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Hello boys, I’m baaaaaaaaaccccckkkkk! Also, brief explanation: Akira took the job in Scotland to avoid her Dad cockblocking her career, while Lilly stayed for Hanako, ala Blame (which is kinda fun to read, though it gets kinda weird near the climax before normalling out. Also, normalling is now a wo...

You’re parents, I mean.” Your Whoops Short. Sweet. I try. sometimes I succeed. I wish I could play ping pong even half as well as Hee... I'm lucky if I get the ball back across the net once. Satomi was doing most of the work. Soon-hee just passed the ball back. I'm okay at ping-pong. A lousy server...

bhtooefr wrote:Previous chapter:

Kenji’s sausage’s taste the same coming up as they do going down.

Other than the grammar correction, SO not going to touch that one.

...Yeah, me neither.

This chapter:

Winner get’s the rest of the cookies?

Got both of 'em, thanks for that .

“Yes, it makes you cock-a-hoop to be "Rider" to your troop, And branded with a blasted worsted spur, When you envy, O how keenly, one poor Tommy being cleanly Who blacks your boots and sometimes calls you "Sir". –Rudyard Kipling’s “Gentlemen-Rankers” Previous Chapter Chapter Twelve: The Oldest Daugh...

Booze… booze is where you can throw it all away. A weekend being wined and dined by my parents just hammered that home, a few drinks and you’re going way over your calories for the day. Yeah, I make sure to take my drinking into account when I add up calories. This tends to make me hungry, but it b...

This was the best chapter of the story so far, I'd say. Thank you. I am capable of being serious, but tend to balk out of concern of borking it up. Guess I should do it more often :). Mainly, though, I'm posting because this error amused me: Lynda wet out into the hallway Indeed, so she might after...

Dad’s gonna move their too eventually It's not me/I this time. Progress? Here's hoping, though normally I catch those. Lynda snorted and part Hideaki’s head patted? Indeed. It's been an odd weekend. Rest assured that if anything happens to me, I have arranged for Helbereth to receive my hard drive,...

Part II: But Mr. Hakamichi merely smirked and stated, “My grandfather was issued a sword when he received his commission, and felt it prudent to take it over the family heirloom. A wise choice, as it turned out.” “Smart man,” Lynda remarked, though she hadn’t fully understood the reply, she had gott...

The threads of history span all generations and cultures. There’s an anthropological term called coeval that may or may not apply here, but regardless: stop! Chapter Time! Previous Chapter Chapter Nine: The Price of A Mile Shizune and Misha headed into town after dinner, so Hisao and Lynde went to r...

Well, I can see why Hisao lost (or close enough); he kept referring to his meltas by their proper name and used them against infantry. That's the 40k equivalent of breaking a mirror under a ladder in front of black cat. :wink: Well, it's not like there was a lot of vehicles on the board. Killteam h...

Serviam wrote:That music box...it doesn't play that excerpt from Bach's Sarabande, BWV 1010, does it?

More likely a piece of Spanish classical music, or Chinese. Heck, maybe something from the Imperial Era. The possibilities are endless!

Mirage_GSM wrote:

I really need to look that one up.

It's really simple: Just remove the "[person] and" from the sentence and see what's left.
If what's left is "It didn’t take much longer for Miya and I to receive our food,..." then something is wrong.

Ah. I am enlightened.

Thank you

It didn’t take much longer for Miya and I me to receive our food, Guess what I found ;-) I really need to look that one up. Also fixed. Back when you published the first chapter of H&K, MD - who would have thought that a story like this would spring from it... Not me, that's for sure :) I figured I...

Part III: “Noodles!” Refia cried, and started walking towards the vendor. Fortunately Akio was still holding on to her, so he was able to pull her back before someone ran into her or she ran into traffic. “Refia!” Aunt Hana chided, “Think before you walk, remember?” Refia looked over to her mother a...

Part II: Eyeing the brown and blue mottled skin, I took a step to the side and remarked, “There is a sort of majestic quality to it.” Satomi raised an eyebrow at me, “How so?” “Well, it just goes about its business, swimming around, maybe every now and then a diver comes by for some idle company. Mo...