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Proving that when it comes to writing, my sanity has truly gone to hell in a handcart. Actually, it’s in the Lost and Found of Pray-Harrold at Eastern Michigan University. Never bothered to get it back. Anywho, enjoy what quite possibly may be the weirdest thing I have ever written. Oh, timeline wis...

Hindsight is 20/20, as they say, and I wouldn't hold this against someone making their first foray into long-form fiction, but looking back after almost two years makes me wonder what could have been if Hoitash had started writing USOM now. There at least could have been more lemons. Lemons, maybe....

Afternote: Someone might feel that going through the piece with a fine-toothed editing comb might help with reader accessibility on some level. :) I always wonder if I should go back and edit earlier works. I should probably handle the various errors, at least. It deserves that much, now that I'm s...

I surprisingly found myself getting attached to Kelly, though, and felt really bad for her when Misha rejected her. I liked her, darn it :( Heh, funny you mention that. I had originally planned for Misha to break up with Lynda for Kelly, way before I started writing and was just planning out the st...

Yeah, it's still March 4th here, too. But no worries. Guess as the author of the current/soon-to-be current reading, I better way in before the whiskey kicks in :). Oops, meant weigh in. Guess it's too late. Ah well. I'm impressed, honestly, at how well received the story was when I wrote it and how...

Maybe the reason Miki routes never get completed is because she doesn't seem to have any kind of really complex anxieties or issues and it never feels organic to try and give her any. She seems more like an "action" love interest, the kind of girl Hisao would fall in love with as they were both hid...

DanjaDoom wrote:

Hoitash wrote:Holy crap you're alive!

Huzzah for an update! And for being worth the wait.

Yep! Just took one really long nap.

It's winter, it happens .

Holy crap you're alive!

Huzzah for an update! And for being worth the wait.

Awesome addition! Short and sweet...sorta. Nice to know you're still working on H&K. Twas a good take on Kenji's...eccentrics. Thanks, I got a few more one-shots planned for the next little while, and I might have something for the summer, if I can manage to not bungle it. How's your main project c...

Good to see something new from the incomparable Hoitash. It's rather brief - probably your shortest story ever - but it settles a few important questions, and does so as you'd expect: over scotch, in the office, and in as direct a way as possible. It's a kind of grown-up version of The Manly Picnic...

As short as it was, I actually enjoyed more than most of your other specials. It was straight and to the point, and gave Kenji a backstory(as tragic as it was, it paves the way for his, shall we say, "unique" personality during the game). Overall, I really liked it. I extrapolated a lot from his on...

Part II: I nodded again and slammed my second shot, pouring a third as Kenji continued. “My uncle said she was never the same after the miscarriage. She was always… off, really, but something in her died –sorry, poor word choice- actually I take that back; that’s exactly what happened…. Anyway, we n...

Hi everybody! Did you miss me? You know, I’m not really a fan of this holiday. Not because of the commercialization, but because when you get to a certain place in life, you start to expect things. Well, screw that. The time has come to seize what you want! The time has come to claim what is rightfu...

I've been running despite the weather -I didn't do the couch to 5k, I just run about 5k three times a week. Trying to improve my sprinting and get my time to under 30 minutes (I'm at about 32-33 right now.) -10 Degrees be gummed, I will get my exercise! Rule #1: Cardio. (And it only got that bad twi...

The Doc at the beginning of the VN did say Hisao could live an average lifespan. Considering both medical advancements and regular exercise, I see know reason this can't be the case.