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by turbulentDuvet
Fri Jun 08, 2012 8:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family
Replies: 38
Views: 16478

Re: Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

Fuuuu. You! .. Loved it, and the feels <3 I'm a massive scrubs fan, so as soon as Hanako said "where do you think we are?" I was suspicious. But I loves S3ep14 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Screw_Up. A beautiful piece of fanfic, thanks for sharing it. And now to rummage through my DVD collection. ...
by turbulentDuvet
Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 387106

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 6/6)

Once again Mr Lips you have crafted an exceptional installation of your amazing story, thank you for this. I thought that Hisao was going to HHHNNNGGG on the rollercoaster, but I was suspicious after that. . . Then Suzu woke up and. . and . . and. . . manly tears... You really are doing a great job ...
by turbulentDuvet
Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:49 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: "Coda: Of Love & Composition" Visual Novel
Replies: 7
Views: 2844

Re: ~Chord Progression~ (Working Title) Recruitment Thread!

Hey Red_B.

I noticed your project a while ago and have been seeing how you have progressed. I'm involved with an other project but wish you and yoru team all the best wiht what initially seems to be a fascinating concept for a story. Best of luck and see you int he forums :3
by turbulentDuvet
Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:47 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If 4LS Announced DLC...
Replies: 137
Views: 17586

Re: If 4LS Announced DLC...

Breaker deGodot wrote:How can you have a thread about DLC and not mention Saki and Rika?
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by turbulentDuvet
Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which Storyline Did You Like The Best
Replies: 39
Views: 4846

Re: Which Storyline Did You Like The Best

The following is my opinion, I'm not trying to start a 'mai waifu' war, just sharing what I think, on the internet. . . I like the end of Hanako's path as to me it's just the start of their relationship proper. Whereas everything before that was them just going through the motions of what they thoug...
by turbulentDuvet
Tue May 29, 2012 9:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 387106

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/29)

ScissorLips, again your words have had their hypnotic effect and I have found myself wrapped up in Suzus' world, and loving each and every second.

Thanks for an other excellent update, please keep up the lovely work.
by turbulentDuvet
Wed May 23, 2012 4:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4943
Views: 764113

Re: Ask!

Right on to the questions: First, one question to all: it seems that different people have worked on the sections dedicated to the different girls, and yet, Hisao has managed to retain the integrity of his character through all of these sections. Was there one person who specifically shaped Hisao's...
by turbulentDuvet
Fri May 18, 2012 9:03 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2404
Views: 228886

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

When your gf asks who Hanako/ Lilly/ Emi etc are because you said their names in your sleep :?
by turbulentDuvet
Thu May 17, 2012 10:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freefall [Updated, Chapters 7 & 8]
Replies: 25
Views: 5994

Re: Freefall

Ah, more original thoughts <3 I love it and I'm looking foward to your next installment. I think you captured Hanako perfectly ^^
by turbulentDuvet
Thu May 17, 2012 5:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: turbulentDuvet's KS Fanfics <3 [23/9]
Replies: 34
Views: 6004

Re: Seeing things my way,A Fanfic for Lilly fans. (final)

Or you could see how many of those ideas you can fit into the same story! I think even my convoluted throught patterns would pitch a spaz if I tried something like that @w@ Not saying it's a bad idea. . . Hmmm, Shiina TKOs Jigoro, resulting in epic Shizune greatfulness. . . harem scene ensues >:3 A...
by turbulentDuvet
Thu May 17, 2012 5:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: turbulentDuvet's KS Fanfics <3 [23/9]
Replies: 34
Views: 6004

Re: turbulentDuvet's KS Fanfics <3

griffon8 wrote:A nice little Rin story there. Good philosophizing.

That said, you changed tenses a few times and used 'could' when you meant 'cloud' in several places.
Went through with a grammar comb, I think I got it all :/ thanks for letting me know ^^ Really glad that you liked it.
by turbulentDuvet
Wed May 16, 2012 4:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: turbulentDuvet's KS Fanfics <3 [23/9]
Replies: 34
Views: 6004

Toe rings and other things.

Toe Rings and other Things. Hisao rolled over, his thoughts taking on a chaotic pattern as he looks at rin next to him, her apparent attention on one of the ceiling tiles of their atelier, but he knew better. "Are they pretty?" He whispers to her. "Yes. No. They're the same but different again, and...
by turbulentDuvet
Wed May 16, 2012 4:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2700
Views: 275290

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

I love a good stroke, I mean going for a quick pull, I mean I'm quite partial to indoor rowing, especially sprints. I've been trying to train for a team, but rowing for it's own sake whilst no doubt good for my fitness wasn't giving me the tenacity and vitriol to make the kind of improvements that w...
by turbulentDuvet
Wed May 16, 2012 3:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 907
Views: 387106

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 5/16)

Scissorlips, I take my funny hat off to you good sir, for here is an other mastefully rendered tale in-the-making, and I eagerly await more. There have been some excellent fanfics from the girls POV but an arc using the girl as the protagonist is refreshing, and you have handled it so very well. PLE...
by turbulentDuvet
Sat May 12, 2012 3:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 205
Views: 68376

Re: Shower Scenes

Surely the fact that he had a trouser tent, and shizune wore his clothes like a tent could be segued into eachother, baggy trousers and "medium" fit for moar awkwards <3