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by TheSongofRaven
Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 7179

Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/10

Ahhh, another satisfying story. Keep it up mate. I can't stop read this :D
by TheSongofRaven
Mon Jul 09, 2012 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Salvage [Hanako] Updated/Retooled 7/12
Replies: 47
Views: 7179

Re: Salvage [Hanako] Updated 7/9

Whoa, this post is little bit melodramatic, don't it ? complex conflict and situation. Please, make more story :D I curious what happened to both hisao and hanako
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Jun 17, 2012 10:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Replies: 7
Views: 1272

Re: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)

Thank you for all opinion. Sadly, now i focused myself to looking for a job nowadays. But, i promise i will posting the new concept of this topic soon. Thanks everyone. I never forget you guys opinion.
by TheSongofRaven
Tue Jun 12, 2012 9:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Replies: 7
Views: 1272

Re: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)

Good narrative, but I think you can benefit from a beta writer, as there are numerous points in the work that had quite awkward language in them. Also, I won't be surprised if Hisao dies of a heart attack in the end. :lol: Dead Space can be pretty..stressing. Nah, i keep working on fixing some mist...
by TheSongofRaven
Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)
Replies: 7
Views: 1272

Dead Space : Nakai (sample prologue)

Hello everyone, now i gonna try make a project called "DEAD SPACE : NAKAI" (well, i am inspired by dead space franchise tee-hee) But, since this only sample of the prologue, i want you guy's opinion about this. If this good maybe i try make another part of this project. Here goes the prologue : Make...
by TheSongofRaven
Tue Jun 12, 2012 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa Shoujo Poetry
Replies: 7
Views: 1949

Re: Katawa Shoujo Poetry

That's good touching poem dude. Just post that on Fan Fic section like Kielox say..
by TheSongofRaven
Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:37 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music that makes you think of KS
Replies: 809
Views: 107264

Re: Music.

by TheSongofRaven
Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)
Replies: 103
Views: 25931

Re: The Road of Adulthood (Post Hanako Good End)

If i see about the drinking scene on the last part, remind me to drinking scene at VN Snow Sakura. Hilarious :D
by TheSongofRaven
Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 22738

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

griffon8 wrote:On a long enough timeline, the odds of survival drop to zero. People are going to die eventually.

If it helps, ignore the epilogue. Pretend it ends with their wedding.
i wish i can but curiousity can't be helped then :D
by TheSongofRaven
Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 22738

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Sigh, sad ending after all. Combining Isaac Clarke's dementia and Ezio Auditore's old days situation. Nice writing.
by TheSongofRaven
Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ballad of the Caterpillar
Replies: 7
Views: 1334

Re: Ballad of the Caterpillar

Hanako is the Caterpillar, yes. The Fox is Lilly. Also staring (In order of appearance), the Baku and the Kitten, The Hawk and the Pigeon, and the young man. I have everything planned out for how the story unfolds, if I was writing a story I'd probably be done with it be now, but rhyme and meter ar...
by TheSongofRaven
Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ballad of the Caterpillar
Replies: 7
Views: 1334

Re: Ballad of the Caterpillar

This ballad is about Hanako rite ? Beautiful words....
by TheSongofRaven
Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 22738

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Hope their joy of happiness is keep continued with happy ending :D Can't waiting moar !!
by TheSongofRaven
Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:25 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: When introducing this game to somebody, how do you start
Replies: 66
Views: 7532

Re: When introducing this game to somebody, how do you start

Me : Man, get life with playing KS instead WoW. Try that (later i give link) Le friend : *sigh* okay okay i play it. It's just a simple VN right ? ** 1 day later ** Le friend : Man, did u believe that i stopped playing WoW because your game ? Me : WoW, i don't expect that. How's that happened ? Le f...
by TheSongofRaven
Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!
Replies: 95
Views: 22738

Re: That Guy's Epilogue Emporium!

Ahh, nice second part dude. Keep it up. Your writing is improving now (about emotional thing) :D Can't wait for another part !!