. Back in scene 13, I'm pretty sure ...

Also, as much as I love Hanako, I have a hard time thinking anyone would describe her as the most beautiful person they've ever seen. Sweetest I can see, and I can even understand something thinking she does look good, but the MOST beautiful seem to be pushing things. You forget that love is a most...

Meanwhile, I'm already late for my shift, so I check my bag, slip the sonic screwdriver inside, and walk away swiftly... Any other questions? Yes. Though this may seem a bit off topic, why does Yamaku's library run all day long, rather than start at lunch or after school? Should the students not be...