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by Hoitash
Sat Jan 18, 2014 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390647

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
...This has got to be one of the best trolls in the history of literature.

I salute you, Mr. ProfAllister.

/Salute.
by Hoitash
Thu Jan 02, 2014 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239263

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -22/12/13

You wanted some holiday themed stories? I got one: [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9167#p184374]Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special[/url][/b] – Side Story by [b]Hoitash[/b] (completed, ca. 22,500 words) Just another addition to my vitae. Also, please note that Concrete...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 31, 2013 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 29776

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)

I knew the beginning would be rough (said so in my intro), but I'm glad it's shaping up. I hope to keep impressing you. Well done sticking with it. I really enjoyed the last chapter, especially the banter between Hisao and Miki. You write a surprisingly good Miki....do not do a Miki route, we'd hat...
by Hoitash
Mon Dec 30, 2013 10:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597589

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/25]

UltimateShammer wrote:I have to say, that was a good chapter. You do a good job creating a character that very easily makes you want to slit his throat.
Nah, that's too quick for him :wink:.

I agree that his characterization is well done, and seems clearly thought out to me. Very nice.
by Hoitash
Fri Dec 27, 2013 10:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597589

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/25]

I had an interesting thought. Is it possible Tetsuo had a conversation about the company's future with Mr. Satou in the past himself and a significant factor in his strong desire to work his way up was his assumption that Mr. Satou would expect that and more out of a future son-in-law and if he did...
by Hoitash
Wed Dec 25, 2013 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 215
Views: 95109

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route

Well, this is an interesting read so far. More Miki is always a good thing, imo.

Liking the shift in pov as well.
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- Christmas Eve Update

Yes, a very nice story - even without any Illuminati or aliens :-) Thanks, I'm rather glad of that, myself :). (the massive amounts of therapy she’d need in order to have anything resembling a normal, stable relationship. Now that’s a PTSD trigger I wouldn’t wish on my worst enemy.) Usually I would...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 5:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- Christmas Eve Update

Solistor wrote:You are truly magnificent, my friend. Happy Holiday of Choice to you as well, and may it be grand.
Thanks, and yours as well :)
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 4:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- Christmas Eve Update

Great conclusion to the story. I have to admit I'm curious as to what her experiences at Yamaku will be, but that would end up being another story in and of itself, as well as being entirely unnecessary. Overall, very good story with a well done conclusion. Thanks, glad you and Minion of Chaos like...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 2:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/17

So, Merry Holiday of your Choice, everyone. Some of you expressed doubt how I’d pull this off, so I hope I did an adequate job. The same to you, sir, and thank you for the gift. As others have mentioned, it seemed obvious where this story was going from the beginning, and to be honest I never thoug...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 44873

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Christmas Update

Part II: Mrs. Long sighed, “And you’re just going to stay there over breaks? Henry goes home, Will will be in Canada with us, and Shiina goes home for most breaks. It isn’t right to ask her to stay or for her friend to pay your way –her insistence aside- and you can’t afford to go with her all the t...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My USM One Shot Thread with Summer Update
Replies: 114
Views: 44873

Re: My USM One Shot Thread with Christmas Update

So, let’s follow up that phone call from last year, shall we? This Special takes place sometime after that, but before Christmas itself. It’s 2009 I think, so sometime around the 20th (a Sunday.) Home for the Holidays? –A USM Christmas Special “How did you talk me into this?” Lynda asked Misha. Stan...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/17

Part II: Hanako slowly inhaled, then exhaled. Obviously bracing herself, she repeated the exercise again before speaking, “From when I was eight until I was old enough for high school, I was raised in an orphanage. My scars disturbed people, so I was never adopted. Do they bother you?” Soon-hee shoo...
by Hoitash
Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/17

Christmas Eve is upon us, and with it, the conclusion of my little jaunt into… whatever this was. Enjoyable, hopefully. Previous Chapter Chapter Six: Because One Did Survive “Are you sure this is a good idea?” Hanako asked me, “I don’t want her to feel pressured.” “It should be fine,” I stated, “out...
by Hoitash
Wed Dec 18, 2013 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/17

Mirage_GSM wrote:Same here.
Might I suggest simply changing it to "best friend"?
I felt that term shortchanged the relationship, but in context it's probably the best response.

Sorry for the confusion folks, didn't mean to add to the holiday Chaos.