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by ProfAllister
Wed Mar 06, 2013 9:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175491

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 6th March)

Now, of course I feel the need to acknowledge that I'm biased here. It's probably pretty obvious to most people that I'd have such a bias, but it's better to have that out in the clear. Unsurprisingly, I didn't like this. But I'm not going to complain about things like character derailment, the appr...
by ProfAllister
Sat Mar 02, 2013 8:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc
Replies: 108
Views: 22115

Re: Shizune Arc

Cons: - Hardly any choices at all in this arc. Some of the best stores are choice-free. Yeah, it might be a bit off-putting if you're expecting choices, but the lack of choices don't make something bad any more than the presence makes them good. They're a narrative device. One that the author decid...
by ProfAllister
Sun Feb 24, 2013 10:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS After Story: Shizune Edition
Replies: 4
Views: 2117

Re: KS After Story: Shizune Edition

Well, first off, I can guarantee that many people simply won't read it since you posted a link to an outside site. The silly politics and disputes about which sites and communities may be acceptable aside, it's a matter of respect. The general idea around here is that the fanfic is posted directly, ...
by ProfAllister
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:53 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc
Replies: 108
Views: 22115

Re: Shizune Arc

I did not like her arc because it had what I would call filler in it. But it did have some really good high notes too so it is not all bad. Every route had filler... Not to that extreme, almost all I can remember is the unimportant stuff. :( People keep saying stuff like this, and I'm just not seei...
by ProfAllister
Thu Feb 14, 2013 9:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390607

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/3)

I have a girlfriend now. If only I had some idea what that's supposed to mean. There's the physical contact, of course, but Misha's always been casual about that sort of thing. There's less pretense now, but nothing about it seems all that different. We kiss now. That's new. Technically, we shouldn'...
by ProfAllister
Thu Feb 14, 2013 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390607

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/3)

So, yeah. Before I knew it, a month and a half has passed by. Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it. I was only planning on being off schedule for a couple weeks or so, but things have been rather hectic. Fear not! I still have every intention t...
by ProfAllister
Tue Feb 12, 2013 1:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175491

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 12th Feb)

The tricky one for me to catch was Lilly. The girls are as follows: Stanza 1 - Any/All Stanza 2-3 - Hanako Stanza 4-6 - Lilly Stanza 7-10 - Rin Stanza 11-13 - Emi Stanza 14-17 - Shizune Stanza 18-20 - Misha Still trying to digest what my thoughts on this are. Certainly a (semi-)novel approach to try...
by ProfAllister
Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:35 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who's your favorite and least favorite character?
Replies: 135
Views: 30717

Re: Who's your favorite and least favorite character?

Least Favorite - Nomiya after finishing Rin's story (Jigoro was a close second. He's an ass, but he was funny) I have yet to finish Rin's route, but Nomiya seems like a flamboyant nice guy... but since lots of people hate him, I'm guessing he does someting horrible... NO DON"T TELL ME!!! He rapes M...
by ProfAllister
Thu Feb 07, 2013 8:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/20)
Replies: 97
Views: 43274

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas (You Are Here) Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Ho...
by ProfAllister
Sun Feb 03, 2013 1:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Finally giving KS a chance
Replies: 65
Views: 14616

Re: Finally giving KS a chance

You title this thread "giving KS a chance". You then proceed to list each and every possible objection that can come to mind as to why you shouldn't enjoy this. I'm sensing a slight contradiction here. It's a visual novel. Nothing more, nothing less. There are really only two "game" elements involve...
by ProfAllister
Sat Feb 02, 2013 1:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favorite "Does not have a role in the game" girls
Replies: 33
Views: 7562

Re: Favorite "Does not have a role in the game" girls

Kind of surprised you snubbed Aoi and Keiko (i.e. the New Student Council). If you include Miki, there's certainly no reason to cut them off.
by ProfAllister
Tue Jan 22, 2013 9:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596622

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 1/17)

For a few seconds I just stand there, absorbing his words as they sink deeper and right to the heart of me but I. Can’t. I, eyes watering. I manage a nod Even for someone who's always half-asleep, this seems a little garbled and disjointed. Feels like we're making progress again, which is generally...
by ProfAllister
Mon Jan 21, 2013 11:18 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The morality of the girls!
Replies: 32
Views: 11222

Re: The morality of the girls!

And here I was hoping for an actual philosophical discussion of morality and ethics... Pretty sure there was a similar discussion some months ago... Yup. Here. I posted there, but want to see how my opinion has changed since then. First, to define my terms: Alignment is a representation of one's cor...
by ProfAllister
Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

Hate to be criticising on the details so much again, but I guess being detail-oriented is kinda my shtick... Molly is missing both her legs above the knee. It seems a little off-putting to have her roll out of bed and get dressed with nary a mention of the prosthetics. Characterization still seems s...
by ProfAllister
Tue Jan 15, 2013 6:56 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: A thought about Shizune's Path
Replies: 32
Views: 8422

Re: A thought about Shizune's Path

My first thought after reading the above quote was "Well, that doesn't make any sense. Hisao isn't depressed." I still don't think he is, but Shizune certainly thought he was at the start of Act 2 (IIRC?). If Hisao was depressed, that would certainly make the girls' actions justified or even noble,...