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by Hoitash
Sat May 11, 2013 9:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 5/8/13: C.35 - That's Amore

In fact, if anyone is industrious enough to find him, put him under a hot lamp, and make him talk, you could probably preview the next three chapters. Not that I would recommend kidnapping, torture, or bribery, but... I prefer bribery myself :) What I'm saying is; I'm writing so far ahead of my rel...
by Hoitash
Fri May 10, 2013 9:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 5/8/13: C.35 - That's Amore

Y'know, he mentioned that when I sent him the full draft (which was like a week and a half ago), but I didn't quite see it. I still don't. I might be attached to the intent behind the description, though... The fact that I used to live in an area where the pimps dressed like the outfit you describe...
by Hoitash
Thu May 09, 2013 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 5/8/13: C.35 - That's Amore

Y'know, he mentioned that when I sent him the full draft (which was like a week and a half ago), but I didn't quite see it. I still don't. I might be attached to the intent behind the description, though... The fact that I used to live in an area where the pimps dressed like the outfit you describe...
by Hoitash
Thu May 09, 2013 4:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/08/2013: C.35 - That's Amor

Mirage_GSM wrote: Also, usually Hoitash is good at picking those up as well...
Thanks, though I can't help feel that statement is in error.
Hoitash wrote:...Red Mage pimp
Damn, now the picture won't go away ^^°
I know, isn't it awesome? :twisted:
by Hoitash
Thu May 09, 2013 9:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/08/2013: C.35 - That's Amor

Just found one this time: Hisao and me... I should start sending you the pre-release link, because you're the only one who ever notices these. I can't even use the excuse of being a humanities major here... (disembowels self with fountain pen in shame) Good thing I'm a Time Lord. Anyway, I never un...
by Hoitash
Thu May 09, 2013 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo (A H&K:MD Prequel Series

I count four uses of the word 'cafe' within these two sentences. Two of them are fine: "a bookstore café, or any café, really" However, the other two ought to be 'place' and 'room' respectively Edited, thanks; I missed your mad editing skillz :) a security risk do to drug use, This is due for a cha...
by Hoitash
Wed May 08, 2013 8:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo (A H&K:MD Prequel Series

Part Zwei If Lilly was upset at being left in the dark she didn’t show it. Hanako just stared at me blankly, obviously questioning my choice. “It’d be a good experience for him,” I stated, “get him out and rockin’, like a real man.” “Ah,” Lilly said, smiling as she connected the dots on her own, “t...
by Hoitash
Wed May 08, 2013 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo (A H&K:MD Prequel Series

"He who fails to plan is planning to fail." –Winston Churchill Previous Chapter Chapter Two (Hisao): Backstory, Ahoy! Exposition time, it seems. Here’s the short version: The three of us –Lilly, Hanako, and myself, Hisao Nakai- had all become rather fond of the Sendai area. Turned out there were a c...
by Hoitash
Sun May 05, 2013 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 64931

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Side Story #2 Now Up

DanjaDoom wrote:
Hoitash wrote:Dun Dun DUN.

Huzzah, for you have returned!
Seems like I've been "returning" a lot, doesn't it?
Perhaps, but it's a good thing. gives you a chance to wear a cool cap and wear aviator sunglasses all the time :wink:
by Hoitash
Sun May 05, 2013 3:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 43431

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/5)

Well, this is shaping up nicely.

I can understand your desire to avoid a crossover, though as a big K-On!fan myself, I can see the traces of Ritsu's character in your rendition, which is nice, be it intentional or not.
by Hoitash
Sun May 05, 2013 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Chapter 16 Now Up
Replies: 198
Views: 64931

Re: Real (A Suzu/OC Story) Side Story #2 Now Up

Dun Dun DUN.

Huzzah, for you have returned!
by Hoitash
Sat May 04, 2013 10:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597589

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/3]

You know, that coulda gone a helluva lot worse.

A very gripping read, and my mind can't help but wander to the gutter following Akira's last statement.
by Hoitash
Thu May 02, 2013 11:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo (A H&K:MD Prequel Series

Don't shoot me. (your cue to put down the gun you've pointed at me since March break) (Reluctantly sheathes shotgun on back holster.) Now that that's out of the way, I was a bit disappointed that you weren't going to do that thing with the action movies but this is already looking to be a good read...
by Hoitash
Thu May 02, 2013 9:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo (A H&K:MD Prequel Series

Hopefully not too straight. We're here for the insanity after all. Well, if I'm not insane enough, feel free to bop me upside the head :wink: Actually, I'm planning a lot of stuff to happen, so at this point the only thing I can guarantee is whether there be drama, romance, or comedy, something ins...
by Hoitash
Thu May 02, 2013 1:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Updated 05/01/2013 (Chapter 34 posted)

These are the kind of thoughts that would probably keep me out of the really good schools (if I ever decided to attend college). you're a deep thinker about completely random, and to many, inconsequential or inane matters. So the Humanities are definitely up your alley (history, literature, philoso...