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I'm actually kind of curious about your timeline too at this point. Not just about the conspiracy stuff, but about how long they've been doing the gun crazy merc ... I mean "detective" business and how long its been since graduation. Okay, here goes what I got so far: Mystery One takes place ten ye...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

the only reason their dead and not me is because of these two.”

Notice anything strange?

Ooh I see it! Their/they're confusion, right?

I'll go fix that now, and thanks for noticing

I secretly d'awwwwwed (heterosexually >_<) at the fact that kenji named his kid (partly) after hisao. I did the same thing with Lilly's daughter and Hanako; rather glad I was able to think that up, too :) I need to think out my timeline of Kenjis’s shift from feminist conspiracy nut to secret socie...

I may be late to the party of realizing how fun writing Miki is, but better late than never, I guess. Previous Chapter Part Three: Conversations The loan shark Miki had borrowed from was close enough I didn’t feel like driving. Kenji argued that more people might be after her, and speed would thus b...

Oh, and great chapter, btw. Although, I wouldn't think of Miki as the kind of person to settle down so quickly Thanks :). As for settling down, after a few years of drinking and brawling, settling down mighta been the safe bet. Also, just a tip, I think you should involve the other characters more ...

Yay, deep characterization. I… think I know how to do that. Someone tried to cut off my internet in an effort to thwart me, but I was able to stop them with a pair of tongs and a cupcake. Previous Chapter Part Two: Exposition Somehow the coffee pot survived the firefight. By the time we had a pot of...

It is the 21st millennium. For more than two decades the Emperor has sat immobile on the Golden Throne of Earth. He is the Carrion Lord of the Imperium for whom a thousand fan fictions are written every day, so that he may never truly die. For in the grim dark future, there is only… Mystery Eleven: ...

I used Robert Frost's A Road Not Taken as my template; that might be what triggered your memory.

Mirage_GSM wrote: I'll probably skip reading the bad end path of this story.

Two roads diverged on a sandy beach
Both decisions in easy reach
Do I choose which path is right?
Or the one of cowardly might?

Sorry, popped into my head while I was running.

The wait was clearly worth it, so good job as usual, man

I think honorifics can add a lot of characterization to a story if done right. Probldm iy it's pretty hard to get right... I'd say it's next to impossible to use them right. Whenever I see them in a story, it feels like somebody didn't finish translating the story into English. Usually it just feel...

I was slightly confused at the transition from day three to day four (The last two chapters).. I had to re-read them a couple of times, but what I understand so far is that they went to the base to verify the information, with hanako, hisao and lilly on a motorcycle. The humvee blew up or something...

Resolution time, folks. Previous Chapter Part Five: Day Four After confirming that the information we had been given was genuine -possibly starting an international incident in the process- I called Miss Sakamoto to give her the good news. This time I was stuck with Miss Sakamoto’s voicemail, so I l...

...I need an English textbook... Actually, in this instance it works, because she's referring specifically to her blind son. He being the thing she was dealt; she must "take" the "thing" that she was dealt, and do her best -raise her son. I got really lucky with that word usage, and I won't even den...

I find it odd that out of all the violence free story ideas I could write, this is what I came up with. Not sure why anymore. My go to excuse is the ghost of Theodore Roosevelt telling me what to do (hence all the large sticks I keep in my closet.) Previous Chapter Part Four: Day Three Of all the th...

They’re penetrating the bureaucracy! Previous Chapter Part Three: Day Two I was surprised when the information only took four weeks to arrive at the office. Kenji left it for me as he ran out of the office just as I arrived one day. He said something about making sure the route to the hospital was a...