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Since Suzu said it herself, I feel more justified in saying that she is, in fact, a bitch. No one can convince me otherwise. It doesn't help I HATE the friends with benefits relationship. Also, did Molly kill someone? It sounded like she killed the guy who her mother was cheating on her father with...

Well that was depressing (in a good way, if that makes sense.) Everyone except Hisao seems to come across as a complete jerk, but I guess that's hormones for you. I hope Molly doesn't expect anyone to take her side in an argument against Emi, because Molly's side seems to boil down to "we can't so y...

And now, the obligatory library scene. At least Soon-hee won’t get lost in it. Previous Chapter Chapter Seven: Long Live Dewey I do manage to get to class in time, with my shoes on, which is kind of ironic in a weird way. Speaking of weird, the science teacher, Mutou-sensei, creeps me out a bit. It’...

I have rat-like navigational skills when it comes to halls and corridors It took me a while to process that one, but it was good :-) Thank you :). edits Thanks. Stupid there.... Remind me again of her problem with scars? She didn't mind Hanako's. Well, Soon-hee used to... "live" with a violent gang...

Research, don’t fail me now… wait, why is it glowing… No… NO! PUT THE COOKIE DOWN! …Stupid monkey. Now I need a new lab assistant. Anyway, chapter time: Previous Chapter Chapter Six: A Few Good Men One of the benefits of preferring the indoors is that I have rat-like navigational skills when it come...

My name is Nozomi Hoshizora-sensei You don't usually use honorifics in your stories, so this is a terrible place to start :-) There is actually a point to doing so in this story that may or not become apparent as the chapters go on. who probably should of retired should have retired Ah, thanks for ...

Yay, high school. Whiny freshmen, terrible food, horribly written history textbooks… And people wonder why I don’t get my teaching certificate…. Previous Chapter Chapter Five: Welcome to the Jungle Okay, you can do this. It’s just a matter of scale. This class is about four times the size of the one...

Serviam wrote:Hanako baking a chocolate cake for Father's Day...

Sneaky... You, Hoitash, are very amusing.

Thank you, I try. Occasionally I succeed .

Alpacalypse wrote:It's adorable!

I do like your cast of characters, they're great! I especially liked that little bit at the end where the kids start bickering.

Nice work, Hoitash!

Thanks, adorable was one of the things I was shooting for, so I'm glad I got it

For Father’s Day I wanted to do something fluffy and happy, so I did. Because I can. Push the button, Illya. Full Circle –A Father’s Day Special Hi! I’m Refia, Hisao and Hanako’s daughter! I have a really great Father’s Day present for Daddy, so I’m gonna tell you about it. (I did the proofreading a...

It's more aour use of pronouns: The way you wrote it, Hanako asked Son-Hee if Son Hee's scars bothered Hanako, and Son-Hee told Hanako that Son-Hee's scars don't bother Hanako. You can leave the "that" out if you want. Ah, right, my continued failing at basic reading comprehension :) Think I got it...

It's more aour use of pronouns: The way you wrote it, Hanako asked Son-Hee if Son Hee's scars bothered Hanako, and Son-Hee told Hanako that Son-Hee's scars don't bother Hanako. You can leave the "that" out if you want. Ah, right, my continued failing at basic reading comprehension :) Think I got it...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

She asked me if my scars bothered her, and I told her they didn’t.

Something's not right there.
Everything else is very good as usual.

I think I was missing a that, so I threw one in.

And thanks

Who’s up for a heartfelt speech? Too bad, you’re getting one anyway. I am the wordsmith, you are my pawns. Dance, my pawns, dance the dance of readers enthralled by my… Ahem. Sorry, I’ve been reading some weird books with funny squiggles in my efforts to find a more meaningful career. Anywho: Previo...

She got married. There was a boy. a blind boy. In the art club. See Chapter Eight of Master Detectives. Well, if the plaque was placed in 2007 she was still named Tezuka. No big deal either way. That was when the mural was made. I'll go cajigure things a bit some more to make it clearer (unlike thi...