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Ah, so obscure reference pools are my downfall.

I must remember this for self-publishing purposes.

They expended two Special Forces squads already, so it seems they really want that beast taken down... Well, the squad from the movie Predator was in the area for a completely different reason. The second squad was sent specifcally to take out the alien, though. So you make an excellent point, and ...

Yeah, I remember he personally killed a couple of guys wearing them, aremd with only a pistol... Tesla pistols, not normal ones. A grenade was involved once, too. And one time nearly killed him, and another he had backup from highly trained personnel, plus the machine gun barrel gave them a lucky s...

If you were trying to turn your story around, then this last chapter was a complete U-turn. I think complete U-turn is a bit much, but then again, it's quite clear at this point I have no idea what I'm doing -I write what I like, and pray I'm not the only one who does :). Also, I'm kinda shotgunnin...

Alternative, less serious title: I Need a Weapon! Previous Chapter Part Two: Equipment Late the next morning, Kenji and I received text messages with instructions on where to meet the Good Doctor. Well, the Good Scientist with a Doctorate. Fortunately it was a Saturday, so I was able to leave work s...

Dumanios wrote:The Predator, eh? Well, as long as this is better than Alien vs. Predator, we're good.

I kinda liked that movie, but I can see why it was disliked by the fans. I'll do my best not to disappoint (though you're not setting a terribly high benchmark )

Update within... three hours, folks.

This seems delightfully familar...

Are you perchance a reincarnated Chaucer?

Regardless if you are or not, color me intrigued

The language thing didn't really bother me, but as a historian (albeit nineteenth century US, not Middle Ages) I'm probably not a good benchmark.

I submit this as evidence that the change in direction probably won't be as great as you imply it will be... It's a gradual process. The optimism helps keep me going. As does the fact that I have so much fun writing this series :) Think of it less as a major change in direction, and more a major re...

Hello, boys! I’m BAAAAAAACK!!! Mystery Seven: Hisao and Kenji VS. The Predator! Part One: Prey A year had passed since I, Hisao Nakai, and my best friend, Kenji Setou, had embarked on quite possibly the dumbest bunch of adventures we had ever undertaken, not counting are insane college escapades, mo...

Thanks for the feedback, and for reading :) Well, looks like you specifically want feedback on characterization, so here we go: Henry: Seems to be a bit of a non-entity, to the point where the other characters fall just short of calling him a C-List character themselves. Will: Looks to have been dem...

Very nice

Spooky, touching, and of course, hilarious:

[Did you forget your SS gear at the cleaners?]

THWACK.

Worth it.

Indeed .

You should look into doing weightless squats (but make sure you do them correctly, I used to squat incorrectly and hurt my knee. Then I started doing them correctly and my knees are back up to snuff). When done properly squats strengthen the knees, which counteracts the terrible effects that runnin...

If anyone else has need of it, said person who sent the PM will link the First Episode here:

Chilladins Unite!

dunkelfalke wrote: my poor knees!

I sympathize. I'm pretty sure at least one of my knees is arthritic at this point. I've found starting slow and limping a bit for a couple strides helps work it out. Apparently Newton was right.

I should probably see a doctor at some point, though.

I kind of wish I knew more about Risk... I basically had to take the material as is and not supply any input on the game itself because I've literally never even seen the game board. Given that I don't like RTS games, and they're loosely based on games like Risk, I've always assumed I wouldn't find...