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by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:42 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest
Replies: 13
Views: 3971

Re: Prediction: next year Misha, Saki, Rika, & Suzu interest

I'm actually using Keiko as Hideaki's girlfriend in my reunion fic already, so I'm ahead of the game.
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482448

Re: Ask!

Had I known about this in its infancy, I would have leaped at the chance to contribute. It's an interesting thought experiment at the very least. I wonder, though, what were some of your motivations when you first heard about KS? Did you consider it a challenge to write with the disabilities in mind...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109892

Re: Shower Scenes

So is Lilly sighing because the others are being so immature, or is she irritated that she can't see Hisao's boner? Can't it be both? Hmm, she may need to "see" it with her hands, then. I'm way too involved... How did this devolve into a discussion on the etiquette of describing a phallus to the vi...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596636

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 7/12)

That sounds drastic. I think it more likely whomever was once her beau simply couldn't deal with her narcolepsy. I can imagine it being strenuous for an impatient man to constantly pick his girlfriends/lover/wife off the floor and wait for her to awaken. Hisao doesn't seem to have that problem, espe...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:17 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538882

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

ravenlord wrote:When all that you need for cosplay Emi is twin tails and a lemon :P

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Did you cut off your legs for authenticity?

Immersion is the heart of role-play.
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:14 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035432

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

I just want to post this so all the people saying they feel old can maybe feel better:

I'm 31.

08/29/1980

Y'all can stop feeling old.
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369528

Chapter 4 - Subterfuge

Author's Notes: Here begins the day of the Yamaku Festival. Now, since there's a lot going on, it was all originally written out as one chapter, but extended past the 14,000 word mark. Yeah. I broke it somewhere around 45/55 with this being the shorter of the two. It turned out to be a decent split...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Scene 8 - The Original Species (part 1)

Hello again. After an impromptu vacation (heh), I've come back to continue this story. Now, I know what you'll be thinking: "Only 2000 words?" Well, suffice to say I've been distracted. I'm splitting my time between two fics, and the other one has been holding my attention. Still, I did sit down to...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 07, 2012 4:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/6

Second anniversary and they STILL haven't had that ring resized? :-) Things get forgotten sometimes. On my first pass through, it was 3 years. I thought about having it on a chain around her neck, but that might be awkward with one hand. Anyway, nice chapter, but a few times you messed up with the ...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 07, 2012 4:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/6

That's the thing, though; to me, it feels more external than it would in the game. The game never spends any time in her head, though. I had to make it all up. I haven't actually decided how it will be resolved -good or bad- honestly. When I get to the point where it plays out, I'll see how it goes...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 07, 2012 4:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56701

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

Y'know what I just realized? I've had a voice in my head for Jigoro this whole time, but I hadn't realized who it was. Now I know.

J Jonah Jameson
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 07, 2012 4:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/6

Well, Emi being an emotional wreck is internal more than external - like it was in the game. She's still happily bouncing along with Miki and Suzu, but she kinda drops that guard with Rin. The scene in the car is mostly internalized - Rin just kinda reads on her face what she's thinking. She's a lit...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 07, 2012 3:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end, complete) (sex)
Replies: 46
Views: 20176

Re: Hanako, Uninterrupted (post-good end)

Well, I see a bit of a difference between taking someone out for a round of pool and teasing them about having had sex for the first time. Heck, I would have been mortified by the latter when I was that age, but if you think that's about the same - it's your story. I thought Akira's teasing was a l...
by Helbereth
Sat Jul 07, 2012 2:56 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Is KS porn ??
Replies: 62
Views: 23161

Re: Is KS porn ??

I think when a good writer includes a sex scene in a story, it's always to show character - even in fantasy writing like romance novels (as idiotic as that might sound), which KS is not. Honestly, if there's anything in your story that doesn't show character, you can probably omit it, as a general r...