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I should point out that you have Hoitash to thank for my not referring to Tadao's weight in pounds--I don't think in metric naturally. Neither do I, but fortunately I do know what Mirage is most likely to pick up on and critique (having done almost everything to earn his critical eye myself. Twice ...

Over the past few days I've read all of your stories, and I have to say I've enjoyed them immensely. Thanks, glad you liked them, and thanks for reading :). You are insane. Utterly insane. There is no other word for it. I will not disagree with this sentiment :). Well, eccentric might work, but I t...

“There’s clearly some past trauma affecting her –I know the signs of PTSD; my grandfather was at the Pusan Perimeter- but every time I even think of bringing it up, she clams up, changes the subject, or fucks me until I pass out.” So Kwan's grandfather had a sex change operation? I realize he slips...

“Sen for your thoughts?” Nice bit of historical research, but the Sen doesn't exist anymore since 1954. I know, but I figure the phrase would still be around. Or perhaps Hisao picked it up from an older relative. edits Thanks for those :). Lilly, who still looked like death walking, just with bette...

Part II: I jerked my head towards the entrance, as the girls had entered. Emi was in the front as usual, Hanako carefully guiding Lilly, who still looked like death walking, just with better hair. Hanako was keeping her gaze fixed on the floor, as the restaurant was starting to get crowded. It was E...

“These things happen.” –Emi Ibarazaki (attributed) Previous Chapter Chapter Twelve (Hisao): In the Name of Love At least some of us managed to sleep through the night. After finishing in the bathroom for the morning, I decided to shuffle down to the ground floor and wait for everyone else to group t...

I frowned in thought; she had a point, and it was better to go in with a plan then without. than* /sigh In my defense, I am getting better at catching those, and recognizing when to use the proper word. also, thanks for the edit :). Okay, so I'm all caught up again--I just read the mini-chapter wit...

RedRover wrote:Really liking this so far, keep up the good work

Also, sorry for the extremely generic comment.

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it. See, nothing to worry about, because my response was generic, too. It's the thought that counts .

turning in his voucher and leaving a cash tip Okay, I have a bone to pick with Mirage_GSM. When I wrote a scene in which a tip was left, you pounced on me like a rabid fox, but Hoitash does it and nothing? *shifty eyes* What kind of game are you playing? Woops, I can't believe I forgot that. Variou...

Great couple of chapters. Thanks, glad you liked it :). I thought the conversation between Emi and Hanako was oddly casual considering the two barely know each other, but whatever. Well they did talk a bit back at Yamaku, and in my experience insomnia does strange things to people. It is true, thou...

Helbereth wrote:Was anyone else paying attention to the symbolism of Molly coming out of the closet? I mean, it was part of the scene and fit right into how it played out, but...

I'll go back in my hole now...

I am honestly surprised Aaron didn't make a snarky comment about it, actually. Or Miki for that matter.

“I guess it just never came up as an option. I figured no one would really pay much attention to me, so why try?”

Been there, man. Very nice chapter; you're little group interacts well (and hilariously) .

Mirage_GSM wrote:I try to avoid one-in-a-million-things in my stories if they are not neccessary for the plot. They tend to destroy immersion...

I figured genetics were quirky enough I could get away with it. And there was the inherited angle to fall back on, although that more or less fell through, it seems.

...except maybe Kenji, although he's concerned about his children becoming blind or having a mental disorder of some sort. Ah, I knew there was something I wanted to comment on but forgot. (That's what I get for staying up so late...) You made Lilly's son blind. While the reason for Lilly's blindne...

Since I can't see the problem, I apologize if it doesn't look fixed. Inserting one or two blanks in that line should do the trick. Blank spaces? Alright, I'll give that a shot. They're as good as married; if the law won't recognize it, that's the law's problem I think you referred to them as "the I...