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Helbereth wrote:You should change the 'updated' date to the 27th.

Emperor's bowels, knew I forgot something.

Fixed, and thanks.

Dumanios wrote:And so he goes down fighting...

Indeed, may his tormented soul finally know peace.

...Akira as Kenji's scotch supplier.

I got the idea from an old fic, and figured it made sense for both their characters, so why not?

"I survived because the fire inside burned brighter than the fire around me. I fell down into that dark chasm, but the flame burned on and on." –Joshua Graham, AKA The Burned Man Previous Chapter Part Five: Resolution For almost as long as humans have walked on two legs, we have feared the wolf. The...

Helbereth wrote:

Hoitash wrote:Whoo, finally caught up.

Sorry for being so late to the party; shoulda known if you wrote it, I'd like it

Great work as usual, keep it up, hold the line, etc, etc.

To quote Kenta quoting Bruce Willis; "Welcome to the party, pal!"

Yippee-kai yay

Whoo, finally caught up.

Sorry for being so late to the party; shoulda known if you wrote it, I'd like it

Great work as usual, keep it up, hold the line, etc, etc.

Helbereth wrote:

Hoitash wrote:So no pressure, right

We're screwed!

At least we'll go down fighting *chic-chk*

Okay, it took me a little bit to get caught up on this, but I have to say that it was definitely worth it. To be honest, your narrative and descriptions have a tendency to lumber along, falling into somewhat repetitive sentence structure and dialogue that can come off as clunky. Heh, too much infue...

Another good chapter, and the werewolf isn't too shabby. Thanks on both. I really wanted the wolf to come across as an animal, but at the same time, I wanted the human aspects physically apparent. And of course, creepy as hell :wink: Helbereth helped, of course. Actually, at this point, if I credit...

I like how you worked Rika into the story; it's a neat twist that works well.

You're take on Mika is cute and quirky. I knew I was in trouble when I figured out I liked tomboys

Y'know, it's weird, but I'm actually enjoying rereading the later chapters - the stuff with the wolf. Perhaps because it's been a few weeks, but it's almost like reading it the first time. I've found that, as a writer, if you're happy with what you wrote, you can generally reread it in a enjoyable,...

"He who fights monsters should see to it that he himself does not become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you." - Friedrich Nietzsche, Beyond Good and Evil Previous Chapter Part Four: Ants Against Men Hisao stepped out of the bedroom and stopped, sending h...

I found your series through Tvtropes, and I've been having great fun reading it. YES! I knew that dream would pay off! Thanks for reading and glad you enjoy it :) “Me, too,” Daichi said. I doubt there should be a comma after me. I'm not sure; I think removing the comma would imply faster paced spee...

Total Destruction wrote:Fanart is amazing. Hideaki looks so thrilled to be rocking that skirt.

...I knew Ouran High School Host Club would make me question things...

Why, oh why must you be so awesome, Banda and his artistic fans?

Guest90206 wrote:

Hoitash wrote:C’mon you apes, you wanna live forever!?

<3 u 4evr

Thanks, glad to know the MI's glory is so far reaching

...The Life of Pi movie ad makes you immediately think of Hanako.