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by Hoitash
Tue Jul 17, 2012 10:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148701

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Update 7/17

Errors attended to, thanks for noticing. I'll blame the summer heat and lack of a/c for those.

Although editing early in the morning is probably a bad idea, but I never let that stop me :wink:
by Hoitash
Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148701

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 7/10

…And we’re back folks. This is Mr. Hoitash reminding you: I’m still writing this kooky stuff. Stay classy, KS forum. Mystery Three: Mason-Free Part One: Moving In I set the box of files and folders on the floor of our new office next to the green metal file cabinet. Looking around, I was glad Kenji ...
by Hoitash
Tue Jul 17, 2012 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109888

Re: Shower Scenes

Another hilarious addition, yay!

You know, asking one of the girls for help in the underwear department might've been a good idea. Hey, his heart's had to deal with worse.
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104985

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 7/10

Another note: You mention Catholicism several times. Specifically, that Lynda has enough background to know that explaining Purgatory is a headache, and the heavy (but not explicit?) implications that Kelly was Catholic. Any reason for that? Also, (for likely obvious reasons), Kelly seemed to have ...
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 16, 2012 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 5/08/12)
Replies: 28
Views: 7659

Re: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 16/07/12)

I've noticed the grammar, too. Fortunately mine is so terrible I don't mind it in others :) As long as we're critisizing, you're pacing seems a bit too rapid for me. That's a subjective issue, I'm sure, and all told I very much like what you're doing. Just keep at it, take the constructive criticism...
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 5/08/12)
Replies: 28
Views: 7659

Re: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 16/07/12)

Not the best way to meet the parents.

Damn nice of Mr. Hakamichi not to use his sword, though :)

I see where the drama is now, and it is pleasing to read :)
by Hoitash
Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The United States of Misha (Misha Post Shizune Good End)
Replies: 203
Views: 104985

Re: The United States of Misha Updated 7/10

You call that harsh? HA! You, sir, are clearly a psychic spy- pretty much everything you said I thought while writing the story. So, while accepting your critiscism, I would not be a good acadmeic if I didn't try and defend myself at least partialy (I don't mean to diminish your criticism, because i...
by Hoitash
Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/14

That's at least three stories that have made a reference to Suzu playing Battleship with Death. It's now Fanon . Too bad Bill & Ted did it first. :twisted: Better then the old chess cliche, at least. I prefer poker with Death, myself. I'd face him in Brawl. He doesn't really seem like the kind of g...
by Hoitash
Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 5/08/12)
Replies: 28
Views: 7659

Re: High Times At Yamaku University (UPDATED 15/07/12)

Dr. Robotnik wrote:inb4 Thomas goes there drunk and starts a fight with Shizune and then they and Misha fuck.
I approve of this statement.
by Hoitash
Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). Updated 8/02
Replies: 101
Views: 48099

Re: Five Year Illumination (A Reunion Tale). S7 Updated 7/14

griffon8 wrote:That's at least three stories that have made a reference to Suzu playing Battleship with Death. It's now Fanon. Too bad Bill & Ted did it first. :twisted:
Better then the old chess cliche, at least.

I prefer poker with Death, myself.
by Hoitash
Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Helbereth's Short Shorts
Replies: 28
Views: 18592

Re: My Angel (one-shot)

I inspired someone's writing?

Well, my work here is done... for now (smoke bomb.)

Nice read, glad inspiration struck you and not a nearby frog :)
by Hoitash
Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shower Scenes
Replies: 207
Views: 109888

Re: Shower Scenes

Oh god. Oh god no. I quickly turned around to face the door. If I make it out of this alive, I'm buying baggier pajamas. "So, average size?' Miki whispered a bit too loudly. "Maybe bigger. It's hard to tell in those PJs," Emi replied back, neither of them quite seeming to get the hang of whispering...
by Hoitash
Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 237091

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

...That was...I have no words...

Excellent read, thank you for posting it.
by Hoitash
Fri Jul 13, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS
Replies: 230
Views: 49547

Re: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS

Xanatos wrote:
Xden wrote:
Xanatos wrote:Philosophy is some of the silliest stuff out there. I have little interest in godhood. I simply want immortality.
That picture. wat
I think she's Braveheart. :lol:
They can take our black vanilla tea, but they can never take our FREEDOM!
by Hoitash
Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:37 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS
Replies: 230
Views: 49547

Re: Weird/silly thoughts while playing KS

Someone also did a Deus Ex fanfic on the forum somewhere.