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by Helbereth
Sun Jul 01, 2012 12:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which of the characters would date you?
Replies: 110
Views: 29471

Re: Which of the characters would date you?

WorldlyWiseman wrote:
newnar wrote:What's a date?
It's a like a dating sim, but harder.
And more likely to result in personal injury or diseases.
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:21 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035369

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

I will add, though, that a schizophrenic break usually doesn't happen until after age 18 and before 30, according to the doctor, and the break is usually preceded by some kind of stress in the person's life. In the case of my brother, he was 21 at the time and we had just spent the past 5 months ard...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035369

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Though after reading your posts my main concern now is, are certain rituals or routines might be the signal for schizophrenia in the future? No. When my brother had his first break, it really came out of nowhere. We asked the doctors about whether the other activities (thumb sucking, pacing, obsess...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:54 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Different (and possibly sexy) looks for characters
Replies: 27
Views: 9833

Re: Different (and possibly sexy) looks for characters

Lilly dressed like Elle Driver(California Mountain Snake) with double eye-patches. Hanako -the bride- in a yellow jumpsuit, expertly wielding a Hanzo sword, slicing through a the 'Kenji 88' in pursuit of Suzu Suzuki(Cottonmouth). Suzu leaps up on the table and flips her bloodied sword onto her shoul...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:36 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Does KS really cause Manly Tears
Replies: 93
Views: 21789

Re: Does KS really cause Manly Tears

I believe this is the quote you referenced from the "Ask" thread: When I use the word "manipulation" it's with absolute, utter disdain. I don't like how the nakige (literally "crying game") genre trades story integrity for cheap shots at the reader's tear ducts. I'm sure any writer wants a reader to...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite Route
Replies: 151
Views: 32922

Re: My favorite girl/route

I found things that I liked about all five stories - and things I disliked. Rin: First was Rin. Now, I simply loved how baffling a conversation could end up being with her. The fact that she seemed to approach every situation like a casual observer was awe inspiring - being able to detach herself fr...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Scene 5 - Five Years Later

"He was looking at the bike, but his eyes were on Hanako..." What was he looking at the bike with then? I think I need to reword that, perhaps. As he walks, he has his head turned to face the bike, but his eyes are fixed on Hanako. That probably isn't how it sounded, though. I haven't read "Reconci...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109888

Re: Shower Scenes

The Hero Hartmut wrote:I believe that would be Fingale's Law, if one was being persnickety about it.
The hell is Fingale's Law?

Murphy's Law is: Anything that can go wrong, will go wrong.
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:25 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Does KS really cause Manly Tears
Replies: 93
Views: 21789

Re: Does KS really cause Manly Tears

[Types of crying] At my grandmother's funeral last month, it was the latter; the end of Lilly's path was the former. I must be messed up :shock: I was using examples to get the point across, not try to identify causation. There's different kinds of crying and the type depends on a lot more factors ...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Scene 5 - Five Years Later

You did an excellent job of re-characterizing Hanako. She seems rather similar to Robanynomous's characterization of her in "Reconciliation", which is a very good thing in my book. Also, the idea of Hanako being a biker babe is REALLY hot :lol: All Lilly managed to pry out of her was that she'd use...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Scene 5 - Five Years Later

Scene 5 - Five Years Later Her gaze straight ahead and her eyes set on the road, the glint of the morning sun on the edge of the windshield went mostly unnoticed. The chill of the breeze stuck in her mouth and made her teeth chatter, but she enjoyed the feeling. The morning air was warm, but zippin...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:29 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Lilly's Route
Replies: 518
Views: 154642

Re: Lilly's Route

I just want to point out that I love reading threads that are loaded with those spoiler tags.

It's like reading classified government documents with an x-ray scanner.
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596622

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/25)

So then it would be Stumpfist, Narcolepta and The Heartbreaker? Sounds more like a band than a group of superheroes. Who would be the villains, then? Deafcharge and Thunderlaugh? (Shizune and Misha) Yes, this is happening. Not sure about Thunderlaugh, but I freaking love Deafcharge. What have I done?
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:18 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035369

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

. I think I may have a very minor form of Asperger's, although I was never diagnosed with it. I'm sure you are just awkward and not with a very minor aspergers. Its pretty normal, you know. I remember being really awkward when i was a teen. It's completely possible, though. Asperger's seems to have...
by Helbereth
Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:25 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What third ending should Lilly and Shizune had?
Replies: 46
Views: 12963

Re: What third ending should Lilly and Shizune had?

It doesn't matter what you choose, he chloroforms you, rapes you, and throws you off the school roof and make it look like an accident I don't wanna burst your bubble, but years of watching CSI and FBI Files tells me that if he used chloroform and raped Hisao before tossing him off the roof, it's u...