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by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 4683

Reorientation

Chapter 3: Reorientation "Really, I'm disappointed in Mr. Yamamoto. I expected him to at least send a human soul to greet Nakai, not a mon-- er, that is..." Voices. That would be Chiasa, I think. Someone sighs. "I did explain to Mr. Yamamoto that it would have been best to send a human soul, however...
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 4683

Re: Kikai Shoujo

Kikai Shoujo ---> Machine Girl? Or is it Opportunity/Chance Girl? Somehow the former reminded me of 'Kikou Shoujou wa Kizutsukanai', so that definitely peaked my interest... I'm going by the romaji form of 奇怪, meaning weird, strange, or wonderful, depending on context. I got there from Yokai, which...
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 4683

Re: Kikai Shoujo

Elcor wrote:Nicely done, as for the fainting it could be that he wanted to so he did? *shrugs*
You get a cookie.
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 3541

Re: Moonlight Sonata

Elcor wrote:You are a magician of wor.
Man, I loved that game back in the 80's, you know I actually held the top score for two whole weeks at the local Funland Arcade?
Elcor wrote:words.
Oh, wait, now your just being too kind. :oops:
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 4683

Taking a breather

Chapter 2: Taking a breather I'm not sure how long I've been standing here staring at the walls. At least I've had the presence of mind to get dressed. The uniform provided for me fits perfectly, I wonder how they knew my size. I take a few more minutes to try and evaluate how I feel about this unex...
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 4683

Re: Kikai Shoujo

So dead people can have medical emergencies, need an education, and can be forced to work in perpetuity? :? Wow, that's a really shitty afterlife. Hm, all things will be revealed in good time. I expect the girls have also met an untimely demise, or it wouldn't make much sense to use any KS connecti...
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 3541

Re: Moonlight Sonata

FishyBroski wrote:Loved your fics :) Oh and off topic, are you, by chance, an artist of any kind?
My honest answer to that is no, I am not. Thanks for the kind words though.
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]
Replies: 28
Views: 4683

Kikai Shoujo [update 6/11]

Table of Contents Chapter 1: Perchance to Dream (This post) Chapter 2: Taking a Breather Chapter 3: Reorientation Chapter 4: Total Recall/Rec Roomie You are about to enter another dimension. A dimension not only of sight and sound, but of mind. A journey into a wondrous land of imagination. Next st...
by # 2
Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 3541

Re: Moonlight Sonata

These are all three really great little stories! I really enjoyed the first, I love the idea of Shizune keeping something that she enjoys such a closely guarded secret, since she knows she'll never be the best at it. For the second one, I think you did a good job getting across the fear and despair...
by # 2
Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 6731

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Mirage_GSM wrote:I think those were the best ones yet.
They also capture the essence of Haiku best. There is more to it than just counting syllables...
Erm... beginners luck. The most poetry I've done before is dirty lymrics :D
by # 2
Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Stars and Stripes
Replies: 28
Views: 3987

Re: Stars and Stripes

Not my usual choice of subject matter, BUT, the characterizations are interesting and the prose is easy to read. I like short, sweet and to the point.
by # 2
Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 3541

Re: Moonlight Sonata

bradpara wrote:
# 2 wrote:
bradpara wrote:You've made my head canon with both of your stories.

Well done
Head canon? Sorry, I'm not up with the lingo.
It means that as far as I am concerned, your stories are as "real" as the game is.

Thanks for the complement :D
by # 2
Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 3541

Re: Moonlight Sonata

You've made my head canon with both of your stories. Well done Head canon? Sorry, I'm not up with the lingo. ------------ Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious I'm sitting on the school rooftop. It has been a long day, and I yawn. No one has been up here all day. No one but me. "Am I... bored?" I look...
by # 2
Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Haiku for each girl!
Replies: 50
Views: 6731

Re: A Haiku for each girl!

I must have order. Within me, without others, I'll not compromise. -- Silvery moonlight, Your glory I'll never know, Lest my love tells me. -- What is the word for-- No, now it is forgotten, 'Tis lost in the clouds. -- My pain is my own, It's not ever to be shared, Except with you. -- Butterfly in f...
by # 2
Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Moonlight Sonata
Replies: 23
Views: 3541

Re: Moonlight Sonata

I'm not a writer, and I have some difficulty interpreting my thoughts into words. I hope that this captures the scene as it payed out in my mind. I somehow doubt it, but I tried. I know exactly what you mean. It can be really frustrating at times. But that, sir, is a neat and original piece of fict...