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- Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 6/12)
[School Festival Mural, 2007, Rin Nomura] Her name is Tezuka. She got married. There was a boy. a blind boy. In the art club. See Chapter Eight of Master Detectives. I added a nee to avoid further confusion (knew I shoulda kept that in.) with brown hair a bit passed her shoulders, past Whoops, fixe...
- Fri Jun 12, 2015 11:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 6/12)
Now that Operation: Cameo is complete, lets meet some of the of the asylum inmates. I mean students. Although I still maintain the only difference between a prison and a high school is that high schoolers use chocolate for currency instead of cigarettes. Usually. Previous Chapter Chapter Three: Soon...
- Fri Jun 12, 2015 11:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 6/05)
Soon-hee Kim is descended from Korean war laborers and was the sex slave of a gang of thugs for four years before a Predator wiped them out and she survived the crossfire by hiding in a closet and was pseudo-adopted by Kenji. It's probably best that you don't mention most of this in the mainstory i...
- Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 6/05)
various edits Whoops, thanks for those. and yes, it's the first trimester. Cherry blossoms are no doubt floating in the breeze in cliche anime fashion throughout the entire scene. Even the indoor parts, because that's how I roll :) “Has your allergy been acting up recently?” Remind me again what sh...
- Fri Jun 05, 2015 10:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 6/05)
Part Two: There’s a knock at the door and I jump and yelp, which make the Nurse start. The door opens and a female nurse bolts inside. She has short black hair and is a few centimeters taller than me, with a slender frame and sharp eyes. “Everything okay?” she asks. “Just fine,” the Nurse says, grin...
- Fri Jun 05, 2015 10:29 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story (Updated 6/05)
Well, this appointment aughtta go well. Previous Chapter Chapter Two: Hello, Nurse As Miya’s car disappears down the hill, making me look away or face the daunting –though admittedly beautiful- vista, I turn around toward the iron gates of Yamaku Academy, looming both invitingly and ominously. Well,...
- Fri May 29, 2015 5:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story
Well, count me among those from the first group :-) Since this is set before the Manila chapters I doubt Soon Hee will do any serious monster hunting in this one, but, hey, who knows... Knew'd you'd like this :) The room description in the beginning is inexplicably past tense. Whoops. Fixed, I thin...
- Fri May 29, 2015 9:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
Re: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story
Part Two: By the time Kenji and I reach the gate, Miya’s waiting, her tripod set up and a camera mounted in place. Students and parents heading through the gate are already shuffling to the sides to give her room for her picture, and to the side a couple parents are holding cameras of their own, wai...
- Fri May 29, 2015 9:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 83
- Views: 32793
The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Conclusion Update!
There are some who hoped for it… There are some who desired it… There are the vast majority of you who aren't too fussed any which way… But… it… is… here… The First Week –A Soon-hee Story Table of Contents Chapter One (this post): Moving In Part Two Our favorite resident has come to Yamaku! What co...
- Sat May 09, 2015 9:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75379
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Valentine's Day Up
Okay, admit it, you were just TRYING to get me attention with all the oddball stuff. Still, I really don't have a lot of feedback for the stuff. Most of it's pretty good. Thanks, I do what I can :). I'm not normally one to point out typos but this one from the St Pat's day story (part six) … “Aaaaa...
- Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 74882
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/6/15] Update*
Ooooh, there's someone I haven't seen around in a while. :wink: There's been a recent shortage of werewolves, witches and aliens in the forum... Probably because Hisao and Kenji killed them all :). Molly seems like the type to enjoy a good sci-fi adventure, though. I imagine that's part of why she ...
- Tue Apr 07, 2015 11:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 74882
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/6/15] Update*
Ahh see, well I can't say I never learnt anything on the forums ey? Although I imagine that you'll see that mistake again. (I'll try though) Yeah, I still make the same mistakes sometimes, despite three years on the forums and ten years writing in general. Having an editor helps. A lot. Also going ...
- Sun Feb 15, 2015 12:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75379
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Valentine's Day Up
Move your apostrophe, then. Right now, the heads are plural, yes, but the sister is singular. Moving the apostrophe one character to the right makes the sisters also plural, while maintaining it as a possessive. Ah, thanks for that. There is a grammar guide on my amazon wish list, honest. Somewhere...
- Sun Feb 15, 2015 10:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75379
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Valentine's Day Up
“You’re left,” he replied. You know, this means something other than what you presumably meant it to... Son of a... you know, I knew I'd missed something. Now I know what :) Stupid English language... “I swear on my sister’s heads I’ve only said it to you, and if I lie, may they go bald,” he ripost...
- Sat Feb 14, 2015 12:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75379
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Valentine's Day Up
You know, sometimes you just wanna write about a blond Amazon falling in love with a Canadian. I also feel the need to toss in a PSA, just in case. So consider me mentioning it the PSA itself. Now on with the show! Push the button, Frank. First Meetings –A Valentine’s Day Special As first meetings g...