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I should chime in with my praise, too.

You've done good things with the characters, and the subtext is really nicely done, too.

How many guards does it take to guard a warehouse filled with stolen paintngs of mediocre value? I can buy that number of personnel for secret organizations bent on taking over the world, but the Mafiya is focussed on making money, and this is not cost effective... You're assuming there's only pain...

It's... Diabarnacle.

Sorry, couldn't resist

Nice update; you seem to be foreshadowing future events, and doing a good job of it, as well.

…Hmm, so that’s what happens when you jury-rig a homemade chainsword with a car battery. Fascinating. Um, anyone have an extra ring finger lying around? Previous Chapter Part Four: Shadowing The guards opened fire at the same time we ducked our peeking heads back to return fire blindly and legally b...

Cliché Mafia Writing Powers, activated. Previous Chapter Part Three: Contrast At the risk of sounding like Michael Weston, following someone is a tricky business. The van we were following had black tinted windows, but there were a couple of times when I thought he suspected I was following him –tha...

Only if I collaborated with Banda.

Hmm...

Ah, much better :D. Come to think of it, I think you stated way back in the beggining that this story presumes Hisao went a different route. I'd go look that up, but... I don't feel like it. Hmm, don't believe I did. For arguments sake, let's just say Hisao went with Hanako and they're vacationing ...

Ah, much better .

Come to think of it, I think you stated way back in the beggining that this story presumes Hisao went a different route. I'd go look that up, but... I don't feel like it.

Hilarious! Now I'm wondering if Hisao will appear. Probably. For a split second of a split second, I spot a red convertible speed by, carrying two female figures in hooded jackets, a large bag of clubs, and some guy wearing Ray Bans and a It’s Always Sunny in Philadelphia shirt. You'd think he'd be...

Hilarious! Now I'm wondering if Hisao will appear. I mused the same thing myself. Hilarious as always, but my historian rage has been unleashed: It was founded in 1947 by a visiting German emissary... ...However, to ensure no ill will formed with their Axis ally Do I REALLY need to say what's wrong...

Behold: actual detective work! Clearly I’ve been overcome by temporary insanity. Wait, no, that’s normal for me. Never mind, move along, these aren’t the droids you’re looking for. Previous Chapter Part Two: Pastiche A sane man wouldn’t have taken a job that legally speaking he had no business takin...

Whereas with the Societies, if the police are brought in, its only after the Spec Ops groups and federal agencies have had their fill. So Kenji and Hisao are more afraid of the police than they are of Special Ops groups and federal agencies? Yes, BUT, only on the presumption that A) the feds and ag...

If Kenji or Hisao gets caught meedling, Kenji loses his job and there's a serious chance of charges being brought (interfering with a police investigation and/or obstruction of justice; not sure on the Japanese law code, but those ae the American charges.) And they wouldn't get charged if they were...

“I’m sorry, but that’s really something for the police to handle,” I stated, “we’re not legally allowed to get involved with active criminal cases.” Shooting people and blowing crap up was illegal, too, but that had never stopped us. And they shot back, so there. This just seems wrong to me. They'l...

Huh, weird. Mystery solved, now on to the next great adventure! Thanks for that explanation :) As to the introduction, I like to use it to set up the feeling. Each Mystery is somewhat standalone, whle still part of an over-arcing story. The closest analogue I could come up with is Sandy Mitchell's C...