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by Hoitash
Wed May 29, 2013 9:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 43431

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

Well, if she's at Yamaku, then she's probably not hanging out with her K-on friends. I don't know K-On that well, but I'm going to assume they never mention having a school for disabled students nearby so any appearance by those characters should probably be limited to special trips trips that the ...
by Hoitash
Wed May 29, 2013 9:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

Huzzah! Victory has been achieved! Onward, Taro, onward to GLORY!

Also:
“I ate some ice cream sandwiches in the shower earlier.”
What.

Your Miki is so freakin' awesome :D.
by Hoitash
Mon May 27, 2013 8:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390650

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

Mader Levap wrote:Is it bad that I already feel disturbed by all of this foreshadowing?... Cryptic comments of Akira, lack of proficiency in gaming apparently significant, even what Misha bought. Half of it is red heering, I bet.
That's what he wants us to think!

...My brain already hurts.
by Hoitash
Sun May 26, 2013 9:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 43431

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/22)

Well, that was an intriguing read. Very nice :)
by Hoitash
Sun May 26, 2013 10:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390650

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 5/26)

Well, that was ominous.

Excellent read, but ominous all the same :)
by Hoitash
Sat May 25, 2013 10:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/22

Hi. 'Ello :D "Do let me know if your insomnia comes back, though, or if anything happens at the concert.” I wondered about that. I removed the comma before though and kept the sentence intact to resemble rambling, which is what most professionals do in my experience. “are you out of your motherfuck...
by Hoitash
Fri May 24, 2013 11:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 5/22/13 ~ C.37 - For Better or Wor

Don't you have those in the US? I'm assuming based on Helbereth's response that that's a no. We don't have them here in Australia either. There's various things that can be used as ID (e.g. vehicular licenses, passport, healthcare card, etc.) but not one single ID card specifically for that purpose...
by Hoitash
Thu May 23, 2013 10:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369540

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 5/22/13 ~ C.37 - For Better or Wor

I just hope the scene isn't prefaced with more hanky-panky. I've grown quite tired of reading it, to be frank. At least its plot related and not superfluous. I blame Aiko, myself. Girl bottled up all that sexual energy and then unleashed it on the poor bastard who fell in love with her. Worse ways ...
by Hoitash
Wed May 22, 2013 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/15

Helbereth wrote:
Hoitash wrote:The auto cleaner function broken, or just unreliable?
The cook-top part, I mean. Gas burners, cast-iron grates, etc..
Ugh, I hate cleaning the stove part. Not a big fan of cleaning in general really, so naturally I'm constantly applying for custodial positions.
by Hoitash
Wed May 22, 2013 4:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/15

and I'll be the first one to agree that writing somber, dramatic scenes is 10x harder than the funny, light sequences. Which might explain both why I prefer writing light and fluffy stuff, and watching it. Though for some reason I still delude myself I can write an epic war series, but that's neith...
by Hoitash
Wed May 22, 2013 1:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/22

The door to the bathroom was just passed my bed past D'Oh! Fixed. his hands dashing over his keyboard as he his eyes were mere centimeters from the screen. Something missing here? Ah, the infamous mind thinking something and hands typing something different as I change my mind mid sentence fiasco. ...
by Hoitash
Wed May 22, 2013 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/15

griffon8 wrote:
Hoitash wrote:“What the fuck, man!?” Kenji snapped, “are you out of your motherfuckin’ mind!”

“You’re my roommate,” I quipped, “I think that question was answered some time ago.”
The perfect summary of their relationship. :D
Indeed :D
by Hoitash
Wed May 22, 2013 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/15

“Now, most hearts couldn’t withstand zis voltage, but I’m fairly certain your heart-” POOF. “What was noise?” “The sound of progress, my friend.” –Medic and Heavy Previous Chapter Chapter Four (Hisao): Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News “Well?” I asked as I slipped on my shirt. Doctor Lorenzo studied ...
by Hoitash
Tue May 21, 2013 7:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597589

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 5/20]

Carighan wrote:I really like this new part. And now that Akira is staying, we can totally get to the part where she gets Hisao smashed and he has to stay over again, right? :D
Now, now, we want him sober this time, so he can fully appreciate a woman with experience.
by Hoitash
Tue May 21, 2013 9:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84587

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/15

To me, it seemed more like Hanako trying to talk herself up in a stereotypical 'tough' way. Over the top, but something she's aware of being over the top. I agree it was a little jarring, but not 'Rin goes into paranoid anti-feminist rant' jarring. :D That sounds like something College Hanako might...