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Four days and no comments? You deserve much more than to be ignored for this chapter. Eh, I've always been a niche writer. Why I shifted to self publishing. Anyway, I really liked this. The way Misha and Lynda interact is positively lovely. Even when Lynda thinks their date is taking place on the s...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

Looks like you had a quiet a match yourself.”

"quite a match"

Whoops, fixed.

I may not have broken doll,

"broken down"?

"Be a". I changed the sentence mid-thought and didn't notice, apparently.

“I'm... here for you as well...” –Hanako Ikezawa Previous Chapter Chapter Sixteen: The Gamer’s Tale After the University we wandered a bit around town before returning to the suite. I called Maiko again to bring her up to speed. After dinner in the suite, Uncle Hisao and Kenji headed back into town ...

I will go on this date, but in exchange, I shall, at some point in the future, ask you for a favor. And you, being the respectable businessman you are, with your hat in your hand, shall respond. …Okay, that didn’t play out right. Just go watch The Godfather (preferably after reading this :wink:) Pre...

I really enjoy the little hints to various noodle incidents you include. Verisimilitude is my friend, even if I can't spell it. resent location in the 1920’s Dates are not possessives. Noted. Built in the 1920’s as part of the move Still aren’t. ...You sure? Darn; I hate it when the fabric of reali...

“History is a relentless master. It has no present, only the past rushing into the future. To try to hold fast is to be swept aside.” –John F. Kennedy Previous Chapter Chapter Fifteen: The Father’s Tale “I can’t believe we came to another country just to look at a school,” Satomi griped. “But it’s s...

It has been a wile since I found myself frequenting these forums and few hours ago I thought that I might catch some sleep. Then I thought that a few more minutes wouldn't hurt and I remembered that this place exists. So I found myself here and came across this in those "few minutes." Now I am here...

“Does Lynda not like being outdressed or something?” Akira asked. “I believe it’s more that she’s worried she’ll be an inadequate date,” Lilly remarked after Shizune had relayed what she had said to the others. Wait... Akira asks something, and Shizune has to translate it for Lilly to understand???...

bhtooefr wrote: The date's the same night, so "that night" comes off oddly, when "tonight" would work.

Hmm, good point. Thanks, that does work better, I think.

Vempele wrote: hangar
1. A shed or shelter.
2. Any relatively wide structure used for housing airplanes or airships.
(You probably meant 'hanger')

Indeed I did. Thanks for that

Because the amount of effort put into the preparation of a date can often be directly proportional to said date’s results. Huh, coulda been a Chemist, too. Although I’d probably of ended up on a black list somewhere for all the alleged explosions and fires. Anyway… Previous Chapter Chapter Twelve: S...

Mirage_GSM wrote:...and now it's not a noodle incident anymore...

Well, I didn't say anything that hadn't already been said by the characters, so they de-noodled it a while ago, and I just gathered the pieces together

And the whole story is still a mystery, naturally.

Im at mistery 4, whats that kyoto he keeps talking about? The Kyoto Incident (or as I like to think of it, the Great Kyoto Caper) was a case that occurred prior to the beginning of this series. It's a Noodle Incident I never wrote out, and I'm not sure I ever will, but basically Kenji managed to ge...

It was exciting enough. I liked it. I aim to please. If I can make something as mundane as fishing entertaining, then I am a true craftsman. Now if I could just get my homemade flamethrowers to stop exploding.... He was ended up so deep in thought he almost missed his line trying swim away from him...

Mirage_GSM wrote:If he didn't say it, why is he apologizing in the next line?

For causing Soon-hee to remember.