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by ProfAllister
Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/24/20)
Replies: 97
Views: 43273

Re: Yet Another One-shot Repository (New Entry 12/25/13)

Karaoke Night 25 Years Later... A Very Student Council Christmas Sharks and Minnows Katawa Shoujo: The Musical! (You Are Here) So She Dances Hokkaido: a Turning Point Where Are They Now? Freaks and Friends Super Happy Funtime Christmas Special Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow Two Halves Make a Ho...
by ProfAllister
Sun Mar 09, 2014 7:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573150

Re: Yamaku Book Club

(I sat out of the MitC discussion because of time constraints and because much of what I had to say, I had already said in the thread.) Not terribly much to add to what's already been said - I'd put this in the category of "KS Fanfic that probably should have been divorced from KS entirely." That's ...
by ProfAllister
Thu Mar 06, 2014 1:27 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

Ohhh, this is nothing, my friend. This thread is still not even to the point of actual name-calling. I'd say we're keeping it more civil than the vast majority of online communities would do. Pat yourself on the back, everyone! I know it's not bad yet, but my experience in coprometeorology indicate...
by ProfAllister
Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

Well, to everyone here, let's try to calm down a little, before this turns into a Category 5 shitstorm. And, though it may be a bit presumptuous since they agree with me, I'd kindly request you (that means everyone) be a tiny bit more respectful to Kutagh and metalangel. It is my understanding that ...
by ProfAllister
Mon Mar 03, 2014 12:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 69474

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Shizune (Complete

I guess I'm gonna need to read each of these sequences to really get a sense of all that's going on. It's reasonably well-written and all, but the narrative (particularly this sequence from Shizune's perspective) strikes me as... wrong. Specifically, I find Shizune's thoughts and actions to be quite...
by ProfAllister
Mon Mar 03, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

I may have to work on my reading for comprehension :) , but I thought I saw this issue discussed, but not this take on it. That Shizune may not have been born deaf, but became deaf around around age six, either through disease or accident. Everybody had been debating about the twelve years of silen...
by ProfAllister
Sun Mar 02, 2014 6:36 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

There's something that Jigoro says during the vacation visit that's been bugging me. For twelve years, Shizune did not even talk to me, even though I had hired multiple tutors and interpreters of all sorts to try to get her to become normal. First weird thing: There's an implication here that at on...
by ProfAllister
Sun Mar 02, 2014 12:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573150

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Didn't it say Takeshi was missing an eye? Now that you mention it, yeah, I do remember the whole pirate eyepatch thing. That's what you get for reading a chapter, typing a response, then chasing after a 9-month-old that likes to pull books off of bookshelves. Rinse and repeat. Except no rinsing. He...
by ProfAllister
Sat Mar 01, 2014 7:47 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 63448

Re: Shizune's route

There have been countless pixels spilled on this subject, here as well as elsewhere. I'd recommend you make use of the search feature to see some of the other discussions, where you're likely to find more than enough hours worth of debate discussing the pros and cons. And, as far as that goes, aroun...
by ProfAllister
Sat Mar 01, 2014 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573150

Re: Yamaku Book Club

As promised, let's look at this with fresh eyes, one chapter at a time: Not going to bother with noting grammatical mistakes and awkward wordings, since this is years old and that kind of stuff is beside the point for the intent of this book club. General This was one of the first fics I read, when ...
by ProfAllister
Fri Feb 28, 2014 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573150

Re: Yamaku Book Club

...and here I was thinking that a thread entitled "Yamaku Book Club" in the "Fanfic" section was a fanfic about the Yamaku Book club. As such, I had filed it away on my list of "To read... eventually." Then someone asked my opinion, so I took a look, and - surprise, surprise - Akio, Lezard, Suzu, an...
by ProfAllister
Mon Feb 24, 2014 6:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Can Shizune read lips?
Replies: 29
Views: 8576

Re: Can Shizune read lips?

It was deliberately left ambiguous. The question is asked, but no answer is given. Why? Because it's not important to the plot. Shizune didn't need to know what was being said to react the way she did. The ambiguity is part of the point. Besides, lip reading isn't easy or reliable. It's a helpful ai...
by ProfAllister
Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Replies: 35
Views: 10392

Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route

Now, I don't want to pile on with all the negativity, but there's some important context here that you should be aware of. There have been many, many, MANY attempts to write Pseudo-routes. There's some disagreement on what exactly constitutes a pseudo route, but, to date, there are precisely TWO com...
by ProfAllister
Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Time Bruises Memories
Replies: 7
Views: 4181

Re: Time Bruises Memories

It's a solid piece. It does a very good job at hinting toward a larger and broader context, leaving all sorts of implications. I also get the sense that this isn't really a letter from Hisao to Iwanako. A lot of people will be happy to see that you've returned, even if it's only for a short snippet ...
by ProfAllister
Thu Feb 13, 2014 7:33 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 291190

Re: Misha's disabillity?

First of all she was sent there as part of a sign language program to help Shizune. That would be an excellent point, if it were supported by anything in the test. It says no such thing (and conflicts quite a bit with the fact that a significant portion of the student body is deaf). Secondly it is ...