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Into the breach, once more! Into the Breach! WAAAAAGGHHH!!! I need to stop listening to Sabaton metal when I write. Previous Chapter Part Three: Infiltration I didn’t have much time to examine the inside of the sanctuary as I ducked to my right to take cover behind a concrete bench, Kenji right behi...

Helbereth wrote: For shame. You were doing so well.

You saw nothing. Nothing!

(Thanks, btw )

Onward!

Indeed.

Tormound wrote:Excellent work again, keep up the good work.

Thanks , I'll do my best.

Shits goin’ down, someone get tehsmarty! Previous Chapter Part Two: Border Descent As I sat in the back of a cargo plane flying low over the mountains of Thailand in the middle of the night, I made a mental note to beat Kenji to death with a whiskey bottle if we didn’t make it out of this. This was ...

Which is cool if the stories gradually approached that point in time from chapter to chapter, but if all other chapters took place over the course of like one and a half week, a time-skip of more than half a year is probably a bit sudden. True. although it could be done, and it would be an interest...

Although from my research/experience, Slice of Life stories centered around a school tend to end when everyone graduates.

Just my two cents.

There's some off-kilter language use here and there, and a few sentences ending weirdly -some that ought to be hyphenated away from the rest of the text- but the prose is otherwise clean. Yeah, I fiddled with this part a bit more then I probably should have. I needed the clarity the revisions broug...

In 2012, a struggling writer escaped from a minimum security apartment after being convicted of a crime he did commit. This writer now survives as a soldier of fortune. If you have a problem, and if you can find him, maybe you can hire… Mr. Hoitash. Mystery Four: Templar, Templar Part One: The Plan ...

So much talk of templars and secret organizations and nothing on the Assassin Order. Although, maybe im just playing to much games. Anyway great writing, not sure if i want more interactions with the girls from Yamaku or more great action scenes. Decisions, decisions. Why not have both? I intend fo...

Batman Mutou? . A certain Youtube Let's player :coughChilled Chaos:cough: uses a parody voice of the Dark Knight series' Batman when he does Mutou's lines. The more you know. Unfortunately, I never actually played Rin's route , so I can't really compare. Is it similar? As I'll respond to another co...

But any ways I was watching Chilled Chaos' play through of Katawa Shoujo and wanted it. So I got it. True for me also. Probably explains your sheer randomness as well! Yep, same for me too. Then I found this forum by googling "katawa shoujo forum". Chilladin's unite! Also how I learned of this VN- ...

LOL WUT wrote:Hey Hoitash, You Want These Skittles?

Thafts Tho Bafd, I jufst arte tfhem all.

Those were delicious.

Eh, I'll just find Martin Lawrence and ask him for some.

I've been looking for an excuse to start my TV writing career, anyway, and I already have summer Glau living under my desk.

ShadeHaven wrote: Haha, yeah. I think that was my comment.

Sorry, I shoulda looked before posting. I'd delete my post if I could.

Helbereth wrote: They were implied by the timbre of my statement.

Ah, I see. Sorry, then.

Is Hanako going to, at some point, discover that her idiot husband has been gallivanting around the world nearly getting himself killed -by bullets or heart attacks- chasing down heavily armored and fortified secret societies? Maybe. I direct you to this fic's use of past tense and the occupation o...

Because every adventure should end with a meal prepared by a loved one. Warning: Part is short. Please direct all complaints to JWalker@myliquorcabinet.com Seriously, though, thanks for reading and reviewing :). Also note that is a fake email address. Previous Chapter Part Six: Dinner Our dining roo...