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by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:58 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Can we discuss the rape?
Replies: 64
Views: 16185

Re: Can we discuss the rape?

If you insist on blathering on in a way that makes me look like a mature adult, than(sic) no. We can't discuss it. I love the turn of that phrase. ------------------------- He didn't even struggle or try to argue. It's not like he couldn't have knocked the chair over and gotten away, either. Honest...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Chapter 12 - Morning Tribulations

I finally finished the section I was smashing my face over, and decided to unleash it before I decide to change it again. I'm mirroring the kind of two-part full-day experience I wrote for the Yamaku Festival, though the flow of the day is very different. This is the first half of the day, the othe...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148705

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 7/24

Would you like to live under my desk? I seem to have need of an editor... I don't think I'd fit, but I'll freely provide advice if you ask. EDIT: Edits attended to, thank you very much for being such a dedidacated fan/critic/editor. I've been playing fan/critic/editor for my siblings, classmates, a...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148705

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 7/24

At least this time I'm not waiting for a raid queue... I'll edit this when I finish reading. As a result, in 1848 the two Societies formerly entered a state of war. I believe you meant 'formally'. The loack and door creaked loudly as they opened. The fuck is a 'loack'? Those are all the errors I cou...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/20)
Replies: 97
Views: 43274

Re: Karaoke Night

Adorable little one-shot that was wonderful to read. Shame the nature of it prevents it from being longer, but still a nice read. Hanako... J-Pop... is a HHNNGG! appropriate here? I brought this song up as something Misha would listen to, but I think Hanako singing it would be epic: Namie Amuro - H...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:30 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035481

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

@Pyramid Head Dude, I like your take on things, but could you use the enter key once in a while? Sometimes it's fine, but the wall of text a few posts back left me with a headache. It wasn't even poorly written - just unbroken. I heard this voice as I was reading it: Picard's description. @Ghotihead...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:02 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538906

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

...Burn down your workplace with lemons. It's the only way. I dunno if citric acid is a strong enough oxidising agent... :( Don't think it is. Plus I'd like to still get money :P. Oh, here's another one! I just tried remembering my Chemistry teacher and he looked like a real life version of Mutou u...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 8:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/20)
Replies: 97
Views: 43274

Re: Karaoke Night

That was among the half-dozen songs I though about, but I'm not sure how that would induce so much mirth in everyone - apart from the different appearance of Hisao and the original artists ;-) I think it has to do with the lyrics. Classically, that song is sung by women or gay men unless it's done ...
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 1:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/20)
Replies: 97
Views: 43274

Re: Karaoke Night

Shizune sings in ellipses. It's a hard skill to master.
by Helbereth
Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/22

I did actually finally figure it out, though.

I have some polishing to do, but perhaps tomorrow.
by Helbereth
Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/22

I mentioned I was stuck on a section in the next chapter... Well, I'm jammed on about ten minutes worth of interaction between characters and I've rewritten them... oh... around thirty times so far. I've written everything leading up to it, and most of what happens after, but the little section I'm...
by Helbereth
Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 7/22

I mentioned I was stuck on a section in the next chapter... Well, I'm jammed on about ten minutes worth of interaction between characters and I've rewritten them... oh... around thirty times so far. I've written everything leading up to it, and most of what happens after, but the little section I'm ...
by Helbereth
Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104986

Re: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)

I feel like I should make a new account so I can railroad your story like a boss, point out every meticulous flaw, and stab at your characters with a deadly quill - enough of the praise, where's the pain! Yeah I don't actually think most of that, but the distinct lack of anyone bashing you over the ...
by Helbereth
Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:20 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538906

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

...Burn down your workplace with lemons. It's the only way. I dunno if citric acid is a strong enough oxidising agent... :( Don't think it is. Plus I'd like to still get money :P. Oh, here's another one! I just tried remembering my Chemistry teacher and he looked like a real life version of Mutou u...
by Helbereth
Mon Jul 23, 2012 6:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Familiar (HUGE WIP)
Replies: 23
Views: 6666

Re: Familiar (HUGE WIP)

Brogurt wrote:we're normal and well-adjusted people
that's what's going on here
This is all I have to say about that.