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by Hoitash
Mon Jul 28, 2014 10:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 7/21

For the glory of the insane sheep packs that roam the streets of Melbourne, or whatever Australia is. I'm kidding of course. Sheep are far too stupid to form any sort of coherent fighting force. Unless their being ridden by hobbits... wait, where was I? Oh. Right. Previous Chapter Chapter Seven: Ash...
by Hoitash
Thu Jul 24, 2014 10:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/24)

Part II: Once again Refia dragged Satomi forward, and me along with her. For someone who was used to being metaphorically leashed, she could be oddly assertive when she wanted. Just another addition to the mystery that was the youngest Nakai. Once we were in front of the mass of coral, Refia stopped...
by Hoitash
Thu Jul 24, 2014 10:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/24)

“Not all those who wander are lost,” –JRR Tolkien, The Lords of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring Previous Chapter Chapter Nine: The Second Daughter’s Tale This may come as a severe shock, but before the trip to Manila I had never been to an aquarium before. I figured the others had been to this...
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 21, 2014 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 7/21

griffon8 wrote:Oh, sure, Mirage can grab the low-hanging fruit, while I have to actually work to find errors.
I'll take that as a compliment, if only to salve my fragile sense of self-worth :wink:.
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 21, 2014 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 7/21

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Hisao nodded, “I agree, both you’re JSL and Japanese.”
I don't need to say more, do I?
...Why the frak do I keep doing that....

Thanks, fixed, and sorry 'bout that.
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 7/21

Do you wanna learn some signing~? Are you tired of this reference~? Okay, bye~… I still prefer Tangled . Huh? Oh, right. Chapter. Oh the second half of this chapter has some minor explicit content, because I'm a lying liar who lies. Previous Chapter Chapter Six: Language Barriers Tuesday afternoon, ...
by Hoitash
Sat Jul 19, 2014 1:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/10)

Since the group had split up, Refia's making sure that Hanako is looking after Refia, and she hasn't wandered off on her own. Miya's just stating that Hanako is still looking after Refia, which she's been doing more or less since they got off the jeepney. Yes, but if don’t understand the use of the...
by Hoitash
Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/10)

Your numbering is off. You have two Chapter Sixes, so the latest is actually Chapter Eight. Huh, now how did that happen. Probably a plot by Tzeentch. Well, thanks for noticing, the forces of Chaos have once again been thwarted by the stalwart defenders of the Imperium of Man. “Mom has Refia, right...
by Hoitash
Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/17)

Serviam wrote:For some reason, I'm imagining the Nakais munching on some balut on their way to the Ocean Park. :D
...There is nothing I could say after seeing that that could not be misconstrued, so I'm just gonna... go... somewhere....
by Hoitash
Thu Jul 17, 2014 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/17)

Ah, just what I need to take my mind off that grimdark story of brythain's. One can only take so much grimdark before they're left sobbing in a corner spooning a bottle of vodka. I mean... uhm... moving on.... (And yes, this is coming from the Warhammer 40K player.) And she should worry about her o...
by Hoitash
Thu Jul 17, 2014 12:35 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 538895

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

KeiichiO wrote:
poopooface wrote:Nice Zuuko avatar.
Thanks, brah.

When you start shipping Hanako with Zuko in your diseased mind...
I smell crossover!

...What, Hanako is Zuko and Lilly is Toph, so you're a third of the way there already.
by Hoitash
Thu Jul 17, 2014 10:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52889

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 7/17)

“'Cause I see you feeling down, I'll be trying to calm and fade it, But you don't wanna turn around, Teenage is so complicated.” –Aimee B.’s “Light Your Heart Up” Previous Chapter Chapter Eight: The Friend’s Tale After a day of shopping and wandering around the city, which ended with Miya taking wha...
by Hoitash
Wed Jul 16, 2014 7:26 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 484974

Re: Recommend a VN

Sunrider: First Arrival recently popped up on steam, its a Sci-Fi themed VN where you command an assault carrier with a squadron of "Battle mechs" its pretty fun, using turn based combat and RPG themed elements to upgrade and travel around but with the story being in the style of a VN. (Animu Mass ...
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 14, 2014 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 7/14

bhtooefr wrote:
“You’re home countries, for a start,” Hideaki replied.

Lynd opened her mouth
This is what I get for making last minute edits.

Thanks, fixed, and sorry about that.
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 14, 2014 12:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37945

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 7/14

Nice chapter. Your Hideaki is a bit different than the one we're used to, but I like him. I don't get the quote, though... Avatar? Thanks, and yes, yes it is. A few minor things: Lynda once again found herself beginning to dose off. "doze" Before she ended up completely giving into sleep,... "in to...