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by Hoitash
Tue Dec 17, 2013 1:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/17

bhtooefr wrote:Blood sister?

Did that take on a meaning that is opposite to the one I know?
This aughtta help: Blood Brothers TV tropes link

So kinda? It's not really the proper use of the trope, but it's simpler than saying "as good as sisters" to me, but language and me aren't on the best terms.
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 17, 2013 1:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/10

Part II: Smirking lightly, I quipped, “Noticed the papers?” Soon-hee flushed and nodded, turning her eyes down to look at her orange. “Well, these papers,” I said, taking the stack of printouts and handing them to her, “Is some info my physical therapist friend sent me. It’s a basic rundown of physi...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 17, 2013 1:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/10

Christmas is a comin’ and the geese are getting fat… …I’ve never had geese before. Or is it goose? Now I want duck. Ooh, Chinese food… Um, where was I? Oh, right, shopping for various forms of chocolate cookie stick things. Er, I mean Christmas Special. With my usual nuance and subtlety of Ghal Mara...
by Hoitash
Fri Dec 13, 2013 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 11/26

SpcPotshot wrote: The "Men's" ones are in a blue-ish box, I think, and are dark chocolate. They're awesome with coffee.
There is nothing in this sentence I don't like.
by Hoitash
Fri Dec 13, 2013 11:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 11/26

I don’t know what it is about those blasted cookie sticks, but thank God for the international food isle. Have you had the Korean ones or the "Men's" Pocky? I've had ones with almonds on them. I'm honestly not sure. They're in a red box in the international food aisle. Almond? Hmm, wonder if those ...
by Hoitash
Thu Dec 12, 2013 12:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/10

The editor in me wants to point out flaws as a preface for offering congratulatory platitudes, but there weren't any worthy of note this time, so, job well done! Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah! Thanks :) Still, I do have one issue, though it seems petty; I'm not sure where this story is going. The timing a...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 10, 2013 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/10

Another satisfying update, Why thank you :). with one conclusion. Kenji must secretly be a marsupial- it would be the only rational explanation for having all those pockets :lol: . The climate controlled pocket must simply be his pouch lol Rationality? In my stories? HERESY! More likely his jacket ...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 10, 2013 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 29776

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/10)

Sorry Kenji, I’ve found someone cuter and just a little less insane.
Heh.

How less remains to be seen, it seems.

Interesting story so far. I'm intrigued how it'll play out.
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 10, 2013 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/03

Part II: Caught in mid-sip, Soon-hee gasped and choked. Spitting out the tea in her mouth, her eyes had become brown pools of sheer terror. With a feral yelp she dropped the tea, spilling it over her floor as she ducked down and flung her arms over her head. “It’s getting closer!” she wailed. Barely...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 10, 2013 1:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/03

I have no idea why I chose the book I did for a theme, but let’s just go with it and hope we don’t need a harpoon along the way. Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to go reassert my manliness by watching Kill la Kill while playing Gears of War while drinking Absinthe. While riding a bear. Previous Chap...
by Hoitash
Wed Dec 04, 2013 10:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/03

Their just gets lost in the blur... Wut? Note: I just found this and I cycled backward through the comments before getting to reading... I'll do that... um... well, soon. I think I need more coffee first... Coffee is good, even if I'm not entirely sure what you're referring to (I think.) By blur, I...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 03, 2013 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 11/26

griffon8 wrote:
Hoitash wrote:As she did she slowly slowed her pace so that she was about three paces behind Soon-hee and I.
And another favorite.
...Okay, that's just me being bad at English.

Fixed, and thanks.
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 03, 2013 4:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/03

Lianam wrote:
Hoitash wrote:Now, where did I put the post-it notes...
Did you check under the smoke bombs? :P
D'Oh! That's where they were!

Note made and post-itted to my desk. My final excuse is now gone!

I am so frakked.
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 03, 2013 2:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/03

“You’re transition to the weekly injections?” I guessed. And another of your favorites. Or is that you're? :P It would be your. My confusion stems from forgetting which one is possessive, as opposed to merely a contraction. Their just gets lost in the blur, because I insist on posting these in the ...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 03, 2013 12:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 11/26

Part II: I raised an eyebrow, both concerned and impressed, “You’re that far in already?” Soon-hee looked up from her tea, “Huh?” “That quote,” I said, “Sounds like you’re pretty far along in the story.” “I’m a fast reader,” Soon-hee declared. She sipped her tea silently for a moment, then glanced b...