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by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

I'm not big at all on bondage, though I understand some of the practical reasons they did it( :wink: ) that way. Keeping the noise down and all that. Besides that, it was well done. As for the regular chapter, I enjoyed it. Not too much to say on it, besides Hideaki's(could never remember how to sp...
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 12:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

One thing about the regular part of the story: [Don’t buy him any more of that crap,] Shizune snapped. Lynda blinked in surprise, before realizing Misha was still translating things to keep Shizune up to speed. If she wasn't looking at Shizune she shouldn't notice her "snapping" I figure they're gr...
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

bhtooefr wrote:And, actually, "Hakamichi's" as a possessive is fine (and there is a "Mr. Hakamichi's" in there that's correct), but using it as a plural is the problem. ;)
Force of habit with the plural thing, unfortunately. I think I'm getting the hang of it. Hopefully.
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

Parental Advisory: The Following Chapter has been rated YG-17. This chapter contains Yuri Goodness for readers ages 17 and up. Viewer Discretion is advised. (Which, considering you were supposed to be 18 to download the VN, shouldn’t be a problem.) Then what the hell do you consider YG-18? :eek: It...
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

Part II: “Lycchan~,” Misha piped up, having finished her conversation with Shizune, “Wanna go on a tour of the town after breakfast?” Lynda nodded, “Sure, sounds like a good idea. Is there somewhere we could stop for one of those ice cream crepes?” Misha nodded, [“No problem. They have great parfait...
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

For those of you not interested in girl-on-girl action, here’s a regular chapter so you have something to read this week. For those of you who did enjoy the lesbian sex, consider it a bonus. Previous Chapter Chapter Three: The Day the Bagel Bites Stayed Frozen The next morning, Shizune was reading t...
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

Part II: Even through the gag, Misha’s moan of satisfaction as Lynda’s tongue and lips finally locked on to her waiting and very eager clitoris was loud enough to make both women nervous. It was nowhere near enough to make either woman stop, and Lynda kept up her rapid assault on Misha’s center, giv...
by Hoitash
Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 6/30

Parental Advisory: The Following Chapter has been rated YG-17. This chapter contains Yuri Goodness for readers ages 17 and up. Viewer Discretion is advised. (Which, considering you were supposed to be 18 to download the VN, shouldn’t be a problem.) Now where’d I put those pain meds… Previous Chapter...
by Hoitash
Sun Jun 29, 2014 12:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/26)

Insert preferred road trip music of your choice here. I’m gonna go get noodles. And maybe some duck. Or a pizza…. Or maybe duck pizza? I've had duck tacos at this place in Bismarck. Pretty good, if a bit pricey. Well, they put chicken on a pizza, so sure, why not? Steak's good, too. Especially if y...
by Hoitash
Fri Jun 27, 2014 9:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/26)

I'm sure other people have said this, but I found that looking at Hisao and Kenji's little family through an observer's eyes brings a fresh perspective to the tale. For that I applaud you for this newest chapter and the overall story.:D Thanks :) Coming from a different perspective is one of the in...
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 26, 2014 11:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/26)

Part II: When I could focus, I stepped inside and glanced around. Mrs. Nakai was waiting for me a pace past the door. The building was pretty small, and there were maybe a dozen round tables strewn around the place, and since it was still relatively early for lunch, only a few of them were occupied....
by Hoitash
Thu Jun 26, 2014 11:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/26)

“It's 106 miles to Chicago, we got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses.” “Hit it.” –Elwood and Jake, The Blues Brothers Previous Chapter Chapter Five: The Biker’s Tale It had been a while since I had slept in a closet, and when I finally woke up in ...
by Hoitash
Sun Jun 22, 2014 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series

hyroglyphixs wrote:Always a pleasure to read more works in the USM universe. Great job :D
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it :).
by Hoitash
Sun Jun 22, 2014 10:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/19)

...Refia used the honorific for an older sister to refer to someone who is, if we're gonna roll with this father's best friend as uncle theme, the equivalent of a cousin. Refia used the term out of respect for Soon-hee's age... Actually, using the honorific "Onee-san" for older girls who are not ac...
by Hoitash
Sun Jun 22, 2014 9:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/19)

I look forward to every one of your updates, I'm really enjoying this series. Thanks for reading, glad you're enjoying it :). Refia is Hisao's daughter, no? So I think "Hisao" is correct or it wouldn't make them relatives. Technically you're both correct. The best kind of correct. While Refia IS th...