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by Hoitash
Mon Sep 17, 2012 10:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Our Little Getaway [New Series 9/16]
Replies: 7
Views: 2762

Re: Our Little Getaway [New Series 9/16]

I believe an "awww" is appropriate here.

I must now go kill a grizzly bear bare-handed to regain my manhood, excuse me.

So, did Lilly go to Scotland? Or did she and Hanako have a falling out? Or is she just not relevant to the story?
by Hoitash
Mon Sep 17, 2012 9:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation
Replies: 208
Views: 71909

Re: Banda's Wonderful Smut Compilation

...

what Shizune said.

I'm gonna go find a Corner of Woe now. Preferably one Mio is using.
by Hoitash
Sun Sep 16, 2012 10:10 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
Replies: 2701
Views: 641281

Re: Emi inspired running/workout

For me, seeing progress made me want to keep going. If you just stick it out for the first couple weeks, then you start to really notice that you can run longer than you could before. It actually works . That's when I got hooked and started looking forward to running. Same. As an introvert, I found...
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 15, 2012 1:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 9/12 Update

Danke, edits made.
griffon8 wrote: You are absolutely insane. And entertaining.
Thank you, sir. /bows

God willing, this is just the beginning :wink:
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 9/12 Update

Mutton chops. That is all. Previous Chapter Part Six: Escape The explosion did the job, as usual, and Kenji shoved the left door open before tossing a couple frag grenades inside. He ducked back when someone started poring fire through the gap. Yep, they definitely had machine guns. The grenades goi...
by Hoitash
Thu Sep 13, 2012 10:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 9/12 Update

Members of Secret Societies are not normal. If they were, they wouldn't be members. Okay, substitute "rational" for "normal" ;-) Okay. Members of Secret Societies are not rational. If they were, they wouldn't be members. Huh, you're right, that does work better :) Seriously, thanks for the feedback...
by Hoitash
Thu Sep 13, 2012 9:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 9/12 Update

While you have an excellent point- or rather, the main problem with this work pinpointed, I feel the need to politiely defend it. Well, try to, at least. By now 80% of your story seems to be Hisao and Kenji shooting at bad guys who fall like flies despite supposedly having had combat training and su...
by Hoitash
Wed Sep 12, 2012 10:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 9/8

You know, looking back on my earlier work, I think my emphasis on the action has degraded the overall quality of my writing. I’ll work on that. Actually, Helbereth is a help with fighting that, but I don’t want to get complacent or take him for granted. We will fight on for action adventure awesomen...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 11, 2012 9:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 9/8

In remembrance, Part Five has been postponed until tomorrow.

Long live the Republic.
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 08, 2012 10:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Our Family Tree (Oneshot)
Replies: 9
Views: 5099

Re: Our Family Tree (Oneshot)

MrDan wrote:I like it, short and quite sweet.
I second this most profusely :)
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 08, 2012 10:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 9/4 Update

If you’re sense of direction is as bad as mine and Hisao’s, the next few parts will probably hurt your brain. Sorry about that. Also sorry if you’re getting overwhelmed, Helbereth- hope everything’s okay. We should join a third world militia for some vacation time. Take over a country; build some sc...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 04, 2012 11:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 9/1

I assume you saw off the stock and handle it like a heavy pistol, cocking it by rolling it around in your hand. My question is why you bother having the sword when you can easily beat someone to death with the shotgun. Well, you're partially right: it's a sawed off semi auto. I'd break my wrist try...
by Hoitash
Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 9/1

Hebereth, if you need someone to bust you out so you can get more sleep, I know a guy who’s handy with a sword and a shotgun. Don’t ask how I handle both at the same time; it’s a trade secret. Previous Chapter Part Three: Infiltration “Incoming enemy shore fire,” Miss Chapelle said. She sounded awfu...
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 01, 2012 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 9/1

Ario wrote:This whole series is one of the best detective [read: ass-kickers who bend the law] stories I've read.
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it :)

Although at this point these two don't so much bend the law as hogtie it and force it into the tool shed.
by Hoitash
Sat Sep 01, 2012 2:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148704

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 9/1

Cripes, I hadn't even gotten to read the last one yet, and here you go posting another chapter. Dammit, man! I only have one brain to use each week, per doctor's orders, so being inundated in this way could lead to my loss of privileges; like sleep. Wonderful, comfortable, restful sleep, sometimes ...