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by Hoitash
Thu Oct 02, 2014 11:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52888

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update

“Family means no one gets left behind or forgotten.” -David Ogden Stiers Previous Chapter Chapter Eighteen: The Orphan’s Tale Sunday morning was a flurry of activity as everyone packed up and prepared to leave. Kenji and Aunt Hana made a quick breakfast while Uncle Hisao and Miya helped the kids fin...
by Hoitash
Thu Oct 02, 2014 10:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!
Replies: 49
Views: 17875

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang Halloween Spe

Serviam wrote:This is probably before the Manila Tales, isn't it?
Indeed. Manila Tales is set in late July of 2024. This is set in December of 2020.
by Hoitash
Wed Oct 01, 2014 12:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!
Replies: 49
Views: 17875

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang Halloween Spe

All that reminiscing at the beginning has a few jumbled tenses, but nothing major. , but, then, You know I'm a fan of commas, but this might be a bit much ^^ That does seem a bit excessive. trepidation seemed to relax out of everyone's shoulders. I don't think trepidation can do that. I'm not sure ...
by Hoitash
Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!
Replies: 49
Views: 17875

Re: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang Halloween Spe

Part Boo (er, II): The twins popped back in and announced, “They’re already here!” “Good,” I said. Setting Refia down, I added, “Then I don’t have to worry about you two catching a cold for not thinking.” “Sorry,” Chise said. “We just really miss them,” Carry added. “I do, too, but I have enough sen...
by Hoitash
Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!
Replies: 49
Views: 17875

Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang 10/31 Finale!

So the time is lost to deride For a Special on All Hallows Eve, And I hope you enjoy the ride. But if not, don’t blame me, Just blame my friends on the Other Side :wink: Hisao and Akira(?!): Walla Walla Bing Bang! Table of Contents Calm Before the Fall (this post) Part II The Looming Storm Part II T...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 30, 2014 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/29

griffon8 wrote:
Hoitash wrote:Even though the summer air was slightly cooler at night, it still humid, and beads of sweat formed on their bodies, clinging to their clothes and hair.
Is this a result of correcting what Mirage pointed out, or did he miss this one?
Correction related error. Ironic. And fixed.
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/29

Yes, I am aware of the second meaning of "ordinance"... What I wasn't aware of is that there are places that have regulation for how much light you can have on in the evenings^^° And people say Germany has too many regulations... Here, as long as you're not pointing skybeams or laserpointers at air...
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 29, 2014 1:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/29

The summer air was slightly cooler than the day... And at night it's colder than outside? ;-) Whoops, tended to. and avoid violating lighting ordinances. What's that supposed to mean? I imagine either the town itself or the local authority (town watch, subdivision association, the rest of the rich ...
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 29, 2014 10:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/29

Previous Chapter Chapter Fifteen: A Night Amongst the Lights The Satou sisters stayed for dinner and afterward, taking advantage of their long weekend to catch up with their extended relatives as best they could. Some were happier with this idea than others, although Lilly and Shizune had managed t...
by Hoitash
Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52888

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/25)

Serviam wrote:The end is nigh, the end is nigh.
All things meet their end, and for this I sigh.
Good works come in great doses;
A new chapter opens just as this one closes.


- An Ice Cream Koan describing how I liked this series.
Very nice. I approve :)
by Hoitash
Thu Sep 25, 2014 6:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52888

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/25)

“The beggarly question of parentage--what is it, after all? What does it matter, when you come to think of it, whether a child is yours by blood or not?” –Thomas Hardy Previous Chapter Chapter Seventeen: The Detective’s Tale Nothing was really planned for Saturday, the last day before we flew back t...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 23, 2014 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/22

No one will get that reference.... Is there a specific "cement sandals" reference, or is the cement just for the weight, dear? They're for the weight. The reference was to the Ed McMahon quote. The places I go, sometimes they'll ask if you want it medium well or well. That, or just assuming well, i...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 23, 2014 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52888

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 9/18)

I was worried they’d keep me at a distant, but they accepted me pretty much right away. Where was she worried about being kept? That woulda been off-screen, as I haven't yet written anything involving Soon-hee's time at Yamaku (not counting the first half of Chapter One.) I nodded, “I enjoy it, and...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 23, 2014 8:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/22

and you’re gonna make me where cement sandals at the bottom of the ocean.” This took me a few seconds to figure out, but I think you meant "wear" Whoops. You are correct, Sir! No one will get that reference.... Her laughter turned into a harsh cough, Lung cancer. Early stages. Calling it now. If wh...
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 112
Views: 37943

Re: Meet the Hakamichis –A USM Summer Series Updated 9/22

This is the third to last chapter, for the curious. Previous Chapter Chapter Fourteen: Swimming with the Suits Friday afternoon in town was a normal occurrence for Lynda, regardless of the continent she happened to be on at the time. The lunch with Akira was new, though. With the exception of Mr. Ha...