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Dumanios wrote:How about 'our office'?

I haven't introduced Kenji yet in the part, so "our" would be kinda weird. Otherwise I'd just go with that, yeah. I could tinker with it so I could, too.

Hmm...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

I fail at english so bad right now...

Usually you don't. That's why I was so surprised at "I's office"...

encouraging; thank you for that vote of confidence

I and Kenji's office?

Well, I hope there will be more mystery and less shooting in this chapter, but I'm used to my wishes not always coming true... Hmm... "...as I sat grading papers in Kenji Setou and I’s office." Something in this sentence doesn't look odd to you? Sadly, no. Setou's and I's office, perhaps? I can't s...

Here’s how it is: my employment got used up. So, I started writing, and a whole bunch of fan fiction was written. Some of it flush with plotting and characterization; others, not so much. I’m Mr. Hoitash, and I don’t have a day job. You got a job, I can do it. Don’t much care what it is. Mystery Eig...

When you make a weapon for each girl. Emi needs more shotgun (though Lilly with a shotgun would result in more lulz). Misha needs more barrels. And rounds per minute. And explosions. Lilly having a shotgun makes sense. Second the Moar Dakka for Misha (minigun with explosive rounds, anyone?) Questio...

Well, it seemed a bit strange for them to invite Shizune and Hisao to the same restaurant... The idea I think I was going for there was that the same restaurant thing was more Shizune's idea then anyone else's (so she kinda invited herself.) In case Misha needed backup. I might tinker a bit to make...

For certain parts of the world, such as the part I am in right now (the Golden Throne; yep, The God-Emperor celebrates Thanksgiving, go figure) November is a time of being grateful and giving thanks for what you have. If I may, I would like to enter Serious Mode and do such a thing (sets bottle of s...

Moar Soundtrack Previous Chapter http://i1175.photobucket.com/albums/r634/Choitash/HNvsPred.jpg (Credit to CptSalsa for the image, for both it and he are awesome.) Part Five: Worthy I fired three shots and raised my sword in a defensive stance, waiting for the Hunter to attack. He didn’t disappoint...

“Of course I’m ready, dude. I’ve already got my crowbar and everything.” he states.

Epic geek reference FTW

If that isn't fanart already, it will be now. Nice work, once again

Probably would have been even cleverer to slice through Hisao's head... True, but then the trophy would be ruined... You don't usually do headshots to disable the enemy's night vision googles. ...Or the alien missed. Either idea works :) When did Hisao have time to study alien sociology? He saw Ali...

Here, have a soundtrack Previous Chapter Part Four: The Hunt “Holy shit, that motherfucker isn’t playing around!” “I noticed that, Kenji,” I quipped. I switched to thermal vision and noticed the heat residue from the plasma caster firing. I squeezed the trigger on the minigun and braced myself as I...

I'm not completely sure about college... They tend towards a more Western style semester system (Fall/Winter) though there are some trimester institutions (also similar to the West.) The more you know (shooting star.) Oh, and you got a good story here, combined with a different idea, too. nice job ...

Mader Levap wrote:Different indeed. But interesting to read and this is what counts.

Who bets Oracle is Rin? Every oracle in every fantasy story that I know is as clear, unambigious and helpful as Rin on bad day.

But, in the end, they are right. Bioware and Firefly have taught us well in this regard .

Alternative, less serious title: I Need a Hero! Is the song stuck in your head now? Good :twisted: Previous Chapter Part Three: Bait Somehow, Shizune convinced her father to meet the two of us at the warehouse Kenji had somehow acquired for our alien hunt. The power armor and weapons were packed in ...

The Hero Hartmut wrote: I'm sorry to see that it's over, but, man, it was a hell of a ride.

Indeed.

A great story with some great endings, and overall a great read