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For what its worth man, I thought they were a hoot and a half :D. I'm with him--they were still good in a totally ridiculous kind of way. Well, it's good to know even my less than perfect entries can be an enjoyable read. Thanks fellas :) Even in failure, there is success :wink:. If even the work d...

I got that you were just trying to make this as absurd as possible and wrap it up, but you could've done it a lot better (for example, Tails gets Trolled went from unintentionally awful to a self-parody about a third of way through, it was amazing). At least it's over. Yeah, I've pretty much establ...

How about: "By Einstein's atomically photogenic tongue, the poor bastard really did need me." Y'know, cast the role of a supreme being as a scientific hero--someone Hisao would admire enough to idolize--like Einstein, Edison, DaVinci, or, more recently, Michio Kaku. Looking at Kaku's wiki page, he'...

...Wait, why are we assuming he married Akira in his fic? Isn't there another Satou sister? Yeah, but I can't imagine Lilly making the guy take her last name. She is too proper for that. It's because Kenji has a hate boner for the blonde feminazi and secretly wants to wife her badly. Even if it mea...

Well, that was awesome. At Kenji's entrance, my shit, it was lost :D. Oh and: “This is for not bringing back Firefly,” Excellent one-liner. Although now I feel bad for Kenji. Guess he can always play cards with Hisao, or something. ...Wait, why are we assuming he married Akira in his fic? Isn't ther...

Umber wrote:
But I wouldn't be surprised if Danja wrote a chapter during a visit to another plane of existence. Jus'sayin.

I kinda presumed he already was .

J/K, no offense meant, man.

Your supreme being of choice help me, the poor bastard really did need me. Broke the fourth wall. Well, he is writing for an audience :wink:. Also, since I've written Hisao as a bit of an agnostic, I couldn't decide to put "God help me if he existed," or "Spirits help me if they were paying attenti...

DanjaDoom wrote:

Helbereth wrote:Are you high, delirious, senile, or just stupid!?

Uh... uh... this is hard! I'm not good a multiple choice!

The mathematicians answer is your friend here; just say "yes."

It's what I do whenever he asks me that .

Ah, I was worried there for a minute.

I hate it when that happens, but in the long run it should work out for the best. Writing, like any craft, takes time to do well, and is often best not rushed.

I could have ended with “what could possibly go wrong?” but that would just be insulting, and Kenji’s way too Genre Savvy to Tempt Fate like that. Kenji couldn't get away with it, I agree; he's not one to tempt fate in such a way. However, Hisao could say it sarcastically, or, in this case, ironica...

Huzzah! Victory has been achieved! Onward, Taro, onward to GLORY! Also: “I ate some ice cream sandwiches in the shower earlier.” What. Your Miki is so freakin' awesome :D. Are we allowed to make a character we write our waifu? Cause I'd totally do that with Miki. I love writing her. I have yet to m...

Having just finished translating the last scene of Emi's path, reading this chapter felt a bit... strange. Anyway, nice dialoge for Emi and Kenji as well as Kenji's antics. I like your Kenji even better than the one in the VN. I probably have an odd take on Kenji as a character, because as an intro...

Well look at that, today’s the one year anniversary of Hisao and Kenji: Master Detectives! Time to celebrate with a kegger and some red velvet cupcakes. And a one shot, I guess. Let’s see if I can do that old noire style writing again, for ‘twas so much fun to write. ‘Scuse me while I post this doin...

Part II: I blushed and focused my eyes on a far-off tree. Kwan had avoided staring at my scars when I was pointed out, and I imagine Emi had mentioned a few things about us beforehand. It was unnerving meeting him on the fly like this, but I was so excited and nervous about the trip, I couldn’t real...

“Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-- I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.” –Robert Frost’s A Road Not Taken Previous Chapter Chapter Five (Hanako): In the Rear With the Gear Friday morning, the first day of the trip, dawned sunny and humid. I dressed appropriately...