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Xden wrote: I'm familiar with the quote you are thinking of. It's pretty profound. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e67mIPR6ryA

Huh, I thought it was a reference to Mike Nelson on Mystery Science Theater 3,000 twang.

Revvy wrote:[

It's a university fanfic, so obviously there will be some, I hope to have elements and parts in the story that will appeal to everyone

Yay!

Off topic: your avatar causes me to desire both scotch and a pop tart.

Revvy wrote: Also Don't worry, I know how this is ending, it's not going to be lot's of silly teen humour every chapter

Aww...

There'll be some teen humor, right?

Sorry, I'm easily amused.

Sgt_Frog wrote:While I do greatly enjoy the idea that Hanako uses boxing as a sort of outlet, as a way to vent, her loud taunting of Miki after knocking her on her ass seems very OOC.

You know, I want to think that as well, but, at the same time, I think it's my favorite part of the fic.

I liked the story a lot. I felt the epilouge was slightly anti-climatic, almost cliche (after all, doesn't everyone propose at the end?), but just the same, I liked the story a lot, and the fact that you finished it earns you a big round of applause. CONGRATS! /bows graciously to applause. As I sai...

Hopefully, I'll have the presence of mind to remember my review and critique... I look forward to it. I knew my pacing was lackluster, but I'm glad it didn't detract too much from the overall story. I feel the need to point out that the Flanderization is in part intentional, but you probably knew t...

Well, my curiosity is piqued, despite the use of a bad ending, which are things I tend to avoid.

So definately interested where this going.

Total Destruction wrote:
'Grats!

Thanks, /bows.

Hope you feel that way in five chapters .

Mirage_GSM wrote: But flying to Japan three times a year has to cost a pretty penny

I'm imagining parental and Shizune aid in that regard.

I could see them moving to Japan and Shizune has a bill for babysiitng for the next decade.

Doomish wrote:This story was awesome and you should feel awesome for seeing it through to the end.

Thanks , and I do, but, as with any finished project, I can't help but be a little sad that it's over.

Spece Mureens! Someboday get da Boss! (If I don’t have anything pertinent to say, I’m gonna say random stuff in Orkish in preparation for my imagined digital radio show.) Previous Chapter Part Six: Retrieval The guy in power armor had a big red cross on his chest, which I just noticed as he pointed ...

Posted early as promised. Yes, another epilogue that takes place several years after the main story. If this epilogue offends or upsets you, I apologize. Unless it’s because you’re a bigot, then you get da drillz :wink: Previous Chapter Epilogue: Happily Ever After (Finally) Three Years Later… Lynda...

This is NOT the end. But it is coming. Resolution of conflict implies as much, and I do not intend to disappoint the conventions of the writing profession. Except when I want to :wink: Also, sorry for shortness. I try to make up in quality what I lack in quantity. Previous Chapter Chapter Nineteen: ...

Obviously they added the machine gun themselves. It would be insane for 14th century power armor to have a machine gun attached to it. Wouldnt 14th century power armour be insane in the first place? ;) ...That was the joke, yes :) I'm a very sarcastic person by nature. Also apparently slow thinking...

It seems these parts are in the 1k- 1.4k range of words. I’m going for a pulp fiction feel, I guess. The ludicrous plot mighta been a give away there :wink: Previous Chapter Part Five: Complications We managed to avoid getting shot, mostly by shutting the remains of the double doors to provide us de...