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I guess Hisao's used to Miki's huge... tracts of land at this point to not be distracted by the sexy .

...I'm sorry, I had to say it. I'll go over there, now.

Nice update, but I can't help but wonder how a Kenji/Emi scene would play out.

I especially liked the interplay between Kenji and the girl -- it felt real. So...so far, so good, for me anyway. Thanks; their interaction was pivotal for this chapter to work, so I'm glad it paid off (I know Helbereth put a lot of thought and planning into it, but then again, he does that with ev...

Helbereth wrote:Something tells me this installment made people so uncomfortable that they're afraid to comment...

Yeah, I was afraid of that.

I was going for a major noire feeling with this fic, and I think I succeeded a bit too well.

Y'know, it might be because I'm reading A Farewell to Arms, but you seem to have a bit of a Hemingway influence in your writing, which is kinda cool.

You had a rocky start, but you seem to have worked through it; good job, man. The festival should prove very intriguing.

Part II: The young woman tilted her head at me; apparently I had overwhelmed her a bit. After a few moments I heard a weak, raspy noise that I eventually realized was her speaking, “Are you a cop?” Minami snorted and I glanced at her, chuckling along myself as I answered, “Nope. I’m a writer by trad...

“Oh Lord, save this lost lamb.” –Sariel, The Devil is a Part-Timer! Previous Chapter Chapter Three: Dashed Upon the Rocks I’ve never liked hospitals, though not for the same reasons as most Yamaku graduates; it's because they’re too artificial, and too filled with death and decay. Granted, I’ve expe...

Oh sweet, a new Hoitash-verse story! Consider me subbed. Glad you like it, and thanks for reading :) Come to think of it, I'm not sure how I make sense of your stories sometimes... I think it's mostly guesswork through context. Well, at least I'm good at conveying context :) And, as my Dad says whe...

...Been reading Friedrich Nietzsche? You might wanna lay off him, he gets to you, man .

I need to remember that Firefly references go over your head, as you are not familiar with the show.

I support this fic. Nice writing, no noticeable errors, great concept, and all those good stuff. Subbed! Thanks, I aim to please. And misbehave :wink:. So does Helbereth, from what I've heard, and this recent update marks his return as an in depth editor. If only I could get him to work on that ebo...

Part II: With a heavy sigh, I rubbed my temple and groaned inaudibly; sending me on a paperwork-filled goose chase was the best she could do, it seemed. At least I hadn’t been cut out of the loop completely, but penetrating the bureaucracy takes time, and if there was one thing Jigoro didn't have wh...

“Blessed are the peacemakers: for they shall be called the children of God.” –Matthew 5:9, King James Version Previous Chapter Chapter Two: Jordan’s Stormy Banks Hisao dropped me off a few blocks from the crime scene, and we wished each other luck before he headed off to follow his own objectives. O...

Anyway, Hoitash and I (mostly Hoitash, to be honest) have created a TV Tropes page for Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Now don't be modest; you started the page, I just added bits in when they came to me. You took the step that I felt was impolite for me to make, and for that, I thank you. Hoit...

I gotta say, I liked this one a lot. A bit cheesy, sure, but... I think I have to read more of your continuity. :) The cheesy campy goodness is strong in me, I do not deny this :). Oh, and your Hanako - despite her still present anxieties - is more badass than I will ever be (but in a way that's co...

Y'know I think I may have just glanced over the first chapter--I say that because I don't have a hard copy of it, whereas I've created my own local file to work on the other chapters... That is the case as I recall it. I like to think you were sitting down to revise the first chapter, when Papa Nur...

Woohoo! New content! Can't wait! Is it going to be on a schedule like Road to Tokyo was? Indeed, updates are Thursday to correspond with a Halloween Day Finale! On that, are you planning to send part 6 sometime soon, or am I to be left flapping in the breeze? Thought you might need a break to recov...