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You just couldn't resist, could you? No, I could not :D. I mean, two literary references in one chapter ( Of Mice and Men was the first)? How do I resist that? Got the than, thanks for that. No cow-tipping? What kind of shoddy road-trip is this? The kind when they're in a hurry, unfortunately. I'd ...

Part III: “We’re lost,” Kwan declared half an hour later. I looked up from my book to examine the scenery. We had abandoned the restaurants, hotels, and gas stations of the highway’s exit and found ourselves in what looked like farm land. Fields of grass and various vegetables were spread out as far...

Part II: Emi’s higher brain functions, you will be missed. I expected her to immediately grab the little guy and start snuggling him, and squeezing him, and naming him George, and hopefully not getting shot by Kwan. She had more restraint, though, waiting for the kitten to finish eating. The kitten ...

“The most dangerous thing on the battlefield is a junior officer with a compass and a map.” –General Jenit Sulla Previous Chapter Chapter Seven (Hanako): I Can Haz Kitten? I pulled us into the gas station and eased next to the nearest available pump, triple checking that I had parked with the pump o...

Hmm. I wonder if Hanako could stand meeting the band without fainting from excitement. Hmm...

The greatest possible end to this story is that the concert they're attending is for Dethklok. And they get to meet them backstage. KS+Metalocalypse=Greatest Crossover ever. That might be a bit too much metal for Hanako and Lilly, unfortunately. But otherwise, great work so far. The character inter...

edits. ...I miss your mad editing skillz; thanks for those. I tended to the ones I hadn't gotten to yet, and considered the "et tu" line, but it seemed a little odd coming from Emi. Lilly will toss some Latin at you folks later on, though. Well, now I'm caught up, at least. The shenanigans are just...

Uh, I was taught to place two periods after a space, one after a comma. If ..you ..did ..that ..your ..posts ..would ..look ..really ..strange. 8) Seriously, though, the first thing I do when I get a text to proofread is replace all double blanks with single ones. Repeat if any are found. I'll see ...

Huh. Weird.

On the bright side, you got to use a typewriter, and subtly berate the twenty-something for acting like he's 90 .

Love the quote. It's from The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn , appropriately so, it seems :). It occurred to me as I was reading this that one of the problems with prequels is that you already know who's going to live through the story. But I don't remember any mention of Emi or Kwan before in your...

Draganada wrote:You use the characters in an important english exam! ^^

Sweet, how'd it work out?

“Persons attempting to find a motive in this narrative will be prosecuted; persons attempting to find a moral in it will be banished; persons attempting to find a plot in it will be shot. — BY ORDER OF THE AUTHOR, per G.G., Chief of Ordnance.” —Mark Twain Previous Chapter Chapter Six (Hisao): I’d Pa...

Hideaki really can't catch a break, can he?

The only one on his side is a ghost, and that's usually a bad sign.

(Adjusts monocle theatrically) I say Old Bean, this shall be a most intriguing dinner date to observe .

...And that's the sign I need to go get coffee.

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Well, at least Hisao won't regret getting on the train. Hopefully, anyway.

One thing I've been pondering, but forgot to ask earlier; could Kenta's condition render him impotent? That might be his... pace regarding Yoko, and was something I started pondering.

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I stand by my words of encouragement, in either case. Or their case, in this case.