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by Hoitash
Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series

http://bhtooefr.org/images/ks/apostrophedisapproval.png Oh, right, we had this conversation. Sorry 'bout that. I'll just go and fix that.... You know, sometime I'd like to read a fanfic where Shizune is playing risk and doesn't win. That game is more about luck than strategy after all... True, true...
by Hoitash
Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series

Part III: “As I was saying, Tolstoy’s morbidity and darkness appealed to me, so I started looking for more of his work. Finding it in English turned out to be tricky, especially his philosophical writings or a good copy of Anna Karenina , so I decided to learn Russian so I could read it without havi...
by Hoitash
Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichi’s –A USM Summer Series

Part II: Feeling Lynda take a step back as Mr. Hakamichi took a step forward, Misha decided she should be the first to say something, “Hi, Mr. Hakamichi~! Thanks for having us over!” Snapped back to reality by the sound of Misha’s voice, Lynda gulped and bowed, “Hello, I’m Misha’s girlfriend, Lynda ...
by Hoitash
Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update

Alright. Whiskey, check. Leftover prescription pain meds, check. Orchestral fanfare, check . Thank you, Nonon. Let’s do this. LET THE SUMMER FESTIVITIES… COMMENCE! And yuri fans. And fans who prefer my USM stuff to my other writing. And bacon, because bacon is awesome. …Where was I? Oh, right. Time-...
by Hoitash
Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/19)

Serviam wrote:*swearing in Tagalog out of amazement *

This...really takes the cake, holds it like a potato chip, and EATS IT! :D
Thank you, thank you. You're too kind :)

Sounds like I have a Crowning Moment of Heartwarming entry for the Tvtropes page.

Mmm, cake....
by Hoitash
Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/19)

Awww... You need a warning label for diabetic on this chapter^^ I regret nothing :D "...Did you have a nightmare?” “…Yes. How’d you know?” “Saw your sheet on the floor...” How old is Refia supposed to be again? Five. Bear in mind we're talking ADD logic here; she more than likely stumbled over the ...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 19, 2014 12:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

“We have done with Hope and Honour, we are lost to Love and Truth, We are dropping down the ladder rung by rung, And the measure of our torment is the measure of our youth. God help us, for we knew the worst too young!” –Rudyard Kipling’s “Gentlemen-Rankers” Previous Chapter Chapter Four: The Explor...
by Hoitash
Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

Anyways, I don't know if this is the place to ask this, but is there a crossover section in this site? I got an idea for one that I hope I can put to writing soon.:) If it's fanfiction, you can just put it here as long as it abides by the forum rules (which for fanfics are pretty basic; we're a pre...
by Hoitash
Fri Jun 13, 2014 10:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

Just wanna say, huge fan of your work.:D Thanks, and thanks for reading :) Is it odd to say that your entire Master Detective series and Sisterhood are part of my headcanon?xD I think everyone who's a fan of Hanako/Hisao considers Sisterhood headcanon at this point. I know I kept it in mind when wr...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 12, 2014 9:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

Then it should be "the man whom our lives depend on" The way you wrote it they are depending on the (several?) lives of the driver... Maybe hoping that he doesn't run out? Ah, I get it now. Thanks, I took care of it :) “Well, I’m not sure if it’s true or not, but when I asked Mom about it, she said...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

the man whose lives we were depending on. I'm not quite sure, but I think you wanted to say something else... Solid chapter again. GJ. Well, they're lives are in the hands of the cabby's, so I think I got it right. This is me we're talking about, though, so it's probably 50/50 either way. And thank...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 12, 2014 10:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

Part III: Satomi groaned and Akio grinned before turning to me, “She has a point, so how about if I push and you steer it? It’s pretty top heavy and, well….” I glanced at the cart-full of luggage and nodded, “Piled too high for me to see over. Sounds like a plan.” Akio and I walked over to the cart ...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 12, 2014 10:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

Part II: Looking around, I noticed all the signs were in at least English and Filipino, while some of the older ones had faded Spanish on them, and here and there someone had bolted on a section in Arabic. I had read that Japanese was somewhat known in the metro area, but the vast majority of our co...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 12, 2014 10:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

“I came through and I shall return.” -Lieutenant General Douglas MacArthur Previous Chapter Chapter Three: The Traveler’s Tale I never did get airsick, and the flight passed by uneventfully. We reached the Manila airport around mid-afternoon, and once we had landed and the jet stopped moving, I move...
by Hoitash
Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

I'll be honest, I haven't flown in over a decade, and domestic at that (though airline security wasn't quite as insane back then, even though it was '04/'05) so this and the following chapter are heavily based on research rather than experience. But my ears did hurt a lot. My parents say I got a lot...